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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Nice Teaser
Waiting for the update😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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JUDAAI MOHABAAT AUR DOST KI PART-5

Arnav climbed up the stairs of the most magnificent stairs of the Singhania office. His heart thumping loudly, telling him that something big was going to happen. He entered to be greeted by the personal secretary of Ms.Singhania. She led him into the conference room. Arnav entered to see a woman sitting with her back faced to him.

Sec-"Mam he is here"...

L-"Fine, you may leave"

The secretary left closing the door. Even as Arnav watched, the girl turned and he found himself unable to look into the eyes of Madhubala Singhania.

A-"M...Madhu...?"

A-"T..tum teek ho?"

Madhu with a cold voice -"Have a seat Mr.Raizada"

Arnav moved forward to touch her, but Madhu stepped back and gave him an unreadable expression...

M-"Do you know Mr.Raizada, I could get you sued for a sexual assault on me?"

Arnav froze ,hearing the words he had once said to a girl who loved him a lot...Madhu saw him going pale and smirked to herself..."This is just the starting raizada...watch out..."

In the guest House...

Rk sat lost along with Trishna...He was never comfortable with anyone before, especially Trishna but now she was the younger sister he never had...They were hell confused by Madhu's reaction or say lack of reaction when Trishna was ragged by the seniors, Madhu had seen it and left without doing anything. Had it not been for RK, things could have gone wrong. They were disturbed by a knock on their door. Trishna opened the door to find herself facing, a person from their past, Arnav Singh Raizada stood a bit hesitantly. Arnav looked up at Rk with a pleading look, but Rk got up and moved out of the cottage...

Rk walked away not wanting to face him, he was tired of all his past stuff. But destiny seemed to have other plans; He banged against someone familiar again, a girl this time...

G-"Hey, you...watch it..."

The voice sounded familiar and sure enough Rk stood facing Kushi Gupta or should I say Singhania...and Rk froze.

Unknown to all one person was seeing this all with an unreadable expression on her face...

Very sorry for the short part but it was required...Now begins the actual game of Destiny and Karma...Now that all 4 are in place ,you can expect a lot of fireworks and attractions...lots of twists and turns coming up in Judaai...Dont expect positive shades of all the four...OOPS I SPEAK A LOT...

PS

To add, I am not very happy with the comments I get for Judaai...Should I Continue? Do let me know by pressing the Like button... and please comment.

Edited by smritiz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Interesting update,Dear.👏
Plz continue soon.
trishnawaliya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
waiting like crazy 4 update... and in return just get a short one... but i must say its interesting... nice update plz update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
I came across this story just now and read all parts in one go. Very nice and different. Please PM for next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
awesome update 😊 thanks alot for the pm...please update the next part very soon & pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
i have got lost , need to read all over again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

JUDAAI MOHAABAT AUR DOSTI KI PART-6

The time stood still and Rk froze looking at Kushi who stood before him with a different aura around her. Kushi did not know why but she could feel a strange closeness with the man who stood before her. Was he someone from her long forgotten past. Before she could say something an image flashed in front of her

A man stood in front of her...

Guy-"Hey babes how is it going huh? Mind I give you company?"

The girl shivered a bit and looked around for help ...Another guy joined the first guy and before they spoke further, a man held the girl from the waist and spoke something.

With a sudden intake of fresh air, Kushi gasped as a pain began to seep through her head.Even before anything everything went blank around her and she passed out..

In the Room...

Arnav-"Trishna who..."

Trishna turned away not meeting Arnav in his eyes...The door banged upon and the duo watched Rk bringing in a girl...On closer look realized it was none other than Kushi...

A-"Ku...Kushi. Open your eyes please..."

It was of no use, to their shock Kushi began to go paler and paler. Rk began to call a doctor, Trishna began to rub her feet.Arnav was too scared to react..

All of a sudden a fourth person entered the room...The trio watched as a man rushed and kneeled before Kushi...He immediately extracted a syringe and filled it with a liquid and injected it into Kushi...The effect was instant and the color began to return into her face...

The man decide to speak when he heard a broken voice-"M..Maan."

Maan looked up and the site of the person tore his heart. Maan opened his arms...and to Arnav's shock Rk literally ran into his hands and hugged him...Maan tried to sooth Rishab...his Rishu.

Arnav felt the green eyed monster called jealousy rise in him...

In Delhi...

Samrat sat in his cabin looking at Kushi's photo frame...He loved her...he realized...His mind went back to how they met

Samrat was walking out of the class during his 3rd year of MBBS, when a girl banged onto him...He hated girls at that point and his instant reaction was to shout at her but to no avail as he was mesmerized by the angel in front of him...Brown doe like eyes.. ,rosy lips...he was attracted to Kushi Singhania at his first sight...

He had learnt a lot about her, her health condition her memory loss...

He loved her and was aware that Kushi was not in "LOVE" with him as she was trying to remember her past...which according to what he knew from Madhu was not a very pleasant one..

In Darjeeling

Madhu sat in the chair and gazed out of the window lost in thoughts...that she did not realize that her dad was sitting beside her...Rishi Singhania reached out to soothe his daughter's hairs. Even as he did Madhu shifted by lying her head on his lamp...Geet clutched to the railing a bit tighter...She hoped Madhu would let go of the pain she held in her heart at least now...

In Delhi.

Padmini and Malik packed their bags for visiting Darjeeling to see Madhu...

Is anyone as confused as I am...Coz I dunno why.but I keep changing the script everytime.I type...So what do you think is the relation between RK and MSK any guesses?Wat s gonna be Madhu's reaction to Pado and Malik? Is it becoming interesting or more boring?Please press like and do comment...

Edited by smritiz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Really confusing a lot and i guess rk and msk wil be best buddies or like brothers.. Sorry if am wrong, just made an wild guess
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
omg its getting interesting... nice update...

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