Rishbala ss/ff/os - My DREAM PARTNER - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Umm nice update..so rk's younger brother doesnt listen him..thats too sad..waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Nice update..why does he need to think so much..he can as well go to Madhu's place right😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
nice update... so madhu want rk to come to her place.. interesting... but i dmt like dhruv behaviour with his bro and mom...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 8
" So Mr.RK, are you coming? "
Now what should I say her? Man I completely forgot..
Then I thought that if I do not go to her place, so what will I do at my home? I scanned my brain and I saw all boring stuff.

" Ok, I will come.."
Ya, I finally said YES.
" cool! I knew you would not say no!"
Oh really? She really knew? I didn't figure that...
" OK-OK, So on what time I should come? " Its 10:30 right now..
" NOW "
What!? now!? really? I thought to myself. My mind jumbled up and I called her..tring-tring, the bell was ringing..She finally picked up the phone.
M- " IF YOU DONT WANNA COME SO JUST SAY IT! DONT MAKE ME...
R- " HEY HEY! Calm down Madhs! I was just saying that why should I come now?"
M-" Ok so...come at the lunch time.. I mean...12:30?"
R- '' So u inviting meh for lunch?"
M-" Yeah..."
R- " OK I will be there by 12:30..."
M- " Ugh! OK! B-BYE! "
And she cut off...She didn't even gave me a chance to reply a 'goodbye'...
But you guys know what..I like this stupidity about her..
It really suits her...Then I heard a knock at my door.
" Come in "
I said. The door opened and I saw Papa there. I said
" Hi papa! "
" Hi Rishu! "
He said and he sat on my bed, facing me. I just gave him a smile.
" So hows collage going on Rishu? "
" Good papa.."
" Did u make any friends? "
" Ya...hey papa"
" Yes "
" I was just saying that today I am going at Madhs place.."
" Madhs? you mean Madhu? "
" Oh, yeah..."
"Ok..when?"
" 12:30.. I am going to eat lunch there.."
" Good..behave nicely..You know that Malik's are my best friends..."
"yeah papa I know that! "
" Good..good..."
And he left..I took out my headphones and listened to some of my favourite songs.. I was just doing timepass.
Then after a while, I saw my clock. It was 12:00 by now.. I was just seeing the clock but my phone buzzed,
I picked up and I saw Its Parth's call. I picked up..
" Hello? " I said.
" Hey RK! What are you doing? "
" Timepass...why? "
" RK me and my friends are going out for a long drive right now! Do you wanna join us?"
I had to go to Madhu's place...She had invited me so sweetly...I thought to say now to him..
" Uh..."
" Say fast RK! "
" Parth I can't come.. I'm going out somewhere else.."
" Where? "
Oh why is he so curious always? I became frustrated and...,
" I AM GOING AT MADHU's PLACE"
I said...OH WHY DID I SAID HIM MAN! OH RK YOU ARE A BIG IDIOT! I JUST FELT LIKE TO BANG MY HEAD. I came out of my thoughts and I saw silence all around...And I then realised I was talking with Parth..He was not saying anything..
" Ugh...Parth are you there..."
" YA! "
" So I will talk to you later now, I'm not coming.."
" OK! "
" Ok? ya..bye "
And I cut off the phone...I stood up, came near the wall, banged my head thrice...I shouldn't have said him...Then I looked at the clock and it was 12:15..Oh I wasted so muck time talking to that more on...I quickly got ready and took my bike keys and ran off my stares..
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Precap- I went and sat on the dining table..
" Madhs, I am not in mood of eating proper lunch, I will just eat some. "
" Great! "
She said..what was she meaning?
She was coming towards my way with a tray in her hand, and on that tray, There was only a single-big bowl.
She kept it down and Guess what I say..IT WAS NOODELS...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Hey nice update..update soon coz i'm eager to know what'll happen at madhu's home..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice update but idiot rk ko parth ko batane ki kya jarurat thi... and precape is interesting lunch mein sirf noodles...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
hey awesome story dear...i read all updates in one..nice concept..plz add me to ur buddylist and pm me wen u update neat...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome story. really want to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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(PS) Hello! My loyal readers! I just wanted to give u all a important msg! Readers, I am sorry, But I have some very important functions to attend in my family. So I think that I will be updating next updates after 2 or 3 days. I am really sorry. And if this update is short for u all, so please excuse me. Sorry again! And thankyou very much for adjusting with me. This really means a lot to me. Sorry and thankyou. And heres Part 9------------------------------------ PART 9
I drove my bike at Madh's place, finally, I reached there. She also had a big mansion, just like me. I entered the mansion, it was well decorated. And just then, I saw Padmini ji coming towards me. I just gave her a smile.
" Hello Rishu! "
Padimini ji said.
" Hello Padmini ji! "
" Well, Madhu is in the kitchen, just go there..."
She said me the directions and I followed. I was walking but just then I bumped into someone. OH GOD! AGAIN HER! Why god why?!
" Oh...I'm sorry "
TRISHNA said. Ya I bumped into her.
" Well, its ok.. "
And I went from there. I finally reached the kitchen and I saw Madhu cooking something with a maid.
" Hey Madhs! " I said looking at her.
" Oh! Hi RK! Finally you came, please have a seat! She pointed her finger to the dining table which was just in font of the kitchen. I sat there in a position in which I could see her clearly.
" Madhs I'm sorry but I am not in mood of eating proper lunch.."
" Great! " She said. Ugh what was she meaning? Then I saw her coming towards me with a tray in her hand, there was only a big-kinda bowl in it. I was wondering what it would be...
She kept the tray down in front of me, AND GUESS WHAT!!!...
IT WAS NODDLES!
what?! noodles!?
" I have made noodles...On my OWN.." She stretched the word 'own'...So baby, u giving meh NODDLES for lunch? really?I was just looking at that noodles...
" Oh come on! Taste it! IT MY OWN INVENTION!"
She said the last sentence proudly. She quickly took a seat and sat right beside me. But...
" Madhs..."
" Yeah? "
" Uh...can I say you something..."
" Sure! "
" I...don't...like...NOODLES..."
Yes...you herd that right... I don't like noodles...
She quickly stood up, looking at me. And her chin was touching the ground..lol.. She closed her mouth and looked at noodles...I tried to read her face, I read that she was disappointed...I was totally blank at that time..I didn't knew what to do..
" Uh..." She said looking at the noodles..
" Madhs..I'm sorry..."
" Its ok! Its-its totally fine! "
I bet she was giving a fake smile.. She picked up the tray, looking at the noodles..
" Madhs..."
" I'll give them to Trishna or I will eat it on my own..."
She said and she turned, she was just going to leave, I quickly stood up and kept my hand on her shoulder, the next second, she stopped. She looked at my hand which was on her shoulder..
" Madhs, let me taste them " I really don't know why I said that.. She looked up at me and said...
" RK..it ok..."
" Oh comeon Madhs, let me taste them! " I said.
We shared an eye lock for 3/4 seconds. she looked down and turned, went towards the dining table again and kept the noodles and sat there. I also sat there...
I smelled the aroma of the noodles..It was not that bad.. I picked up the fork and started mixing up the noodles.. In the meanwhile, Madhs was just looking at me. Than finally I picked up a spoon-full and it was just in front of my mouth. Madhu was just staring at me. I again read her face and I read that she was being impatient..
" COME ON EAT IT RK DON'T TEST MY PATIENCE!! "
" OK! OK! "
I said and the next second I putted that fork in my mouth and took it out.
I began chewing it..I began tasting it...
The noodles were spicy, but I don't eat spicy much.
The noodles were having a different kinda taste..
And...
You all know what...
ITS DELICIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I again picked up a spoon full and ate it .. I did this 2/3 times more and...
'' RK, ARE YOU GONNA TELL MEH THAT YOU LIKED THESE NOODLES OR NOT?!?!?! "
Oh yeah! I forget to tell her...
WHY DID'NT YOU GUYS REMINDED ME?!?!
" Madhs...Its DELICIOUS!!! "
A big huge smile shot up in her face!
" REALLY? IS IT?! "
" Yes Madhs! "
I again picked up a spoon full and I feed her with my own hand...
" Hmn...you are right! "
She said. I picked up another fork, pointed it towards her and said
" So why don't you join meh? "
Again a big smile shot up at her face and she took it and she started eating it with me. My upper arm was touching her upper arm..We both enjoyed a lot..A lot means A LOT!
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No precaps...
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Readers, I am again reminding u,
I AM NOT GOING TO WRITE UPDATES TILL 2 OR 3 DAYS AS THERE ARE IMPORTANT FUNCTIONS TO ATEND IN MY FAMILY.
thankyou!!
Edited by Vinona - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Lovely update..will wait for the next one😉

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