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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Awesome Update 👏 👏
Please continue the FF.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
hey dear, see ur work is gr8 and u know my ff gets very bad response, still i write for my satisfaction. Plz write it for those who like ur ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-8

Nxt morning bought a new ray of hope for both rishab n madhu both got up wid a new determination n motives………..

RK to win his MADHU's heart n to kick that karan out of there life n MADHU to give this relationship a fair chance to try to know karan bettr

RK was planning to spend whole day planning abt his next move when dad asked him to accompany him to mall for sum shopping………

RK bete hume kuch shopping karni h aap humare sath chaliye pls

Nahi dad mere pass aj bht kaam h ap pls BITTUJI ya ayaan ko le jaiye

Haan ab iss budhe dad k liye kahan kisi k pass tym h hum toh bekar h aap sab k liye………….

Chalo koi baat nai hum akele hi chale jayenge said dad sounding hurt bt was watching his expressions from d corner of his eyes

RK jst rolled his eyes at his dad's mellodrama

Nahi dad ap rukiye me chalta hun apke satth

Nai nai bete ap toh busy h aap rehne dejiye

Oh cumon dad Itna toh me kar hi sakta hun apne pyarre dad k liye ri8

Dad left smilling followed by RK

At d mall RK was busy roaming around doing absolutely nothing when he got a call

Sir I hav seen him wid a girl entring xyz mall……….

RK smilled thinking that first tym in life his coming for shoppng wid dad has turned out to b quite use full………

Okh fyn click dere pictures n keep a constant eye on dere activities n keep me reporting abt it……….

RK went from dere to tell dad that even he wanted to buy sumthing so he ll b going to nxt floor n when she's done wid his shopping he shuld call him saying dis he left to see karan

rishab spotted karan wid a girl romancing n buying few dresses in a boutique he hid himslf behind the pillar n watched them doing all d shopping now he was damn sure that dis karan was getting married to madhu due to his own purpose bt what he didn't knew was that karan has spotted him watching them n was aware that may b he knew sumthing abt him

As he knew that RK n madhu knew each other from quite a while……….

Karan n d girl left from there n RK went behind them to see where dey were actully going letting dad knw that he got an important call n he need to go

When RK reached d place he was quite surprised wid wht he saw it was a cottage in d deserted area he peeped inside n what he saw didn't pleased him at all RK thought it was a perfect moment to let MADHU knw d true colour's of karan n thinking this he called MADHU n told her to come to xyz place

Hello???

MADHU I hav to show u sumthng jst cum here at xyz place

Bt RK wht is it???????

Remember I told u that karn is not a right choice for u so now I hav d proof jst cum n see wid ur own eyes

Bt RK tumhe kaise………..

RK jst cutt her short MADHU just don't waste tym n come here now

Okh m cuming

madhu though was relucant at first bt den came were RK called her……….

RK left from dere before MADHU cud reach as he wanted her to see d truth n face d reality her self……..

While on his way he txted MADHU telling abt it

When MADHU reached there dere was nothing no one was dere n it was getting dark ,,,,,,,,,

MADHU being alone got frightened as she has a darkness phobia………..

Sum how she reached home n was quite angry on RK for playing such a prank on her,,,,,,,,,,,,

She was real mad n cursing him gaddha,,ullu,,dushtdanav,,,moron,,,idiot muje wahan akela bhej k pta nai kahan gayab ho gaya jara bhi sharam nai h isme,,,,,,,,,,,

Milne do kal college me isse toh me btati hun she was busy cursing him when she received a call from RK n her anger shoot up

N even beore RK culd say sumthing MADHU started cursing him

U idiot,moron,gadhe,ullu,duhtdanav,,,,,,kya samjhte ho tum apne ap ko??? Ye kaisa majak tha??? Muje wahan akele bulake khud gayab ho gae????

N wahan koi bhi nai tha………..

Kya keh rae the tum?? MADHU me tume karan ki sachai dikhaunga n wahan toh kuch bhi nai tha

MADHU MADHU ek min meri baat toh suno

Kya MADHU hunh?? kya MADHU???kya sunu n kyun sunu me tumhari baat ???tume pta h na muje kitna darr lagta h andhere se n phr bhi tum ne muje wahan akela chod diya……..n MADHU kept on blabbering fr sumtime whem RK finally screamed

Shut up MADHU!! jst shut up!!

N MADHU went all quite listening him screaming

MADHU jst cool down n tell me wht happened dere??????

MADHU told him that dere was no one n how she got frightened

RK was quite confused with d turn of events n decided to do sumthing else

Fine MADHU jst cum to my place n I ll show u sum proofs

No m not cuming anywere kya pta tum phr muje tang karo toh??????

Fyn me hi aata hun jst wait dere n kissi ko kuch mat bolna okh?????

Hmmm

RK left for MALLIK mansions thinking that how it can b that MADHU didn't see anyone there

RK entered MADHU's room n closed d door

MADHU??MADHU???

Hmm kya h???kya dikhana h tume n btw tum kyun beechare karan k peeche padde ho?????

MADHU wo koi bechara nai h wo tumhe dhookha de raha h……..

He luves sumone else n is jst playing wid ur feelings mene khud usse kissi larki se baat karte deka h n then he narrated her whtevr he saw on d engagemnt ni8 n in mall n den in cottage

Tears rolled down her eyes n she jst kept gazing at RK

Listen RK dere is nothing to cry abt u need to see all dis n fi8 for ur rights…….

MADHU just nodded n RK showed her few pics that his detective has got for him

RK jst kept gazing at d pictures not beliving what she saw

MADHU now listen to me clearly

We need to paly safe dis is d true karan singhania n we need to tell dis to all bt no one will belive us if v dn't hav enough proofs so v need to play safe n u need to get ur answers bt nothing was registing in her brain she just kept gazing at d photos

MADHU was not hurt because she luved him or anything because she knew that she never luved him but she was hurt becoz sumwhere she started trusting him n he broke her trust,,,,,,,

RK explained her that wht she needed to do to expose his true colours bt nothing registered in her mind…………..

RK tried to console her when MADHU said

RK pls I need sum peace of mind please go

I ll see u tommorow in d college

RK jst nodded n wished her gudni8 n left frm dere

Whole ni8 MADHU kpt thinking abt all dis n decided to go n bash that karan n end it all at once bt wht she didn't knew was that karan was way more smart den RK has thought him to b n he was ready for all ………..


okh guys that's it for now

i ll b waiting for ur response

i hope u ll like it

pls guys pls press like n comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: deepak148

hey dear, see ur work is gr8 and u know my ff gets very bad response, still i write for my satisfaction. Plz write it for those who like ur ff



hmmm okh
u r rite dear
i ll continue it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
r eally a nyc update, karan will play his cards, but keep madhu trust on RK, hmm loved it.
Edited by deepak148 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Very Nice Update
Karan is a cheater and wanted to marry Madhu to take advantage of Malik. So this time he will be one step ahead of RK.
Then RK also will be smart enough to beat Karan at his cheating game because RK loves Madhu.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Every thing is fair is love & war...Karan & Rk will play their cards...
Nice update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice update dear ...pm me nxt time u update..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Clara20

nice update dear ...pm me nxt time u update..😆



thanx dear
will surely pm u whn next time i ll update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
see response has improved and ur thread views are gr8

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