A sulbala OS: The workout~ NOTE-page 9

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Heyy sulbala-ians I dunno whatever we call the fandom😆😃 i'm saraa & its my first actual topic in the forum, aah I've never wrote an OS or a story on any couple ever but my girls (who are fellow sulbala-ians) like moii kinda forced me to write one so I spent like 3-4 hours writing it😳😛 this OS is specially dedicated to my twips,Foz & amuu<3 lovee youu guys🤗 forgive me for any mistakes or if its crap, this is the best I could do & sulbala haters please stay away.




It was an early Saturday morning, just the sun slowly peeking in through and adorning Madhu's face as she slept away. She had been playing with aryan all day yesterday and ended up falling asleep next to him. As she turned to her left side she felt something tickling her, she tried to shoo it away but it just got more annoying. Madhu heard some faint giggling in the background & knew it was aryan doing it, "aryan stop it or else no chocolates today". Aryan loved his choco's more than anything & so stopped it before he got his 'mum' angry. "mumma sultan said you have to go & make him tea", Madhu blushed a little as she usually does when she hears sultans name. It's been a year but even his name or just a mention of him can get her going red in a minute. She got out of the covers & went to the bathroom to freshen herself before she greeted her 'jaanu'. He hates it when she calls him that but he won't say anything to his love.

There he was, across the hall in his black vest outlining his glistening biceps & his favourite blue jeans as he constantly did push-ups whilst listening to various different songs on repeat, half of them were romantic songs that were put in by madhu after having a long argument (more like an order) but oh well he'll do anything to make her happy.

He felt a sense of warmth approaching him slowly from the hallway, it was perfect that the song was already on 'labon ko' setting the scene even more well;) sultan didnt have to turn to know that madhu was at that door just drooling away over him, so just to tease her more he took his vest off (back turned) & then continued to do more push-ups so she can get a 'perfect view' of his sexy back. She approached forward, one..,, two...three.,,.four & just as she was going to call his name, sultan tripped her over causing madhu to fall on top of him but he quickly pinned her to the floor as she tightly shut her eyes with fear. "Madhuu..." It was a mere whisper but it was enough to get her going. "Sult-" she tried to say his full name but having a hungry sultan softly kissing your neck can distract you a lot. He was starting from the side of her angelic betroot face & going down to her bare neck, the fragrance of madhu's hair wasn't helping that he couldn't help himself but bite deeply over the place he kissed her. Madhu wanted to say something but no words were coming out, "pleaaasee sult...aaan" his grip on her hand was getting harder so she knew trying to get away from him will be futile especially when he was working out aswell.

"Sul...taaan what are you doing?" she couldn't get her words out properly but sultan heard her alright. "Shhh... Don't say anything" trying to get her to shut up. "Labon koo labon pe sajao" as those words played in the background, sultan traced madhu's jawline with his lips faintly nuzzling her but not kissing her this time. From her expressions he could tell that she was aching for him but couldn't do anything about it. Madhu intertwined her legs with sultan's as he continued doing his business;) "sultan I thought you were working out..." She anxiously asked. "I'm already doing my workout..." Madhu was confused for a second "...on youuu", she looked up surprisingly at his bedazzling eyes that spoke 1000 words. This always happens. Whenever she gazes at him she ends up being captured in his eyes. It's like he has some magic in them that she doesn't know. He had a glinse of cheekiness in them but Madhu was too engaged into them to even notice.
Sultan knew this was the perfect time to strike. He leaned in towards her and brushed his lips on the top of her lips breaking a rather distracted madhu. She didn't know what to do except respond back so she did. Sultan kept going deeper & more passionate whilst madhu returned the kiss just as equally. Suddenly Madhu felt her hands going looser from sultans grip and so took this opportunity to be free. Poor sultan fell on the floor with a jerk waking him up from his dreamland.

Madhu started giggling at his plight but also was breathless seeing his abs displayed infront of her. "Laugh all you want but admit that you loved it" he flirtatiously announced with a wink. "Oh please I was just caught up in the moment" sultan smirked as he got up & walked towards madhu but the sherni wasn't scared of him. After all she knows him inside out. He grabbed her waist & crashed her into his body. "How about you help me excercise?" He said in a hushed tone, Madhu blushed 50 shades of red "howw?" She asked curiously, but she knew exactly what he was on about.

Before she knew it there she was on top of his shirtless back as he did push-ups like he was dough before. Madhu enjoyed this as now she was in the drivers seat and had the chance to tease his senses. She tickled his back dimples and gently traced along them as she heard sultans breath getting heavier & more heavier with each touch. "What happened jaanu...I haven't even started yet" she hissed playfully in his ears. She kissed his earlobes all over as he tried to ignore it & keep exercising but it was useless cause he was just getting turned on with whatever she did. In a flash, Sultan flipped over so Madhu was on top of his stomach now, "would you give me a workout like this everyday baby?" She flushed red like a tomato but replied with "depends, only if you wake me up personally I might" sultan grinned "ohh so you want me to be your personally alarm, don't worry that's if you get any sleep at night" as he said that he pecked her lips cheekily leaving a dazed and startled Madhu.
Edited by -MzIndependant- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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☺️RESS =D

finally editing! sorry for taking so long...the good thing is that i get to read ur amazing work all over again 😃 ❤️
awww thanks for the dedication twips! <333
lmaooo love the way u said haters stay away 🤣

I can visualise the scene so well UR DESCRIPTIONS ARE AMAZING!
hahahah aryan baby loves his chocos too much aww :P
AWWWH he calls madhu mumma thats so damn cute :')
oye hoye madhu blushing just by hearing the name 😉
AWWH 'jaanu' this means SulBala are in love from the start of ur OS...i like it 😈😉

OIOI sultz workin out in that black vest mmm and lmaoo madhu made him play love songs🤣

JKDDHFJDFHD OMGGG WHAT A TEASERRR HE TOOK HIS VEST OFF TO TEASE MADHU DAYUMN IM GETTING ALL HSDJDSJNDF HEREEE

HOLY SHXT MANNN THIS OS IS SETTIN MA SCREEN ON FIIIREEE!!!
First he trips her and pins her under him THEN he whispers her name THEN HE STARTS KISSIN HER NECK OGMOMOMG AAAH SJDHDJDSKKJDS

OOOH ITS GETTING HOTTERRR AHHH HES TRACING HER JAWLINE WITH HIS LIPS AJDJK I CNT BREATHEEE
"I'm already doing my workout..." Madhu was confused for a second "...on youuu"
DEAD ☺️


THIS EFFING FORUM WONT LET ME EDIT ANYMORE KEEPS SAYING INVALID WORDS WHEN IM NOT EVEN BASHING MY KEYS ANYMORE N ACTUALLY REPLYING PROPERLY 😡

~continues editing~
ah madhu i can empathise with you we all get lost in sultan's magical eyes

WOW THAT KISS OMG THE WAY HE WENT IN AND THEN THE ACTUAL KISS IM DEAD PLZ ☺️
LOOOL MADHU ESCAPED BUT NOT REALLY COZ HE GOT HER AGAIN AND OMGOMG THE WAY SHE 'HELPED HIM EXERCISE' AH SULTAN LET ME BE ON UR BACK AS U DO PRESSUPS PLZ ☺️

OYEE HOYEEE THE SHERNI HAS COME OUT DAMN MADHU TEASING SULTS AHAH SO DAMN HAWT AND THE ENDING *THUD* PERSONAL ALARM && 'IF I LET U SLEEP AT NIGHT' AHHH *COMBUSTS*

wowoow that was A BRILLIANT OS 👏 UR WRITING IS SUPERB UR DESCRIPTIONS BLEW ME AWAY IT WAS SUCH AN INTENSE HOT AND PASSIONATE OS MY CHEEKS MATCH THE BG OF THIS FORUM (THE RED STARRY BG :P) AND FOR SOMEONE WHO DOES NO ESSAY WRITING IN HER DEGREE, (MISS DOCTOR-2-BE 😎) THIS OS WAS JUST OUTSTANDING 👏
PLS WRITE MORE IF AND WHEN U GET TIME =D

and i edited my comment on this auspicious day lmaoo IM STILL SO BUZZED THAT AVINESH REPLIED TO U ON TWITTER OMGOMGOMG STIL DYING OVER HIS REPLY
CONGO TWIPS 🥳😃
Edited by L0V3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reserved! need to die over this all over again ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow... SulMa OSs are soo saucy ..isit the same with all fandom??

Who cares...Loved the writing...very sexy !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dnt knw what to write hot had a brain freeze coz of the hotness of your os. God if just half of this could happen in the show viewers would die from the heat radiating from their screens.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the title makes me excited, sulltan working out uffttt what a sighttt

SARAAA<3 kothi this OS made me die from inside by far the HOTTEST OS i've read on them the first para made me like amsnAKSDKADMNADSNAMZDNsa, I CANNOT BELIEVE THIS IS YYOUR FIRST OS LIKEE SERIOUSLY. you write SOOO well.


Aryan loved his choco's more than anything & so stopped it before he got his 'mum' angry. "mumma sultan said you have to go & make him tea", Madhu blushed a little as she usually does when she hears sultans name. It's been a year but even his name or just a mention of him can get her going red in a minute. She got out of the covers & went to the bathroom to freshen herself before she greeted her 'jaanu'. He hates it when she calls him that but he won't say anything to his love

omggg awww. this is the cutest bit ever, i can see madhu calling sultaan jaanu.

damn kuriye the rest of the OS made my insides explode, no lie it was sooo hot and passionate and am just sitting here like i wnna sit on sultan whike hes doing his workout OOOFTTT[☺️

ultan traced madhu's jawline with his lips faintly nuzzling her but not kissing her this time. From her expressions he could tell that she was aching for him but couldn't do anything about it. Madhu intertwined her legs with sultan's as he continued doing his business;) "sultan I thought you were working out..." She anxiously asked. "I'm already doing my workout..." Madhu was confused for a second "...on youuu",

LKBBNDMFC>KJHGVB NMKLUHGVBNKL:KJHGVBNM ME GONEEE THIS IS HOTTT LIKE OMGGG I WANT THIS TO HAPPEN LIKE PLSSS. this was written so well dudeee😳

THE KISSS THOOO, OHH MAA GAAADDD I am GONEEE sooo hott and passionate, god please make the cv's read this so we get a scene like this pls,

ending was just perfect.

overall it was a HOT OS with so much passion and intensity. It was written beautifully, do write more on them😳

keep it up my sultana🤣

love you

xo

Edited by -ScarletRose- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well i m rishbala fan😳
but loved ur os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic OS!!
So Hot, if atleast half of this happened in the show, I would faint!! ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful OS! <3
Loved it!! Very Hot!!
It will be awesome if this happens in the show!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh my this is just too adorable and romantic! To say I enjoyed it is less I loved it! I really hope you write more! 😊

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