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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: DevilClan
Sorry for being late. Awesum piece. So Sara don't knw anything abt hr Mom.

no worry and yes sara is unaware

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Sara s der daughtr.. Bt in 1st chap it didnt felt lk.. Wow great.. Rk.. Havin hard time Takin care... Sending her to saloon.. Poor Sara.. Dat actully crakd me up.. 🤣 Bittuji becharey Chief madhu nd nw Sara Ka maara 🤣 oh Jasu Contn soon.. Wanna c wats his reactn to d news he just found ... Oh nd y dis too r apart... I know i know u not gonna reveal dat too soon.. So... Am waitn... Bye gn

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RuthlessQueen

@RuthlessQueen

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: iiDona

Ears ringing? You poor darling! Hahah even the weather's being a pain to you! Hmm looks like it's not your day! But definitely my day coz I got so many updates from my favourite stories, plus my Rishbala! ❤️

Oh you lucky girl! You are blessed with curls, though I can imagine it can be a pain when brushing. 😆

Oh Bittu pumpkin! I love that man for that! I knew it too 😳 He's such a sweetheart!

Aww come on! You did a great job! So by the end of this story you'll get over that phobia! Not to worry! 😆

Any time Dona! 😊

Edited by RuthlessQueen - 12 years ago

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Desire6
Sara s der daughtr.. Bt in 1st chap it didnt felt lk.. Wow great.. Rk.. Havin hard time Takin care... Sending her to saloon.. Poor Sara.. Dat actully crakd me up.. 🤣
meant to be funny because it is 😉 I am glad things are being revealed the way I intended
Bittuji becharey Chief madhu nd nw Sara Ka maara 🤣 oh Jasu Contn soon.. Wanna c wats his reactn to d news he just found ... Oh nd y dis too r apart... I know i know u not gonna reveal dat too soon.. So... Am waitn... Bye gn
Thank you. Opposites attract I suppose and you know I can't keep a secret so, the wait wont take that long. DW.

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

hmmm... does she live there too?? I think it is too early to make judgements caz I still have to see how you shape up the characters, but one thing I must say here is, even if you separate from your spouse, you never leave your child behind. Parents are an integral part of a childs life and though the parents may not love each other anymore or have misunderstandings between them, the children should not bear the brunt of the situation...

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: luvera
hmmm... does she live there too??
who & where?
I think it is too early to make judgements caz I still have to see how you shape up the characters, but one thing I must say here is, even if you separate from your spouse, you never leave your child behind.
Moral compass RED FLAGS raised. All lines of defense out😆 Yes, you should probably hang on a tad bit more.
Parents are an integral part of a childs life and though the parents may not love each other anymore or have misunderstandings between them, the children should not bear the brunt of the situation...
very true in real life...in the story, you will find out soon😉

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: iiDona

Was asking if Madhu lived at the monastery or at some quarters provided by the school or something?

Sorry about that... A friend of mine is in a similar situation, where the mother left the kids and moved to a whole different country... Kinda sucks for the kids...

Edited by luvera - 12 years ago

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Sonali92

@Sonali92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

OMG...i didn't know that you started a new story...thank god i saw it now...

oh loved the first two parts...first i was confused and didn't really get what was going on...but after the second part i understood more...but still have thousend questions like what happened...why is madhu not with her daughter...why she left her with him...but think i have to wait...

very interesting...

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: luvera
Was asking if Madhu lived at the monastery or at some quarters provided by the school or something?
yes
Sorry about that... A friend of mine is in a similar situation, where the mother left the kids and moved to a whole different country... Kinda sucks for the kids...
No worries, I was only kidding. yes, it does. what can you do? hang in there, I have more story to tell😊

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: sonnal_17
OMG...i didn't know that you started a new story...thank god i saw it now...
oh loved the first two parts...first i was confused and didn't really get what was going on...but after the second part i understood more...but still have thousend questions like what happened...why is madhu not with her daughter...why she left her with him...but think i have to wait...
very interesting...

yes, you will have to wait just a little longer. another chapter or two perhaps. your questions will be answered one by one as the story progresses