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saudade

@saudade

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

You cant stop there. You have to write more MORE MORE MORE. 😆

It was wonderful. The dialogues, the feels, the suspense, the understanding between them. Just beautiful. 😳

Now seriously, when is the next part? 😈😆

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meenu

@-Nia04-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

aaash its so beautiful!

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-Misek-

@-Misek-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

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OMG Aash this is such a good read. Luvd the whole concept, kudos for such a beautiful piece. Awww Madhu and Aryan bonding couldn't have been explained better than this. With Sultan, what can I say abt that man, damn he fellt guilty 😭which proves that he has a soft side behind his iced mask and also the part where u described his trembling hands. I seriously can't explain how much I loved it. So glad that you did not miss little thing like the chawl gossips, Padmimi's pain and Superstar RK👏. The whole scenes were marvellous.

Finally, SulBala silent conversation. Gahhh they let their emotions speaks rather using words making me believe feelings count more than expressions and they could hear what they have felt without the need to express. And yess I'd love an extension on this. I defo will stalk your writing Index sometime soon now Aash😉

Simmy🤗

Edited by _Simmy_ - 12 years ago

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

AASHU

WHAT A STORY

IT WAS SUBALA ALL THE WAY😭

WONT COMMENT MORE THAN THIS😭

SHE DID NOT FORGIVE RK

DID SHE DIE, WILL SULTAN AND MADHU MEET AGAIN

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

I want a hawt OS on rishbala...woh milega?? Plsss

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arshi95

@arshi95

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

amazinggg!! please upload a part 2 and 3 :)

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-MERRY-

@-MERRY-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

whattt whaaa was that😭.. My poor babies

plzz update soon😃

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Excellent! ! We sure do need a part2 and 3 from this awesome writer of course!!!!

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Vidya

@vid6

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Lovely prediction, I hope the same happens in the soap too...coz I want Madhu to get wounded this time, purely because RK should learn what it means to see his loved one refusing to have him back even when she is almost dying. She still loves him, but the humiliation and rejection that he gave is almost making her to refuse her own love for him.