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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

JUDAAI MOHABAAT AUR DOSTI KI PRT-4

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IN DARJEELING

The breathing of many had stopped including the one who had entered...Madhu looked at their faces and knew what each one thought...Dipali was just plain shocked and was unable to belive her own eyes...She expected Madhu to be sitting in a corner and crying her heart out for the loss.Afterall Deepali had made sure that Madhu lost everything.her family,her respect,her friends,life everything but before her stood a new madhu whoes pose gave a instant message or rather a warning "DO NOT MESS WITH ME"

Trishna looked teary eyed and all she wanted was to beg for forgiveness from madhu...She wanted to be her Glycerine's shield to protect her navity but little did she know that it was too late and her sister was no longer the same...

The look in Rk's eyes confused Madhu,there was joy,hope and a bit of pain?

Madhu closed her eyes and took a deep breath to calm her self.A voice revibrated in her head..."Madhu today or tomorrow you need to face them ...you cannot runaway from your past.face it I am always there for you"...he had said...madhu opened her eyes and she knew what was to be done...

IN DELHI

Arnav could barely stop himself as he burst into tears knowing how unfair he had been to Rk...no his Rish...Had'nt Jiya told the truth he would have continued misunderstanding Rk...

On the other side

Kushi was packing her bags to leave for Darjeeling as she had to attend a camp there...

IN DARJEELING

Madhu walked towards the lot.her face devoid of any emotion...Daksh tried to talk to her when madhu stretched her hand towards Rk...

M-"Hi i am Madhu as in madhubala..."

rk was stunnend to say anything.He expected slap,anger,tears,shouts but nothing came except plain indifference...madhu introduced herself and was about to leave when Daksh stopped her.

D-"Maddy who..."

Madhu was about to punch on his face but stopped all of a sudden.

Daksh was shocked as Maddy acted really wired...She never introduced herself as Madhu but today...and her controling her anger no way...what was going on he wondered?

Few hours later Arnav singh Raizada was in Darjeeling for designing costume for theatrics group in TI institute...

many hours later...

Rk found himself sitting on the bank of a river staring at absolutely nothing...he checked the time and decided to leave back to his cottage and as he got onto the road his attention was captured by an angel in white salwar...She looked totally out of the world,etheral and a divine beuaty...He began to follow her...

(listen to this-http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rntBZeWegPk)

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko taraashe

Meri nazar se tu zara, haaye re

Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai

Tujhko dikhaaun main zara, haaye re

Ik ankahi si daastaan daastaan

Kehne lagega aaina Subhanallah...

She ran with kids to catch a falling kite and he followed her...

Jo ho raha haim pehli dafaa hai wallah

Aisa hua, Subhanallah..

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah

Aisa hua

He watched her as she played with little kids and picked up strawberries to eat...She was a butterfly ,active and bubbly unlike he had earlier known...

Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena

Unki dori se taarifein bun lena (x2)

He watched her praying in the church...Her complexion glowed with the candle lights...Her eyes were hazel in colour and captivating...

Kal nahi thi jo aaj lagti hoon

Taareef meri hai khaamakha

Tohfa hai tera meri adaa

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukaare

Meri zubaan se tu zara, haaye re

Tujh mein chhupi si jo shayari hai

Tujhko sunaaun main zara, haay re

Ye do dilon ka waasta waasta

Khul ke bataaya jaaye naa

Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah

Aisa hua.. Subhanallah (x3)

Jo ho raha hai, pehli dafaa hai Wallah

Aisa hua..

Rk was lost and he muttered her name unconsciously"Madhu..."

At the same time madhu looked up from her prayers...

Edited by smritiz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Nice update !
Well written 👏
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
it was awosum update..Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Awesome update loved it! continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
MADHU HAS GROWN - SHE IS NOT THE IMPULSIVE GIRL SHE WAS EARLIER AND EVERYONE IS SHOCKED
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Read all 4 parts in 1 go . Awesome story 👏 ...totally loved it !...
...continue soon & do pm me when u update
Edited by RAONE8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
First of all, thanks for the PM and nice update, but waiting more to know the suspense abt the MU btw RK and arnav and btw rishbala, waiting eagerly for further updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Superb updt
cnt sn n big updt yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Gr8 ud plz continue soon... thankx for the pm...
smritiz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
JUDAAI MOHABAT AUR DOSTI KI PART-5 TEASER

Arnav looked at Rk with hopeful eyes,but Rk walked away without a word..
Arnav has a business deal with Madhubala Singhania.His reaction on seeing Madhu.
Rk sees Kushi

Edited by smritiz - 12 years ago

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