Judaai part 4 up - Page 9

U are making it more interesting my dear...love the way its shaping up...plz continue soon

To tell u the truth...its becoming more nd more confusing...when I had read the prologue...i was supa excited.. but now I dread reading its update...you've added too many characters n you're not able to manage them...due to this the whole concept is becoming disastrous...pick up a particular plot n wrote on it...changing the plot is every update irritates us readers...atleast I can say about me...I know I'm sounding rude but I don't want such a great story to get wasted so I'm telling the truth...I mean you've added so many shows I characters...MJHT, IPKKND, GHSP, MEIEJ...4 shows n so many characters...its getting confusing...

P.S. I'm just being extremely truthful n clear... no offence to u...

Ok dear
N updt ur other works too

PROMO OF JUDAAI PRT-7

Rk and Maan's relationship...

Murder attempt on Madhubala

Kushi continued staring at Arnav and she felt her heart go DHAK DHAK...

Rishbala romance in the library...

Before I continue I wish to know ur opinion on which of this should I continue?

Ways of Destiny

Dhadkan-an Epic...

Please comment n the thread by tmo morning so that I can start...The one with max comments will start..For link vo to my index

hadnot RK and Maan met already when Maan met with accident and Rk took him hospital and Geet comes there as Maan's wife and RK thinks her to be Madhu ? I say u continue the both

JUDAAI MOHABBAT AUR DOSTI KI PART -7

Maan watched as Kushi's color returned to normal state. He turned to look at Rk who looked lost. His mind went back to their meeting...

Flashback

It was Rk who had saved Maan from an accident that day he came. In the form which Rk filled he had claimed as his relation with Maan as his BROTHER. That had been the start and a new bonding had formed between them .Maan found a younger brother in Rk and for Rk ,he felt extreme levels of comfort and safety .Maan addressed him as "Rishu" just like his dad called"

Rk kneeled just close to Maan.

Rk-"Maan bhai how do you know Kushi?"

Maan-"She is like a sister to me ...She's my sister in law's best friend.."

Rk-"Oh.But why did she faint?"

Maan-"Weakness I suppose" he said hiding the truth of Kushi's problem..

Arnav and Trishna were mute spectators of the conversation. Both wondered the same thing "How did Rk know this guy?"...

The next day Deepali was chatting with Mukund when she heard gasps from behind,She turned to see Arnav Singh Raizada who was walking along with Madhu who was dressed in a black western wear with pink lace around it.It had a v-cut in the front .

Arnav was listening to everything Madhu was saying for the designing of costumes...

"She was an seductress "Rk felt...That was when he spotted something peculiar

To say Dips was shocked was an understatement ...She never in her worst nightmare had thought that this c**** could even own a western wear and here she was carrying it so well and frankly Dips felt jealous. She turned to find Mukund all lost in Madhu...She knew what had to be done next...and she smirked evil; not knowing she was digging her own grave.

Every girl had their eyes glued to ASR, his arrogance, attitude and charisma was too much to bear.

Like all other despos...Kushi caught herself staring at ASR as well and she suddenly felt a gist of wind blowing her hair and she suddenly felt her heart beat DHAK DHAK...

Madhu was so lost in conversation that she failed to realize anything around her.She suddenly felt someone pulling her .She slammed into RK's chest as he pulled her out of the way of an black car...The car zoomed past in full speed.

Madhu felt her heart at her throat and as she looked up into him she was lost in his dark eyes...Rk stood with one arm around her waist and the other on her shoulders..

Their eyes met and they forgot everything around them...

The whole world ceased to exist

A distant memory came in front of Madhu's eyes.

"You are nothing but a bad blooded orphan...Dare you talk or even see me again you B****"

That was all and Madhu pushed Rk and walked away..

Precap:

Madhu tried to walk away when Rk pulled her by her arm and she came face to face with him...

Arhi's first Kiss...

Rishbala alone in library...

HAPPY NEW YEAR GUYS...

Very well written. Pls continue

superb update!thamks for pm!waiting to see what is going to happen between Rishbala in the library!pls continue soon!& Happy New Year Dear!

nice update but i don't want both girls to melt so easily