rishbala os mitke bhi tujhme rahu zinda pg 1 & 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rohiddfan

Just superb os..loved it..thanx for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnks for supporting this os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fabulous Os 👏

u depicted Madhu's pain so well

Continue soon n pm me too 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: krt09

Fabulous Os 👏


u depicted Madhu's pain so well

Continue soon n pm me too 😉

thnks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear Amazing OS!!Just Faboulous!!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it.❤️
While reading I was having tears in my eyes. 😭 It was so wonderfully written. 👏 👏 So Emotional. 😭
Congratz for your first Rishabala OS and Work. 😊 😳
This is my most fav song as of now but I don't know yar but I don't feel like imagining Rishabala in this song,I try to imagine My Abhiya always. 😉 😆 😳
And I'm sorry,I'm kind of inactive so not replying to any pm's from few days.Will reply to all your Abhiya updates later(after 1st week of May or possibly sooner)Pls Continue sending me PM's,Ok? 😳
Thank-God,I came to mb forum and saw your OS,Coz I haven't opened your pm. 😆 😳 😳
Can't wait to read more...Pls Continue Soon. 😊 😳 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
last part-
2 years later...
Dear RK
today is the best day of my life!!...i recieved National award for the best actress...i never thought i would be a heroine ever...i never wanted to be one...but ur love ur junoon and ur ashiqui changed me...from a simple girl to The Superstar Madhubala Kundra...i m living ur dream...i know u r also watching this from somewhere...i know u r happy..i will find u very soon...My RK...my junoon...my patidev...
love
Ur biwi..
she smiled..after finishing the letter she kept it securely just like always...
Bhabiji...can i ask u something...
boliye naa bittuji!!..madhu insits...
Aap pichle 2 saalo se har hafte chief k naam letters likhti hai...aur unhe aise apne paas sambhal k rakhti hai...aisa kyun...
wo isliye...kyunki mujhe in letters ko paas rakh ke aisa lagta hai k RK bhi mere paas hai...samjhe!!..madhu replied with a smile...
samajh gaya bhaabi ji!!...bittuji replied...
madhu's phone rang...she answered the call nd got shocked...she urgently ran somewhere leaving a confused bittuji behind...
lokhandwala
an old farm house
a baffaled madhu hurriedly came inside the house...she loudly called...koi hai...who r u...pls saamne aao...kya jaante ho tum rk ke baareme...pls bataao...hallo...koi hai..madhu screamed...
the farm house was so dark...nothing was clearly visible...suddenly a tune started to play...someone was playing a piano...she followed the tune nd came inside a hall...a dark figure was playing a magnetic tune...the person started to sing...
Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Saya bhi tera mein
Hone na doon juda..
Maine theh kar liya...
madhu was spellbound...she started to walk slowly...she knew this song...this was his very own fvrt..her rk's fvrt...she felt her blood rushed in a unstopable speed in her vains...it means this is RK!!...she felt it...she was very near to the person...she tried to touch his shoulder...but due to darkness she failed...nd the person was not there...but his voice was continiously ringing through the dark room...
madhu looked here n there...he was nowhere...suddenly she felt two strong arms encircled her in a tight grip from behind...her heart beat increased as he kissed her neck line passionately nd sang...
Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
Bas haq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera...

she quickly turned to face him...but he was gone again...
Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada...
she was sure now...it is rk...her Rishabh...she madly started to called his name...RK...pls..saamne aao...i know its u...pls rk...she cried for his name...
the voice continued to sing...
Yaadon mein tujhko rakhoon
Baatein bhi teri karoon
Itna deewana hoon tera
Ho..o'
he again grabbed her hand nd started to dance with her...he took her in his arms nd moved in a circled motion...madhu submitted herself to him...her pain was soothing...she was longing for his touch...from a long time..
Raaton mein jaaga karoon
Din bhar bhatakta rahu
Main toh yahan se bus wahan
Aaa.a..
he put her down and kissed her hands...nd then again he moved with her...
Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
Bas haq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
aaa..aa
madhu touched is face with her palm...to ensure she was not dreaming..his face was not visible but..she felt the same features by touching his face..he stood there...her touch was so intoxicating...he grabbed her waist nd took her more close to him...their breaths were mingling with each other...passion took over their senses..

Baahon mein tujhko rakhoon
Dhadkan mein teri sunoon
Aa itna nazdik aa zara
Ho..
jisme duaaein rahein
Hur dum wafaaein rahein
Du tujhko aisa ik jahan..
he sang again..his voice was breathtaking...he took her hands in his nd kept them in his heart...madhu felt his heartbeats...she felt her names in his evry heartbeat..tears welled up from her eyes...he felt her tears in his hand...
Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe.
Bas haq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera...
he took her face n his palms nd kissed her tears...her body was shaking in his touch...

Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Saya bhi tera mein
Hone na doon juda..
Maine..theh kar liya...
with this ending lines rk lighted a candle and held it infront of her...nd madhu hugged him so dearly...like a child...
rk...kahaan chale gaye the..kyun chale gaye the mujhe chorke..itni badi sajaa kyun diya mujhe...kyun...she hit him like a angry child...
ouch..biwi...itne dino me acting k saath karate bhi sikh liya hai kya...apne pati ko maarne k liye...rk hugged her back nd said with a smirk..
tumhe majaak lagraha hai naa..thik hai...main chali jaati hoon...madhu tried to ran away..but RK held her and jerked her back in his arms...
ab kehdiya...dubara mat kehnaa..aajke baad tum mujhse door kahi nahi jaane waali...tum sirf meri ho madhu..meri ho..rk said in a husky voice nd looked into her eyes wih so much passion nd kissed her...
madhu couldn't held her emotions anymore nd gave in...the long days of seperation was visible in their eyes...they were lost...
chief!!..wo ye letters aapko...oops ...sorry..chief..bittuji accidentally came their without knocking nd got embarrased...
they broke apart...madhu was very shy...
bittuji...aapko kaha thaa na k abhi nahi letters baad me lana..to aap kabaab me haddi kyun ban gaye..rk said angrily..
wait...kya kahaan tumne rk..bittuji se tumne kahaan thaa letters laane...madhu asked...
wo kuch nhi bhaabi ji..wo main hi galat bol gaya..wo..bittuji stammered..wait bittuji...RK kya tum bittu ji se contact me the...madhu questioned him...
RK was caught red handed...wo biwi...u know naa bittuji cnt live without me...🥱...rk tried to distract her...
RK...i want answer now!!..madhu said loudly...
bhaabiji pls gussa mat hoiye...haan ye sach hai...par aap shaant hojaiye...bittuji said..
bittuji out!!...madhu shouted
biwi...calm down...rk said nervously..
i said out bittuji...
bittuji ran from their..
RK was shocked to see madhu like this...
..biwi...tumhe kabse RK ki bimaari lag gayi...itna gussa...shaant ho jao...lagta hai superstar banne ke baad sabko RK wali bimaari lag jaati hai...
RK shut up!!...ekto itne dinose tum mujhe apne bittuji ke saath milke tadpa rahe the...aur ab keh rahe ho shaant ho jao...how could u rk..madhu started to shook him in anger...
RK knew how to control her anger...
He kissed her again...madhu protested first...but then responded angrily...after sometimes she was relaxed...rk said while looking in her eyes...
sshhh...bas ab aur nahi biwi...main tumhaare saamne isliye nahi aya kyunki main apne aapse...apni insecurities se lar raha thaa...apni ego se lar raha thaa...par ab main jaan gaya hoon k tumhaare pyaar ke alawa aur kuch maaine nahi rakhta...i love you madhu...rk muttered...
madhu never imagined rk will say it in true meanings...but she felt his love was pure nd she hugged him...i love u too rk...
they were together now...forever...😳
so tell me how was it...its complete now...would love to know your views...pls comment nd like...😃
Edited by samwllms - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: janvie

Wow dear Amazing OS!!Just Faboulous!!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Loved it.❤️
While reading I was having tears in my eyes. 😭 It was so wonderfully written. 👏 👏 So Emotional. 😭
Congratz for your first Rishabala OS and Work. 😊 😳
This is my most fav song as of now but I don't know yar but I don't feel like imagining Rishabala in this song,I try to imagine My Abhiya always. 😉 😆 😳
And I'm sorry,I'm kind of inactive so not replying to any pm's from few days.Will reply to all your Abhiya updates later(after 1st week of May or possibly sooner)Pls Continue sending me PM's,Ok? 😳
Thank-God,I came to mb forum and saw your OS,Coz I haven't opened your pm. 😆 😳 😳
Can't wait to read more...Pls Continue Soon. 😊 😳 😳

are no problem dear...i know u r faithfull reader of my works...take ur time and last part of this os updated ...pls read..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
awesome update
so rk & bittooji contact with with each other since long two years,
glad to see rk overcome from his insecurity & ego ,
atlast rishbala become one & live forever together
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: krt09

Fabulous Os👏


u depicted Madhu's pain so well

Continue soon n pm me too😉



thnk u

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