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Posted: 12 years ago
Rishab n Madhu are right on their part...
Awesome update Simi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz continue jaldi!!!
Btw I unresd my cmmnt on prev pg!!
Edited by Kaya13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am literally sitting here squealing like a little girl...
Rishabh is such a gentleman but only if madhu could see that instead of believing that stupid des! Amazing update!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety2728

I am literally sitting here squealing like a little girl...
Rishabh is such a gentleman but only if madhu could see that instead of believing that stupid des! Amazing update!




:D I couldn't agree more.

Next part coming up soon!

btw have posted R&B :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
whoa di, i was waiting frm yesterday...

nw eagerly waiting to read SD bt @first goin to read R & D 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks guys for all your wonderful comments.
Here are the links for SD:
And R&B:
Thanks!
S
Edited by simikr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi !! I loved the update it was worth the wait .
Well u r absolutely right , this ff is very real and to justice to those characters you have to think according to the circumstances and not what majority of the people would like !! I really love the fact that you have a very strong stand when it comes to this story , the idea about how it will go forward and yes Madhu is human so she does have r a right to feel bad , get mad and have doubts but from the very begning I have felt that she is very strong the way she has handled herself and the situations .
She was not gullible and did not take any crap and succomed to crying or decided to be a sati savitri and stay quiet and and let the chips fall where the may , I cant stand when women do that when the portray themselvs to be weak and leave it saying it was their destiny your Madhu fought and she fought with pride she made up her mind to leave and it was Rishabh who stopped her .
I know that its fiction and that we should read it to enjoy but I cant help there so many ffs where female protagonists are shown just opposite without any self respect and I feel when we create somethig on such a huge platform like if we should keep in mind the resposibilty we take upon ourselves as in the end we are portrying a female and if demand respect from others as females we should begin first to giving it to ourselves. I do not have it me to forgive a person if he did something Rishabh has done or to trust him again and I know not many people can do that too so we should keep this in mind before expecting it out of others but in the end Rishsbh is repenting and he does love her I and it was important to handle Madhu the way he did otherwise she would have ended up getting hurt.
I can connect to your story and thats why i like it so much !! Its really refreshing and sorry to bore you with such a long comment but I couldnt help my self !!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ravs123

Hi !! I loved the update it was worth the wait .
Well u r absolutely right , this ff is very real and to justice to those characters you have to think according to the circumstances and not what majority of the people would like !! I really love the fact that you have a very strong stand when it comes to this story , the idea about how it will go forward and yes Madhu is human so she does have r a right to feel bad , get mad and have doubts but from the very begning I have felt that she is very strong the way she has handled herself and the situations .
She was not gullible and did not take any crap and succomed to crying or decided to be a sati savitri and stay quiet and and let the chips fall where the may , I cant stand when women do that when the portray themselvs to be weak and leave it saying it was their destiny your Madhu fought and she fought with pride she made up her mind to leave and it was Rishabh who stopped her .
I know that its fiction and that we should read it to enjoy but I cant help there so many ffs where female protagonists are shown just opposite without any self respect and I feel when we create somethig on such a huge platform like if we should keep in mind the resposibilty we take upon ourselves as in the end we are portrying a female and if demand respect from others as females we should begin first to giving it to ourselves. I do not have it me to forgive a person if he did something Rishabh has done or to trust him again and I know not many people can do that too so we should keep this in mind before expecting it out of others but in the end Rishsbh is repenting and he does love her I and it was important to handle Madhu the way he did otherwise she would have ended up getting hurt.
I can connect to your story and thats why i like it so much !! Its really refreshing and sorry to bore you with such a long comment but I couldnt help my self !!




Awww...thank you xxx and a huge hug!

Didn't expect such a spontaneous comment from anyone and it really was a wonderful, wonderful surprise!! And let me tell you that it is definitely not long and boring!!

This is what a writer I guess always wishes for. That the readers can go into the deeper aspects of the story and try to get at what the author is driving at.

Thank you for your lovely compliments. I will and have never written something that I'm uncomfortable with. I'm not driven by TRPS! ;) And I believe that a good writer will attract readers just as a good show or movie will attract viewers.

I've seen women being shown as subservient too often and I cringe whenever I see that. And in this story I wanted to show that its the women who make the world go round and not the men as they seem to believe all the time. And Madhu will never compromise on her ideals.

Thanks again!

S


Edited by simikr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I like how you stated that the protagonists are flawed. It just takes a step closer to reality. Some people might not understand that but I believe a good story is a story that you as a readers can connect to. Hmm...I sound like my English/lit. Teacher lol. Loved the update and actually I think drunk madhu is funny. I actually imagined that scene where she got up and made her public announcement lol.
Edited by sweety2728 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Excellent update! Poor Rishab! My heart goes out to him as he just keeps trying to get Madhu to trust him and to give their marriage a chance. Poor Madhu can't get past the Black Widow's evil words. I hope she remembers that Rishab has always been honest with her. If he had wanted to, he could have kept her in the dark. He could have had a conjugal relationship with her from the beginning and have Des on the side. But he chose to be honest. He is NOT his father's son. I have my fingers crossed that the fuzz will clear soon and she will UNDERSTAND what he has been trying to convey to her.

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