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salekh1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

That was awesomee!!!

Reallly interesting

Please pm me

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-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: iiDona
Wow, that was intense.
Is this an OS?
How many parts do you plan to write?
Please let me know, I have commitment issues when it comes to long stories😆

thank you..😊 this is a two part ss (was originally an OS)...

will be updating the next part soon...😊

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-Dil-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ashred12
nice...
but can a girl forgive/forget so fast ?! esp. an unprepared bride !!

thank you...😊

you're right..I don't think a girl will be able to forgive such things easily...I used a literary license...😃

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Julie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

honestly, I enjoyed the story except for the "honeymoon" part. That was brutal. The beginning was very good and the idea is great (except the honeymoon part)

I also think no woman would get over an experience like that so fast.

I hope u cont and pm me with your next chapters. Maybe you can show Madhu being hesitant in being close to RK for a while?? That would be logical step.

Again i hope u cont

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punam2712

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

HOPE YOU CONTINUE

DONT END IT SO SOON

IT IS A GOOD START

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: 4ever4love
honestly, I enjoyed the story except for the "honeymoon" part. That was brutal. The beginning was very good and the idea is great (except the honeymoon part)

I also think no woman would get over an experience like that so fast.

I hope u cont and pm me with your next chapters. Maybe you can show Madhu being hesitant in being close to RK for a while?? That would be logical step.

Again i hope u cont

thank you..😊.I'm going to finish this ss by next chapter so I'm not sure how much I can actually show..but i'll definitely allow some time to pass...!.😊

But I do agree with you..It was brutal..Since this was supposed to be an OS i made her forgive him pretty fast...But if It was a ff I would made RK grovel like anything...😆

I was also hesitant at first to show RK being so outright cruel...hence the alcohol influence...!!!😆

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Julie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: dilnasheen

thank you..😊.I'm going to finish this ss by next chapter so I'm not sure how much I can actually show..but i'll definitely allow some time to pass...!.😊

But I do agree with you..It was brutal..Since this was supposed to be an OS i made her forgive him pretty fast...But if It was a ff I would made RK grovel like anything...😆
I was also hesitant at first to show RK being so outright cruel...hence the alcohol influence...!!!😆

I totally get it, after all it is a story and you have limited time as it is an OS.