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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: aniiee

continue soon n do pm me!


yeah sure i ll definetly pm u whenevr i ll update d next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

*Great start! Keep it up!Thumbs Up* and cont son nd dont frgt to pm me


thanx alott dear
n yup i hav added u in my pm list n will definately pm u
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#13

PART-1

It was a beautiful mornig n as d frst ray of sun hit d window of d room a beautiful grl cuddled in her spread wid her cute teddy bear stirred a lil in her sleep her alarm started buzzing n she got disturbed, got up n thnked hr babaji fr d happiness he had provided her in her lyf.She is THE MADUBALA d princess of hr parnts n d only heir of MALLIK group of companies''

madhu got up quickly shooting a quick prayer to her babaji n went away to get dressed up fr her college'''''

Here in a big mansion a guy came out of his washroom only in his towel n started to slect his dress tht he's gonna wear today fr d college n got quickly dressed n ran for his breakfast wid his dadi n lil bro's'..THE RISHAB KUNDRA or v can say d cool college hunk...

A black mercedez benz n a red sports car stoped near d college gate giving horn to each othr to move aside bt no one wa ready to leave n dey both came out of d car n glared each other as if dey ll eat d othr one alive''''..

R.K-can't u see n get a side,why do u always hav to cum at wrong tym miss mallik

MADHU-:ah well mr.kUNDRA d same goes wid u why can't u jst buzz off

R.K-: listen

MADHU-: no u listen to me mr.kundra or shuld I say mr.flirt dat m not one of ur those stupid bimbos who give u all d attention in d wrld jst to impress u so bttr u don't waste ur tym here standing here n fighting wid me n jst get a side n let me get in'''..n sayng dis she jst get ion hr car n zooms out of dere n R.K was left staring at her wid anger n greeted his teeth bt he controlled it n went away in his car'''..

Both of dem parked dere car togetr n glared each othr before going to wards dere class

In class AYAAN n SUMONA were waitng for class n bittuji n yash were waitng fr rishab n as dey saw dem dey all pounced on dem wid question dat why were dey late but in reply rishab jst glared dem n madhu she sweetly smiled d teachr came n d class strted...

well it was quite boring for rishab as he felt tht it was a waste of tym n he can utilize dis tym in checking out sum gud grls n den a mechivious plan occured to him n he jst made a chitt stating "such a boring class aghrh ye teachr kitna pakata h cant he jst shutup" he threw d chitt towrds ayaan bt by mistake madhu took it n at d same tym teachr saw d chitt in hr hand...

teacher: miss mallik wht is tht in ur hand?????

madhu-:maam i dn't knw it jst came frm bck side...n she gave it to teacher

teacher:oh so sumone here thnks tht dis class is boring n m eatng dere head well miss mallik wud u pls care to tell me d name or wud u lyk to cum wid me to principals office d choice is urs

madhu-:bt maam its nt mine n i don't evn knw who dis it...

in all dese dere was one person who was extrmly njoyng dis situation n it was R.K ...

jst whn teachr was abt to say sumthng d bell ran n teachr went away giving madhu a warning...

R.K-: ahhan so miss mallik u feel d class was boring ahaan even i felt d same bt aftr u were caught wid d chitt it was quite intrsting fr me...

it took sum tym fr madhu to undrstnd tht it was actully R.K who did all dis

madhu:mr.kundra wht d hell do u thnk of ur self????????

R.K:don't u knw dear wht i thnk of my self he said winking at her

madhu-t: u better stay in ur limits n dnt meddle up wid me warna!!

R.K :warna ? warna kya MADHU kya karogi tum?huh?

madhu-:warna i ll jst strangle u...

u knw wht kundra u r so annoyng i really feel like killing u bt i dn't want to go jail fr murdering sumone so use less n gud fr nthng person...

ayaan-:hey guys jst chill n pls stop fightng pls...i dnt undrstnd sumtimes tht hw can u people fight 24*7 wid each othr aap log thakte nai ho kya?????

den dey all left fr canteen n sat dere eatng n talkng making fun of each othr bt dere were to soul who were more intrsted in glaring each othr ,,,,, madhu n R.K who were busy glaring each othr again started wid dere nvr ending fight whn maan passed a cute n charming smilling followed by a comment to d grl who intensionally bumpd into him

madhu- bittuji don't u thnk tht few people ovr here hav no othr work othr den flirting n passing stupid comments'''.

bittuji smiled n before he could answer d question dat madhu asked R.K said ah bittuji why can't people mind dere own business why dey hav to poke dere nose in othrs matter

madhu:oh how can I forget tht its D MR.FLIRT SINGH KUNDRA I was talking abt n hw can he leave a chance of flirting wid grls its jst nt possible m I ri8 bittuji n den dey goes on n on until ayaan who was watching de mfr quite a while lost his patience shouted enough guys jst stop it n why do u both act as kids stop fighting n bhai pls don't talk to doll lyk tht

N R.K mimicks him saying huh madhu ka chamcha

madhu:dare u say a word against my bro rishab m warning u

R.K-:omg madhu m so scared he is nt only ur bhai he is mine to n wht will u do if I talk to him lyk dat huh said R.K smirking

madhu-:i..i..yes I ll jst break ur all those 32 teeth dat u were showng jst a while ago n wid dat one more round starts'''''''.

DATS it fr nw pls do cmnts n share ur views abt d story,do tell me hw u lyk d story n weathr I shuld continue it or nt

thanx to all of u for ur precious likes n comments pls do let me knw abt this update...

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thanx everyone

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Posted: 12 years ago
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gr8 first update loved it, and thnx for d pm plz update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepak148

gr8 first update loved it, and thnx for d pm plz update soon and pm me



thanx alott dear😊
n i ll try to update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
awesome update sorry for late reply
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PART-2

rishab was jst left staring at her in anger n den he abruptly holded her hand n twisted it n said to ask sorry bt madhu was damn adamant tht she didn't said nay thing wrong n she doesn't thnk tht she shuld apologies fr it ,so its bttr if he would jst leave her bt he was no were near to let her n go dis easily whn frm morning he didn't did any thng bt still she was hell bend on irritating n insulting him,,,,,,,,,,

madhu either u ask sorry or m not gonna leave ur hand

Ahhaan as if m scared of ur stupid warning''n why shuld I say sorry to u for saying d truth''..

Hell no m not gonna appologies at any cost

Fine den get ready to stand here like dis whole day becoz m not gonna leave u before u say sorry

Fine Its okh wid me

Dey stood dere glaring at each other for abt 15 mins whn madhu made a sweet puppy face saying tht her hand is hurting''..

R.K ignored her plea n continued holding her hand

Tell sorry n I ll leave u

R.K its really paining alott

Toh me kya karun kaha na frst sorry n den u can go

Tume bilkul mujpe taras nai aa raha muje kitna dard ho raha h n tum ho k'''making a puppy face she said kaise ladke ho ek ladki ka aise hannth mod k khade ho she said making a innocent face

R.K saw her face n lossened his grip n MADHU took it as a chance to escape from his grip showing him tongue

R.K jst left staring at her n anger''.

MADHU sorry toh aaj tume bolan padega samajhti kya ho tum khud ko wid tht said R.K was abt to hold her again when bittuji enterferred to make dem quite''''..

Ah well dere was nthng new in dis so no one paid much attention as all were quite familiar wid dre fights bt d whole gang was jst getting pissed of wid dere constant fi8 ovr nthng serious so dey jst seprated dem n den dev shouted n asked dem to grow up n stop dese stupid fights''..

It was tym fr dem to go back home whn rishab got a call frm dad telling him to cum mallik mention'''

So all of dem jst headed towards dere destiny n as madhu entered d house she screamed at d top of her lung for dad n ran to hug her while rishab rolled his eyes n said hogai nautanki shuru whn madhu complained dad abt rishab n rishab micked her irritating her futhr''.

Dad: rishab stop irritating my princess''.

n rishab jst made faces n madhu gave him a victorious n wicked smile to him showing him tongue rishab was extremely pissed of wid her constant nagging n nw all dis irritated him further so he jst went away towards d kithchen to meet his padmini mom n grab somthng to eatwhile dad n madhu chatted fr a while ''..

Mrs.mallik n rishab came out of d kitchen n saw dat all of dem were laughing n enjoying whn padmani asked madhu to go to her room n get ready n whn

madhu:mom whts d mattr n why shud i need to get ready?????????

padmini:beta bcoz sum guests r cuming''..

Bt mom still why m I needed to get ready fr sum guest anythng special?????????

madhu they r ur da's frnds so pls behave n go get ready soon they might b cuming any moment.now stop questiong n jst go''..

though rishab n madhu were nt convinced bt den shrugged it off thnking it must b sumthng related to elders n she went away to get ready

Whn madhu came down in her baby pink Patiala suit she was luking really gorgeous n rishab fr a while forget to luk away bt soon he composed his posture n chided him slf fr luking likek tht on madhu''

Mr. n mrs. Singhania wid dere son karan singhania jt enterded d mansion n karan wa lft staring at madhu n den mallik's welcomed dem n introduced everyone to dem bt rishab felt a lil bit uncomfortable by d way karn was gapping at madhu btween padmini told d real reason fr dere arrival den dey heard a grasp frm all d kids who were left wid dere mouth hanging n den karan came forward n introduced himself to madhu bt madhu kept luking at dad who assurd her wid her eyes n madhu smiled a bit '''..

Till d end of d meetng karan said he really liked madhu n wud luv to marry her though madhu was not vry sure abt al dis bt still she compilled in it fr hr parents n said yes all were vry happy bt dere was sum1 who really was nt vry happy wid d turn of events he himself didn't knew wht it was bt he felt a pang in his heart when he saw d guy holding madhu's hand''..

rishab jst left frm dere widout sayng any thing evryone was so happy abt d news tht no one really paid any attention to him'''.

rishab came bck to mnsion n went too his jim he culd nt undrstnd wat it was n why he felt lyk tht bt he was jst gettng angry thnking abt sum othr guy holding geet hand he started his tie chi''..

Aftr sum tym he jst sat dere panting n thnking'''..

rishab:why d hell does it effcts me if madhu is getting engaged I toh jst hate her n shuld feel happy abt dis whole thng dat she is jst gettng married n den she wuldn't b able to irritate n annoy me further'''.

Bt if she will nt irritate me den who will do it????????

rishab u hav seriously gone mad wht r u thnking u want tht girl to irritate u oh man me sach me pagal hota jaa raha hun uss madhu k sath rehte rehte''''.

Bt still itni jladi pta nai ladka kaisa h agr usne madhu ko koi pareshani di toh?????

Argh R.K toh !!!!toh tuje kya tere ko kyun problm ho rai h waise bhi tera peecha toh chutt jae ga na usse n tu bhi toh yahi chahta h na?????????

Haan!nai!nai????nai mera matlb h haan me yeh chahta hun bt me yeh nai chahta k use koi problm ho n phr abi itni jaldi bhi kay h kuch tym ruk hi jaate??????????

Man u hav completely lost it dud r u forgetting tht she is madhubala mallik ur biggest enemy d most annoying creature on d earth'''''

Nai me toh srf isliye bol raha tha kyunki dad n BIttuji usse miss karenge ???????haan haan me toh isiliye itni tnsion le raha tha uski aur koi baat nai h haan pakka koi aur baat nai h warna muje kya who bhadd me jae '''..

Thnking all dis rishab jst came bck to his room n lied down on his bed bt still he was nt able to undrstnd why he was feelng bad abt dis whole thng'''''..

Here in handa mansion madhu was wondering tht weatr wht she did was rite or wrong ??????????

Was it rite to get married to sum1 whom u dn't luv fr whom u hav no feelngs????????

Bt den she thought tht she was doing all dis fr d happiness of her parents n one day she has to get marriedto sum1 so whts d problm if she gets married nw n wid d chice of dere parnts may b he is d one tht god has made fr her n may b sum day she ll fall in luv wid him'''''thinking all dis she jst went to sleep waiting fr nxt day to cum least did she knw tht dere is sum1 really spcl made fr her n she is destined to b wid her'''''''..

okh guys that's it for now

m highly dissapointed with the less number of likes n comments

ll b waiting for ur response

i hope u ll like the update

pls press like n comment if u like the update

n thanx to all those who hav liked the update

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Edited by amrinderdhami - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
i waited for update for ages, loved it yaar but found it very short. Plz update soon and pm me. Madhu should also realize her feelings.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepak148

i waited for update for ages, loved it yaar but found it very short. Plz update soon and pm me. Madhu should also realize her feelings.


thanx alott dear
yup i actually wrote dis update long back but seeing the poor response made me sad 😭
ll update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

thanx alott dear😊

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