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DDkime

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing start❤️

continue soon

plz do PM me😳

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todayzstar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Loved it 😉

continue soon

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arshi95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

amazing! very interesting! u drew me in by the first line of your prologue! Keep it up! :)

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InkedImagination

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Teaser

A smirk crept his lips in amusement. "Forbidden Is She To You & The World Bear In Mind However She Will Come To Its Rightful Owner For She Is Only Your Keep But Only For The Time Being. My Arms Will Be Her Home"
Vikram smiled widely. "Desire her as you wish but you cannot gain her for she is the forbidden fruit. My Keep & Only Mine!"

Enjoy the teaser 😉

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Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago

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arshi95

@arshi95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

ahhh! dude ur killing me! its an a-m-a-z-i-n-g teaser!!

Edited by arshi95 - 12 years ago

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love2_soma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

interesting prologue n teaser...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

continue soon plz...

eagerly waiting...

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rut93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Interesting...so do update d next part soon. Wanna read more.

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.Shree.

@.Shree.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

interesting teaser 😊

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Wow that was one intriguing plot and what a tease you gave us! Fantastic start! I'm already craving for more of this story. For a second, I was double checking if I'm reading a story from the Madhubala forum. For I rarely see dark stories in this forum. I'm so impressed! I'm waiting to see who this beautiful woman is and why she is called the forbidden fruit and who is this man daring to get a bite of the forbidden fruit.

Please, hope you'd update soon and spare me of the mind torture from wanting more!