A Pkyek & Mb Mix FF :- Part 1 Updated On PG.12.

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Ok Guys...Ab thodi der me is idea ke wajah se pagal na ho jau,So I thought to post it finally.As This Thing was in my mind from few months.But I never thought to give it a try.But now I'm doing it.Don't throw jutta-chappals at me if you don't like it. 😆
This SS/FF will include some pkyek charachters.My favourite ones.But No Abhiya would be there.That's why posting it in this Forum.It would be a Rishabala Story only but will include pkyek charachters more which I hope you will like. 😊

Here's the prologue,

The two brothers were playing in their home.It was a huge mansion.They belonged from a rich and influential family
in Dehradun.The elder one was Twelve and the little brother was ten.Both looked very cute and adorable.They were
Sidharth and Rishabh Kundra.
Both were playing Cricket in the garden of the mansion and Rishab was batting and Sid bowling to him.When Suddenly Rishab shot the ball up in the air with hism
bat and It finally landed on their Old Dadi's head(Who is no more in the present.🤣 😆)thump from above as She was going out of the house to the temple.She wrenched in pain and stod holdhng her head there.She was facing her back to Sid and Rishabh.So She haven't seen whose action was
that and before she could turn and see,Sidharth grabs the bat from Rishabh's hand.
And Said to him,

"Little brother just stay silent for some time,I'll handle the situation,Ok?"

Rishabh just nodded his head in agreement...

Till that time Dadi saw them and even Haseena and Chand came there hearing Dadi's cries from outside.
Chand seeing that Dadi was injured,Chand just glared angrily at the direction of their naughty kids and asked Haseena
to take Dadi inside.Haseena followed his request But Also said Him to not be too strict with the kids and handle them
gently knowing how Strict and polite He was.And then She leaves for inside with Dadi.
Chand moved towards Sid and Rishabh and politely asked them,
Chand :-"Whose mistake was that?Tell me honestly at once or Otherwise you will both get punished."
Sid without taking a minute said,
Sidharth :- "Dad it was my Fault."...He said and then bow his head down to show fake guilt.
Chand :- "Sidharth,I already told both of you not play cricket at home,Play it in Ground only.Then why you never follow the rules?""
Sid :- "Dad Rules are only meant to be broken."He said with a chuckle.
Chand gave him an angry glare and He instantly tried to covered his words and said,
Sid :- "Dad I mean Mera khelna ka bahut man tha Toh Maine Socha ki hum ghar par khel lete hai.Ground par jaane mai time lagta isliye."
Chand :- "Just Shut-up Sidharth.You are elder brother between both of them and Only you do all the mistakes.I never saw Rishabh doing anything naughty.But You are going to leave a bad effect on him too.Your punishment is,You are
going to stay in home for next full montht.Just School to Home,No PlayGround,Games and Nothing,Is it Clear?
Sid just nods his head and Rishabh was just staring at him aware of what is coming next...
Chand :- "Your punishment is not over yet.Bring your Hands up."
Sid followed the instructions.And Chand took a long and thick stick which was placed in the garden and hit at both his hands 10 times each until They were fully red and He have tears in his eyes.And Rishabh have already started sobbing silently seeing his Big-Brother's condition.But Chand didn't symtpatthized with Sid and just left from there
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After Chand left,Rishabh started crying holding Sid's hand...He said betwn his sobs...
Rishabh :- "Bhai Its all bcoz of me,Why you always take my blame on yourself?
Sid :- "I just saved my ownself...My life lies in you little brother.And I'm not at all hurt.I'm totally fine.Ok Now stop crying,It bothers me more than any punishment."
Rishabh :- "I love you Bhai!You are the best Brother in the world."
Sid :- "I already know that.Tell me something new little-brother." He smirked and then both let out a laugh.

The Kundras got shifted to Mumbai the same year.

After 12 years.(Still in the Past)

In Kundra Mansion,

Rishabh :- "How could you Bhai?,How could you do this?Because of you I lost my love.Bcoz of you My Tanya is no more.I hate you Sidharth.I will never forgive you for this."

Sidarth :- "Yes,Everything happen coz of me,It was all my plan.Happy to Hear this little brother?!And Ya I'm leaving this House,This name(Kundra) forever.I'm going back to US Dad,Right
Now?"
Haseena tried to interrupt,"But Son..."
Chand :- "No Haseena,Let him go.What He did is unforgivable.I feel ashamed to call him my son."
To Sid,"I don't need a son like you.You are a filthy spot on our family's name.I disown you."
Sid :- "You will disown me?!Comeon Daddy Dearest,I already disowned you and your So Called 'Obedient' Son."
And With That,He came forward and take Haseena's blessings and hugged her,
Sid :- "Mom,I will miss you.And Don't worry I'll be in touch with you.Ok?!"
Haseena just nodded her head in agreement as Sid turned to leave.
Rishabh who was a silent spectator of all this speak up from behind,
"You are going to regret what you did to her Sidharth.You will pay for it.You took away my life from me,Now I'll make it sure to make your life hell.Stay Ready to face Rishabh Kundra...Big Brother!" He said with his most famous smirk.
Sid :- "I will be waiting,Little Brother."He said without turning around in his direction and Then Sidharth lefts from there and from India too.

After 5 years.(Present)

In Kundra Industries,
RK :- "Bittuji I want to know everything about this girl,Her past life,Her Connection with Sidarth,And Yes Most Importantly Her Full Proper Identity and all this in two hours."
Bittuji :- "Yes Chief!"
And He leaves from there.

After 2 hours,
Bittuji came inside RK's cabin and give him the details.
"Chief,Her name is Madhubala Malik Raichand,She is basically an orphan,Mr.Sidharth Raichand is her caretaker.He haujd taken her responsibility when She was just Thirteen and He was nineteen at that time and used to Study in US where He first met her in her orphonage.He have legally adopted her.But They share a friendly relation.He is her legal Guardian and They share a namely Brother-Sister Relationship.She is life to Sidharth and same goes for her too.He is everything for her.That's all I got to know.Also One Thing More Chief,They are coming to Indian soon maybe by this
weekend for some business deal.He wants to Shift in India soon."

RK :- "Great job Bittuji.!! You always know how to impress me.You can leave now."
Bittuji :- "Ok Chief.!"
And He leaves the cabin with a smile.

After He left RK got up from his seat and said to no one in particular,
"Time for Some Action Sidharth.You never told me that you have an adopted sister too.Now Lets see How will you save this girl from your little brother...Madhubala Ahaan!" He said with his most famous evil smirk on his face.

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Charachter Sketch


Rishabh Kundra (RK) :- One of the top business tycoons.He is inhumanely handsome and gorgeous with Killer looks and an attitude to die for.His one look is enough to faint girls.Girls are always behind him,Ready to throw themselves on him.But He don't give them any attention.Only Loved One girl in his past who was his life.He is 25years old.Only Loves his Mom-Dad and His Sister Misha alot.After Sid,She is her only life now.Revenge is his only aim in life.

Misha Kundra :- RK's and Sid's little sister.She is tomboyish,naughty,Prankster.independent who live life on her own terms.Don't give a shit to what ppl and the world says...She just listens to her heart.She is 22years old.And the youngest among her siblings.Misha loves both his brothers Sid and RK very much and equally.She is disheartened to see them seperated and wants to see them together again.Is the only person who knows the actual truth about Sid's behaviour. 😉

Tanya (Tanushree Ambolkar aka T) :- I'm not disclosing much about her character now.Just That Here Her nick-name is not T but It is Tanya and She was Rishabh's girlfriend who died.She was not a bimbo here,But Quite Smart and Intelligent and Her Dressing is also not much like T in pkyek.She wears decent clothes,Mostly Jeans-Top in general and Gowns and Short Dresses Only in Parties.You can say She had a great fashion sense. Other details about her charachter will be revealed as the story will progress.

Sidharth Kundra/Raichand :- His Charachter will be revealed in the story.I will just Tell Some Things about him like,He loves her sister Misha alot. When He used to Study in U.S at the age of 17 to 20.He met Madhu there and He felt an attachment with her.Just as Strong as He feel for Misha and found her like a sister and took her responsibility and even adopted her legally.They both a share a strong Brother-Sister bond.And After Leaving India and his Family,He officially changed his last name to Raichand and So He did Madhu's too.And Therefore She cannot be counted as a Kundra.She is Totally Sid's responsibility and His New Family who is Now the reason of his life.She is a Raichand.Sid's age is 29.And He is One of the most Successful Indian business tycoon in abroad and He settled his empire on his own.Every Company in India and the world wants to join hands with him and make one deal with him.And He is Cute and Handsome.Have Killer Attitude.He is the biggest Casanova in town.Flirty by nature and Cunning like hell.He have an extra-ordinary sense of humour with Charming looks and Smart One-liners.Any Girl can fall for him in seconds.

Madhubala Malik Raichand :- She is a bubbly,A happy go lucky girl who lives life to the fullest.Give Tit for Tat to Those who tries to mess with her or her brother.She didn't removed Malik from her name Coz It was her real family's name.She loves and respect Sid the most in her life.And always feels lucky that She have a guardian and brother like him who is always there to support her,protect her and stand by her side always.Knows Little about his Past and Family.But Knew one thing That He loves his family alot and There must be some serious reasons to Why He don't lives with them.But She don't try to dig out his past and especially about her brother.She can see some strong pain in his eyes whenever someone takes his brother's name in front of him.She is 23 years of age and Help Sid in his Business.And She is a divine beauty.Simply Gorgeous and Innocently Beautiful.Boy die to go on one date with her.But She don't gave them another look.She believes in True love and Hopes that oneday She will find someone who will match-up to her level and Truely loves her by heart and not only bcoz of her beauty.😉

Haseena Kundra :- RK's,Sid's and Misha's mom.Very Caring by nature.Care alot for her Children.And Unhappy with RK's and Sid's split.

Chand Kundra :- A strict business man and Father.One of the top-buisenessman in India.Don't Show it Too much But Loves all his three kids alot and equally.

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Note :- Okay It was the main concept guys.I know It was full-on bakwas.So Tell me your views then only I will continue.And Also I'm not a good writer So I don't know whether I will be able to continue it allalone.So If anyone would like to join me.It would be great.Coz Its tough for me to continue it all alone.So Do let me know If anyone wants to join me.Pls Its a request.Do Consider it. 😉

P.S :- Whoever reading this post in the begining,Pls Help To Turn this post pink by leaving your likes and especially comments. 😉 😳

P.P.S. :- As This is mb forum,Many people may have not seen pkyek,So pls can someone Post Photos of the actors and let me know as I don't know how to post photos and from mobile its a tough job for me.So pls It would be great if someone can post the photos,Pls. 😊
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65 views and not a single like. 😭 Are Yar Kuch nahi toh Ye hi bata do That How horrible it was. 😆
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Intrstng start dear..
loved it
continue soon
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Thanks. 😊
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Originally posted by: drashtiluv

Intrstng start dear..
loved it
continue soon


Thankyou so much. 😃 I will try to update soon. 😳
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hye it was awsome plz send me pm
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Originally posted by: Pujark3

hye it was awsome plz send me pm


Thanks. 😊 I will pm you when I update. 😳

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