A sulbala OS: The workout~ NOTE-page 9

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sandiab
Dnt knw what to write hot had a brain freeze coz of the hotness of your os. God if just half of this could happen in the show viewers would die from the heat radiating from their screens.

Hehe thank you so much:D glad my OS had an effect on you😉 & Same I would die if they ever had a scene like this in the show

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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-
the title makes me excited, sulltan working out uffttt what a sighttt

SARAAA<3 kothi this OS made me die from inside by far the HOTTEST OS i've read on them the first para made me like amsnAKSDKADMNADSNAMZDNsa, I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS IS YYOUR FIRST OS LIKEE SERIOUSLY. you write SOOO well.

Aryan loved his choco's more than anything & so stopped it before he got his 'mum' angry. "mumma sultan said you have to go & make him tea", Madhu blushed a little as she usually does when she hears sultans name. It's been a year but even his name or just a mention of him can get her going red in a minute. She got out of the covers & went to the bathroom to freshen herself before she greeted her 'jaanu'. He hates it when she calls him that but he won't say anything to his love

omggg awww. this is the cutest bit ever, i can see madhu calling sultaan jaanu. 

damn kuriye the rest of the OS made my insides explode, no lie it was sooo hot and passionate and am just sitting here like i wnna sit on sultan whike hes doing his workout OOOFTTT[☺️

ultan traced madhu's jawline with his lips faintly nuzzling her but not kissing her this time. From her expressions he could tell that she was aching for him but couldn't do anything about it. Madhu intertwined her legs with sultan's as he continued doing his business;) "sultan I thought you were working out..." She anxiously asked. "I'm already doing my workout..." Madhu was confused for a second "...on youuu",

LKBBNDMFC>KJHGVB NMKLUHGVBNKL:KJHGVBNM ME GONEEE THIS IS HOTTT LIKE OMGGG I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN LIKE PLSSS. this was written so well dudeee😳

THE KISSS THOOO, OHH MAA GAAADDD I am GONEEE sooo hott and passionate, god please make the cv's read this so we get a scene like this pls,

ending was just perfect.

overall it was a HOT OS with so much passion and intensity. It was written beautifully, do write more on them😳

keep it up my sultana🤣

love you

xo

Ahahaha well who wouldn't die when they see sultan & workout in the same line together?!😉😆
& ASSDHK THANK YOUU SOOO MUCHH EEEKS IT MAKES ME FEEL KHUSHH KNOWING YOU LOVED IT SINCE YOU'RE A FAB WRITER YOURSELF😳😃
Assahzggaa trust me I was burning inside whilst writing this OS☺️☺️ the image of sultan in a black vest & then shirtless was distracting me so much😛
Hehehehe my favourite part of the OS😛 even I liked that part mainly cause of that dialogue;) naughty sultan is the best pls❤️
HAAAYE IF THE CVS EVER HAD A KISS LIKE THIS I'D SHARE LADDOOS TO ALL MY NEIGHBOURS jks I'm too kanjoos I'll probably just fangirl with you guys🤣🤣🤣
Awww thank you soo much for the comment<3 love youu SOOO muchh & thank you my fellow sultana😎 XOXO