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Seema

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Posted: 12 years ago

#751

v well written update.poor rk hahaha.thanx a lot for pm and continue soon.

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preetianand21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Nice update...not fair...to play orank on my Rishabh...I want him to take revenge on all four...please.

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luvera

@luvera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: preetianand21
Nice update...not fair...to play orank on my Rishabh...I want him to take revenge on all four...please.

Hahahaaha... Vengence on its way... Naaah... Rishab looked really cute in his smiley boxers... If I want to get another view of him in his boxers.. I don't care, I will make it rain Pikas.

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

On chapter 17 now and must comment before I forget. I despise liquor snobs. Just drink that shit, why be so uptight about it?

Also, I love the ramblings. They remind me of my thinking process.😆 One thing I don't quite understand is how Rishabh can be so actualizing when his economic equal Deepali is well, childish. Maybe because she does not have a viable career. Nonetheless, I am happy with the characterization so far. great work👏

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Is maya dumb or playing dumb? the girl had a wet dream. that would have been embarrassing, having someone right by your side when you wake up a mess. gosh i love you for writing this😊

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DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Chapter 20 gay or taken...story of my life.

I love Adam oh my gosh, you just described a real person for me. I love it...*squeals like a fangirl*

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

chapter 21 dude dont got the slightest of idea what he is getting himself into. akaash I just hate his guts. I don't know why I cannot stand him, he is too much of a suburbia average Joe.

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luvera

@luvera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: iiDona
On chapter 17 now and must comment before I forget. I despise liquor snobs. Just drink that shit, why be so uptight about it?
Also, I love the ramblings. They remind me of my thinking process.😆 One thing I don't quite understand is how Rishabh can be so actualizing when his economic equal Deepali is well, childish. Maybe because she does not have a viable career. Nonetheless, I am happy with the characterization so far. great work👏

Hahahahaaa Thanks!!! I had to put the liquor shit in caz I that day I was sorting thru my pics and found some where we had gone wine tasting on our way to Niagra...

Ouuuhhh... Ramblings and day dreams are the ways I come up with ideas... Also I draw a lot of my story ideas from real life scenarios...

Economic background may be the same... but the way each of them were brought up is different... While one was dotted on the other barely got a fleeting glance...

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: iiDona
Is maya dumb or playing dumb? the girl had a wet dream. that would have been embarrassing, having someone right by your side when you wake up a mess. gosh i love you for writing this😊

I kinda wrote that in retaliation... Why do guys always get to talk about their wet dreams!!! Well girls don't have any less a dirty mind...

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luvera

@luvera

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

Originally posted by: iiDona
Chapter 20 gay or taken...story of my life.
I love Adam oh my gosh, you just described a real person for me. I love it...*squeals like a fangirl*

Yeahhh... everyone loves Adam... If there was no Rishab in the story, I think Adam would be fawned over...