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smita sabnam

@__smita__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Hey thanks for d pm..i loved this class scene..umm now they are friend..cool..i have send u 4nd request so accept it..it'll help u to send pm..umm one prob my name is smita not samita which u mentioned at pm..

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Vanshika

@Vinona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Hi again! My loyal readers! So here's Part 6 waiting for u!

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PART 6

" I spent a really great time with u today.." Madhu sighed..as it was the leaving time of our collage.." Same here Madhs.." I said...Yeah, I had kept her name Madhs now..." So u r gonna call meh Madhs frm now? cool.." She said..

Oh that Trishna Malkik came now...I just wanted to kick her..." Madhu, when r u leaving? If I reach first at home and said u were still in the collage, your dads gonna kill me..." She said the last sentence looking at me.." I am just coming in 5 mins" Madhs said and Trishna just nodded her head and looked at me for a sec and walked away..Then Madhu looked at me.." Can I ask you one last question?" I said..

" Yes of course."

" Ugh..Yesterday I saw that U are going by your bike and Trishna by her own car..So..Why didn't u go with her?" OK I asked her frankly..We were good friends now..She just lowered her eyes a sad expression instantly came to her face..I was still looking at her..I didn't knew what to say..She raised her head up and she looked at me, I was looking down..

And she said...

" I'm Adopted "

MY HEAD SHOT UP IN HER DIRECTION! WHAT?! SHE IS ADOPTED!! Now I know why Trishna behaves with her like that..Its so bad of her..

" I know you must be thinking that why Trishna pushed me that day.. I will tell you now..Before that day, I had, by mistakenly broken her vase which she had painted on her own, Trust me, I had done it by mistakenly..That's why, that day, I was just trying to calm her down, I was asking for forgiveness, she got so frustrated that she pushed me and I fell on the ground. I know that you must me thinking that She pushed me for such a small thing..But Trishna is like that only..I hope everything becomes fine now.." She said..she was continuously looking down..I kept my hand on her sholder and she raised her head up, I saw that her eyes had began to become watery..I said "why don't you say your mom about this all? She will talk to Trishna! She will make her unders...'''

" We don't have a mom " A lone tear dropped from her eye..And what? She doesn't have a mom too?

" I only have a step father and a step sister.." O .M. G. What should I say her now? My hand dropped down from her shoulder.. I was just thinking..thinking..thinking..

" Don't get into this RK" I looked at her, as she was looking at me..

" I don't want you to jumble-up your mind because of me.." I was just going to say her something and suddenly her phone started buzzing..she got her phone out of her pocket and as she hold her phone down, I could see who's call it was..And guess what, it was written..

' Dad '

It was her dads call. When I looked up at her face, I saw a fear- kinda expression..She gulped and picked up her phone..

" H-Hello? "

" Madhu where r u? Your sister told me that u r still in collage!? What are you doing there!?"

As her father was speaking so loudly, I could hear almost everything..She looked at me as I was looking at her..

" Dad, I-I am just leaving now.."

" WHAT? You are leaving now? you mean RIGHT NOW?"

" Father I am just coming..BYE!"

And the next second she cutted off her phone. She wiped her tear and said

" RK, I am really sorry, But I have to go.." " Its Ok, You should really leave now..Bye.." " Bye "

And she ran towards her bike..

I hope everything goes on with her well..

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Precap- " Hi! "

I send her a msg. Well ya I had taken her phone number..

" Hey!'

Came in the reply.

" Hows everything going on in your house?"

" Uh...better..''

" Nice.."

She send a smily face to me..

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So? did you guys like this part?

I really hope..

And hey hey, I wanted to say something to u all..

( PS )

Members, If you post a comment, after every chapter I write,

I WILL SEND YOU A PM AFTER MY NEW UPDATES! REMINDING YOU THAT I HAVE WROTE THE NEXT CHAP...
AND,

If I become late in updating the chaps, I WILL TELL U ALL IN ADVANCE THAT WHAT I AM GOING TO WRITE IN THE NEXT UPDATES..well, I will give u all hints... BUT I AM AGAIN REMINDING THAT I WILL DO THIS TO ONLY THOSE WHO WILL STAY CLOSE TO MY CHAPTERS. If you all have any doubts about this so send me a PM and I will again try to explain you all..So our deal starts,,,

NOW!

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Vanshika

@Vinona

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

No comments again? Forgot about the deal? Or this was not intresting?

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice part but trishna is so mean... but i am enjoying growing friendship of rishabala...

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Sweety

@sweetdear

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Lovely update...poor Madhu. May be her dad is strict...Trishna does not like her as she is adopted..hmm that's pathetic...what was so much urgency for her to reach home?? Hope Rishabh n Madhu can become real good friends😳.

Thx for the pm deary😃

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smita sabnam

@__smita__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Umm nice update but too short..and deal i thought its a forum but its seems i am at any market..umm not bad..lol..

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Vanshika

@Vinona

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Oh guys...I really know that my updates are reallu short..
The reason is that I don't have much time and strength to write
Long updates.. But I swer that from next time, I will write long updates..
I will try my best...and smita thanks for saying me so if u have any complains
Or doubts so plz plz plz tell me...thankyou

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Vanshika

@Vinona

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

(PS) Well hello hello guys! I wanted to give u all a msg again regarding to my deal. So, the usernames SWEETDEAR and SMITAKUNDA have passed my deal. So sweetdear and smitakunda, After every update, I m going to send u a PM reminding u about the update, and in case, if i am late on updating the updaates, I will send u pm in advance telling u that what I am going to write in next update.(only if u want) So sweetdear and SmitaKunda, If u wanna take this deal, send me a pm for ur ans. AND FOR OTHER MEMBERS, u all also can be a part of my deal. If u don't know, go to chapter 6 and see the msg i have written below my update. Thanks again! I will update Part 7 today or tomorrow. thanks!

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Sweety

@sweetdear

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Vinona..Just count me in 😳 as always😉

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Vanshika

@Vinona

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

I AM SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SORRY GUYS! I AM SO SORRY FOR THIS LATE UPDATE! I can't explain how busy I was these days...Sorry again.. And here's part 7! --------------------------------- PART 7

Today is Saturday. It has been 3 days since Madhu and we are friends.( now we know that our parents are best friends)

So right now, I am lying on my bed, And you know what, I AM REALLY GETTIN' BORED..Since today was a holiday..I didn't saw Madhu rest of the day..I didn't even talk to her..

...

...BINGO!

I HAVE AN IDEA!!

"Hi" I texted her. Ya I had taken her phone number..😉😆

" Hey! " Came in the reply..

" Hows ya gal? "

" fine..u? "

" Cool; as usual "

" Hey RK I wanted to ask you something"

" Sure Madhs "

" RK, tomorrow, its Sunday. So will you come at my place? We'll have fun! "

Hmn...So baby u inviting meh at ur place huh? Well...I thought that I will spend some time with my bros cause Mannet also has a holiday tomorrow and Dhruv is also free...So what I should tell her now? I was just lost in thoughts and just then...

" ARE YOU THERE SILLY? "

Madhu's msg came. Then I realised that I had to answer her..

" Ya Madhs "

" good...So Mr. Rishabh Kundra, ARE. YOU. VISITING. MY. PLACE. TOMORROW????!?!??!?!?"

" Madhs, can I tell you tomorrow?''

" Ugh..fine..hey I gotta go, b bye!"

" Bye Madhs"

And I kept my phone on my side table. I was just thinking weather I should go or not...Then I heard a knock at my door..I was just going to say 'come in' but My door suddenly opened and I saw Dhruv standing there doing something in his phone..He said while looking at his phone

" Mums calling for dinner, she said come fas..."

" Dhruv, bad manners! did I say 'come in'? Why did u enter my room..."

" Oh bro plz don't start again!! "

He said in a irritated voice, looking at me

" I'm your elder brother! Its my duty.."

" to tell you!? Ugh bro..."

I was just going to say something but suddenly he turned around whispering something, I don't know what he was saying..

" Dhruv! you.." My hand just raised a bit.

And he shut off the door hardily. I frozed

in my position.. Dhruv also does like that to me..He only listens to Mannet.. I don't know why..cause Mannet is always able to show more love to him? really?

And my hand dropped down. Then I remembered I had to eat dinner.. I stood up, fixed my t-shirt, combed my hair a bit, wore my home slippers, and walked down off my stares. I reached to my dining table and I saw Papa, Mannet, Dhruv, sitting there and Ma serving them food. I gave a fake smile to all and sat on my chair. Ma finished serving Mannet and went to serve Papa, then she turned to Dhruv's side. She putted Dal in his bowl, and then she served him rice, and she was just going to serve him roti..

" Ma, I don't want roti..."

He said in a irritated voice.

" Dhruv you always eat rice, beta. roti is also important! "

Dhruv was just glaring at Ma.

" Dhruv, Ma's right. Roti is also important! " I said like I was giving him a command.

" OH STOP COMMANDING ME BRO" His hands opened vide; in a irritated tone. I just looked down..I again became lost in my thoughts...

" Dhruv, eat it."

Mannet said. " But bro.."

" Eat IT " Mannet said pointing his finger in his plate. Dhruv looked down and took that roti from Ma's hand...

And as usual...He listened to Mannet..

I was just looking at my plate...

" Now what happened to u? eat ur food Rishu! " I looked at Ma who was standing right beside me. Then I looked at my plate and realised that She has served me food. I nodded my head saying a 'yes' and began eating my food.

I finished my Dinner and went to my room and I took a quick shower, changed to my night ware, took my blanket and slept..

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"TTTRRRIIINNNGGG"

My eyes again shot open and I saw on my left side...

AHHH THIIISSS ALAARMMM CLOCCKK!!!!!!

I just banged my hand on that alarm clock..and...

AHH!!!

It hurt me..

I began squeezing my hand...I just shook my head to forget what just happened..

I went to the bathroom, brushed my teeth, took a bathe, changed clothes, combed my hair, had my breakfast and coffee.

After eating my breakfast, I sat on my bed. My phone buzzed and I saw Madhu had sent mea msg. I went to my msg box and it was written...

"So RK, are you coming?"