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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

i read the chapters from page 2 to page 5 and one word cmes to mind - mind blowing lol. plz put hyperlinks in index and plz pm me

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luvera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: deepak148
i read the chapters from page 2 to page 5 and one word cmes to mind - mind blowing lol. plz put hyperlinks in index and plz pm me

Thanks for the great review!!!

But trust me when I say I have read better FF's... Still have a long way to go, in terms of improvement...

Anyway coming to your point above, you will have to give me a step by step detailed information of how to do the above i.e. put in hyperlinks.

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840216

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

for creating hyper links, just copy the page no. where the update is and whenever u try to pm or post new reply, there will be globe like structure paste it there and there u will create hyperlinks and put it in index. then also pm me

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jeenia123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Hey. i read all the chapters in one go and these are just awesome... infect i have always liked long stories and this is going to be wonderful with fast updates...

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apolloartemis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Well done so far! Though I would suggest actually writing some of the dialogues to give a better sense of flow- just a suggestion!

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Piyali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Lovely dear...please pm me whenever you update...would love to read..
Its a totally different concept..never read of...loved it...

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preetianand21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Really nice and a different FF...please continue soon.

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luvera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: apolloartemis
Well done so far! Though I would suggest actually writing some of the dialogues to give a better sense of flow- just a suggestion!

I am still a young writer and have learnt that I am not a good active dialogue writer.. But will definitely keep your suggestion in mind and try to incorporate some active conversations when the time is right..

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luvera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: deepak148
for creating hyper links, just copy the page no. where the update is and whenever u try to pm or post new reply, there will be globe like structure paste it there and there u will create hyperlinks and put it in index. then also pm me

hmmm... Thanks, as you might have already guessed, I am pretty much technology challenged, so need all the help I can get!!!!

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