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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum OS! Superby written...psl do continue 😊

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Absoluv
SUPER job dear.👏.luved it..But sad that SULTAN & ARYAN left MADHU...Will they meet again ???Part 2 toh banta hai bosss...please pretty please...SO WRITE part 2...😉

Will they?😉😉😉

Keep guessing😃😃😃

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Sehar

@-SmexySmile-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash
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reading today.:P will unres

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Rolzz
😭😭Nooo sultan don't gooo...come back ...come back...I hate you Aashu😭😭

But i lub ya🤗

Originally posted by: saudade
You cant stop there. You have to write more MORE MORE MORE. 😆
It was wonderful. The dialogues, the feels, the suspense, the understanding between them. Just beautiful. 😳

Now seriously, when is the next part? 😈😆

thans dear😃

Glad u liked it

Originally posted by: -nee-
aaash its so beautiful!

thankss meenz...spl wala😉

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Petal_Pose

@Petal_Pose

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Even thought I am not a fan of the couple, still isshh u wrote so wonderfully that I just loved it.☺️

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: _Simmy_
UnRes

OMG Aash this is such a good read. Luvd the whole concept, kudos for such a beautiful piece. Awww Madhu and Aryan bonding couldn't have been explained better than this. With Sultan, what can I say abt that man, damn he fellt guilty 😭which proves that he has a soft side behind his iced mask and also the part where u described his trembling hands. I seriously can't explain how much I loved it. So glad that you did not miss little thing like the chawl gossips, Padmimi's pain and Superstar RK👏. The whole scenes were marvellous.

Finally, SulBala silent conversation. Gahhh they let their emotions speaks rather using words making me believe feelings count more than expressions and they could hear what they have felt without the need to express. And yess I'd love an extension on this. I defo will stalk your writing Index sometime soon now Aash😉

Simmy🤗

Thanks Simmy 🤗

I was trying to be neutral here and not go to any side😕 But i guess i didnt succeed😆

Therir eyes...are their most expressive features na..and any relationship between them wud be a silent one..thats what i feel😳

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: punam2712
AASHU
WHAT A STORY
IT WAS SUBALA ALL THE WAY😭
WONT COMMENT MORE THAN THIS😭
SHE DID NOT FORGIVE RK

DID SHE DIE, WILL SULTAN AND MADHU MEET AGAIN

I sent both of them away na..so how is it a Subala OS😆

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: arshi95
amazinggg!! please upload a part 2 and 3 :)

Originally posted by: Merry_Shwit
whattt whaaa was that😭.. My poor babies
plzz update soon😃

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
Excellent! ! We sure do need a part2 and 3 from this awesome writer of course!!!!

thanks Guys😃😃

Merry 🤗

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: vid6
Lovely prediction, I hope the same happens in the soap too...coz I want Madhu to get wounded this time, purely because RK should learn what it means to see his loved one refusing to have him back even when she is almost dying. She still loves him, but the humiliation and rejection that he gave is almost making her to refuse her own love for him.

Thats what i wanted to show😃😃😃

Thnks for the encouragement😃