FF: Bewafa- Madhu's Version note PG14 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love Madhu's version...she's so strong...i admire her for that...i am not that strong...i can never be...want to kill rk for hurting her...he doesn't deserve forgiveness...thx for writing this amazing story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonnal_17

i love Madhu's version...she's so strong...i admire her for that...i am not that strong...i can never be...want to kill rk for hurting her...he doesn't deserve forgiveness...thx for writing this amazing story

Thank you. Do read RK's version. not only for the full picture but also the partial denial... the moving around the crime.
Also, God forbid anyone ever has to go through this but, you never know until put in that position. the most unsuspecting of people stand ground. The weakest looking ones, stay strong. Thank you for appreciating my work, it is only amazing because you read it :)
I will try not to forget that
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Posted: 12 years ago
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glad that madhu has decided to follow her passion,...but poor girl can't get her mind off that beast...nice update
Edited by aksuji - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aksuji

glad that madhu has decided to follow her passion,...but poor girl can't get her mind off that beast...nice update

I am afraid the memory never really goes away. It is permanent like the acid marks, reminding her everyday that the life as she knew it is over and it is time to embrace the change before the change engulfs her being. Because her whole is torn and she needs to put it back together, dance might be her only glue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lk dis strong madhu, she s tryn to get hm out of d mind.. But well said.. I lkd d way u compard Rk wit acid marks... Gud she s takn her lf her dance bk to her lf aftr luv betrayd cheatd her.. Gud dat I read Rk uersion 1st coz aftr readn dis i feel lk killn hm to piece.. I cant tolerate dem wit anybody else ..here nd neithr n show. Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desire6

Lk dis strong madhu, she s tryn to get hm out of d mind.. But well said.. I lkd d way u compard Rk wit acid marks...

thank you. she was trying to take her mind of things but, she found him even in the inanimate objects.
Gud she s takn her lf her dance bk to her lf aftr luv betrayd cheatd her..
the dance she wants as opposed to the bollywood style yes
Gud dat I read Rk uersion 1st coz aftr readn dis i feel lk killn hm to piece..
😆 I am glad both versions are doing what they are intended to do.
I cant tolerate dem wit anybody else ..here nd neithr n show. Nice update
if this is a threat, consider it perceived. I am not planning to bring in a kabaab mein haddi anytime soon. not until you guys remain acche bacche


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I never like unhappy endings. Bt in this story I want one. I Don't want Rishabh n Madhu together. Felt Madhu's pain in first part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DevilClan

I never like unhappy endings. Bt in this story I want one. I Don't want Rishabh n Madhu together. Felt Madhu's pain in first part.

every story has a climax, I can promise you a climax but nothing beyond that.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
If only it was as easy to erase the act like trying to clean up the filthy bathroom with bleach..

And second guessing yourself, and the moments you once cherished..not knowing whether they were as special as you thought them to be or just a mirage..the thoughts just corrode you from inside..the love doesnt go but bitterness creeps in..

And finally the regret..the regret of chosing your love over your life..over your identity..

trying to go back to what you were bit by bit..seeking refuge in the old familiarity..
The pieces are definitely hers to pick..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'd love to hear how.

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