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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser sounds interesting..W8ing fr More...!!
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Seriously awesome teaser😛..please update soon
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interesting...looking forward to the update 😃
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Nice one n update soon n pm me too
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love the teaser as RK expresses himself perfectly! He wants to hate her but can't. He wants to cause her pain but can't.

Even RK does not know where they go from here.

And Madhu? She will do anything to protect him, I am convinced this is all for him.

Great buildup!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice teaser Tanya !
Update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg the teaser was so intense poor rishabala both luv insanely but they have their secrets😕 pls continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 14

She looked at him as he sat on the edge of their bed with a drink in his hand, he'd brought her somewhere where she herself didn't recognize nor was he telling her.

RK swirled the red liquid around gazing at it intensely. "Why?" he muttered without reason. Looking up he met her gaze, her eyes filled with fear and.. innocence but then this fear and innocence was fake he told himself. She's only trying to trick him. He mentally cursed and looked away from her, he gulped down the last shot of his drink and slammed down the drink on the side drawer nearby. Brushing his fingers through his hair he turned his head to her.

"We wouldn't have been here today" he told her roughly.

Madhu backed away cuddling her knees as he grew angrier.

"Jitna nafrat karna chahta hoon nahi kar paa raha hoon" he admitted. "I want to hate you" he gripped her upper arms biting into her flesh with his fierce hold. "Tumhari iss khamoshi ki waje se main aisi rah pe kadi hoon ke manzil ka pata mujhe khud nahi hai"

Tears spilled down her cheeks, his grip was hurting her but that wasn't what made her cry, it was the distance between them, the pain he felt was hurting her, his hatred didn't hurt as much as his love did. His love for her made her cry.

He loosened his hold slipping his hands to his lap and turning away from her. "If you just didn't stay quiet..." he sighed heavily.

"M... RK" she called softly. "m.. main majboor..."

"Don't you dare!" he snapped and caged her, she stiffened fearing his anger. "don't you dare say you were helpless. You weren't. My sister was helpless. Not you!" he grit out, his face inches from her, she cringed back leaning against the headboard wanting to go away unfortunately both his hands were caging her.

"What do you want me to do?" she muttered out.

"Die!" he grit out and stood to his feet.

"RK" she called stepping down. "B.. believe me if I could do anything then I would've par..." she closed her eyes before continuing. "he.. h.. bhai was helpless"

"Your brother was helpless?" he gripped her upper arm tightly. "He was helpless? How the f**k can he be helpless? He sold her off, used and abused her" he shouted and slammed her back to the wall, Madhu hit her head violently sliding down the wall, she cried out in pain, he only looked at her disgusted and headed out the room leaving her.

She watched as he left, her tears streamed down her cheeks, her head throbbed heavily due to the pain, she winced trying to stand to her feet, her efforts were fruitless so she simply sat there cuddling her legs and crying.

RK punched the wall so many times till his hands bled, he hated himself for hitting her like that but then hearing her call her brother helpless was something he couldn't endure, it enraged him to no extent. Since Alia had left London and come here he'd been worried for some reason, coming back here he was right to be worried because a week here he'd come to know his only sister was being sold off, used and abused.

He hated himself for not protecting her and when he tried to search for her he finds out she'd died many months ago. After all the information he could gather he looked for Madhu. Her brother was the cause of this. He was going to take revenge sweetly, take his time to earn her trust then kill her off the same way. Well that was his plan. But now he couldn't. He hated her yet he loved her. Every time he sees Madhu, all he could think was innocent. She seemed innocent in all of this and he knew it as well but then Alia was also innocent.

***

"Will we ever get out?" Alia asked as she stood by the counter watching Ranveer make coffee.

"I don't know" he sighed heavily. "If we got out we're all going to be shot down, Madhu, you, me, Vikram"

She walked over and embraced him tightly. "Bhai's probably making di's life hell"

Ranveer closed his eyes reciprocating back, he was helpless, so helpless he was having to hide away in some underground house so no one ever finds them.

He pulled away as his phone rang, Alia stepped back as he picked up the phone.

"Haan Vikram bolo" he spoke.

"I've sent the weekly shopping, open the door" Vikram told him.

"Alright" Ranveer headed up the stairs, walking down the long corridor, "Madhu ka kuch pata chala?" he asked heading up another flight of stairs leading to the store room.

"Nothing yet, but we're trying" Vikram responded.

"Look find her, with everything that's probably going on RK's probably only heard half of it, he's going to ruin Madhu" he told Vikram as he walked towards the front door, opening it slightly he took the bags of shopping without stepping out incase anyone was around.

"RK has moved away somewhere, he was last seen in some shop before driving away" Vikram told him.

"Is he still about?"

"Hmm.. he still comes and he's suspicious because Madhu hasn't been on stage"

"Is there no trace or anything?" Ranveer asked heading down with the 3 shopping bags.

"Nope. He didn't leave a clue at all. If we don't find her soon then He'll know that something is amiss and if by chance he finds out you're alive so is Alia he'll kill everyone including Madhu this time" Vikram explained.

"I know. Dekho Vikram find Madhu, knowing RK he'll do anything, it's his sister here"

"I am trying, and I will keep on trying"

***

RK walked back inside to see Madhu cuddled to the corner, he noticed she'd slept off there crying, guilt enveloped him so much it now pained, he walked over and scooped her into his arms and headed to the bed, laying her down he pulled the blanket over her.

"I didn't want to hurt you" he whispered caressing cheeks with the back of his fingers. "I didn't want to but.. What ranveer did I can't forget it. She was my baby sister Madhu" he murmured out. "sach kyun nahi bata deti mujhe?" he asked softly.

"Darr ta hoon isi liye" Madhu responded opening her eyes and looked at him, her eyes filled up with her own tears.

"Kisse?"

"Tumse" she replied back softly. "You wouldn't be able to bear it RK. jo maine dekha uske baare main tum sunn bhi nahi sakte"

"Tell me. Give me some peace please" he pleaded. "tell me you did try"

"I couldn't" she whispered back.

He closed his eyes turning his head away. "Why?"

Precap - Truth (only of what Madhu knows)

I'll be ending this soon as well.

As most of you know I'm trying to wrap up quickly, I will be leaving as soon as I've wrapped them all up, I appreciate the pms I've gotten regarding it but I am firm on my decision.

Ramadan is only a few days away (excited but then how will we survive the hot long days ) hence the updates are flowing like water this week 😆 but once Ramadan is here there will be hardly any updates. If I can give one here or there I will try to but not making any promises.

Match made in Vegas, The Escort Business, Innocently Seduced, Tum Sirf Aur Sirf Mere Ho has all been updated.


Before adding me please let me know via comment or I wont be accepting request.

Also I will be deleting silent readers from pm list.

Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow tanya another fantastic update👏 hope u reveal the truth by the nxt update seriously it is eating my brains soo pls have some mercy😕 continue soon waiting for ur update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Tanya... Feel bad for both RK n Madhu who are so helpless in hands of the circumstances... Though I don't condone RK's actions yet I understand his reasons behind them.. But his emotional tumult is adding on to Madhu's agonies...oh it's so tragic that Ranveer, Alia, Vikram, Madhu, RK are all in line of FIRE...but who is this Devil whom they are all hiding from, and it just seems like it only requires a trigger for everything to blow up!!! Looking forward to Madhu's side of truth now..
am happy that u will update soon but feeling sad that you are planning to end this soon. This one will always be one of my fav SS that I have read so far Tanya..you are one awesome writer😛!!

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