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pinku12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Awesome dear
plz do pm me

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Teaser For Part 2
"Please believe me. I want to free you from here" She snickered at him mockingly. "You free me from here so I be in your debt right? That is how one works. How will I be paying your debt? Dancing for you or will you auction me off or better yet have me entertain you in the bedroom" she spat out spitefully."FIRDAUS" He shouted
Ta da... 😆Who's firdaus??? 😲& where is Madhu???
Another unexpected twist***********************************UPDATE BELOW

Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago

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SuRu

@My_VivJaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

really awesome start nd teaser is good dear...😊

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jazzdh

@jazzdh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Nice teaser update soon
And do pm me

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Mahi Singh

@Kaya13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesum can't wait 4 updt...pm me plz.

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Q and A'z
Right I'll just need to clear a few things some were confused with the first part.
How is Firdaus His Keep?The Word keep means many things, it could be corroborated in many ways. Here its used as preserved, or maintaining her care or in other words amanat. Firdaus is Vikram's keep meaning her life is co-ordinated by him, she's his keep as she's indebted to him.
Why? Firdaus's brother as I mentioned in the first part died in an unfortunate incident which will be later explained as the story moves forward. After his death, vikram took Firdaus in since she had no one by her side and because he took her in he believes she owes him and like some people he was lured by the devil to use her in gaining riches. Entertain men with her dance, money will be raking in. This was her pay back to him for taking care of her
Why she is forbidden? Though he used her, she was still his best friend's little sister whom he does adore. As you've seen in this update he still respects Firdaus's brother.
Firdaus is a name, its a muslim unisex name, girls and boys do have this name.(Like my Imaan 😳 Heck I didn't know girls have this till I heard it from someone)The meaning for Firdaus means Garden.However Islamically it means The Highest Garden In Heaven.That is the meaning which I've used for Firdaus here, highest garden in heaven.P.S - If I have a daughter in future (In Sha Allah) I'm keeping this name, so don't you lot take it, meri copyright hai uss par 😆
Anyways hope this clears your confusion now, if you've anymore questions do let me know, I'll answer them in this way because I've no time to answer separately 🤢
& Innocence coming tomorrow as its nearly 2 am here and I'm tired.
Follow update thread please as I don't send pms.

(PS - copied this note from other forum 😆 since I forgot who asked these questions)

Please Its A Request Do Leave Me Your Feedback As Nothing Motivates Us Writers Than Your Views On Our Works.

Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 12 years ago

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RainAndRainbow

@RainAndRainbow

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

okay firdaus is not madhu???? Is she???

n that man is RK???

Hell m confused...

But I enjoyed it...

Is vikram a negative character???

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Sweety

@sweetdear

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Wow!! One amazing update.👏..me guessing Firdaus is what RK used to address her mebbe in their childhood😳..anyways now am eagerly waiting for ur next update as RK n we all get some answers😆