Madhu Says 'I Love You' - A Short OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone. I was actually having trouble sleeping because a lot is on my mind. So I decided to quickly right something up because Rishbala always gets things off my mind. It's not really a prediction, I don't think the dream will happen like this. But I hope you all still like this. Sorry it's so short and the writing style isn't as great (I literally wrote it up in 10-15 minutes). Also I'll be back with FF updates before Wednesday for sure. Goodnight everyone (hope I can sleep now)!


Madhu Says "I Love You"

RK stood by his wife's side when her entire family turned against her. Malik's truth came out and he ended up going to jail but RK bailed him out and dropped all charges. RK's family apologized to Madhu for falling for Dipali's words.

Madhu wanted to surprise RK on Diwali with fireworks; that brought them close when Madhu ended up in RK's arms after a loud sound. They then celebrated Karva Chauth and RK even broke Madhu's fast.

Everything was perfect. All the misunderstandings were cleared. Nothing was wrong for once.

Madhu lay in bed with RK on the other side of the pillows. She sat up, deep in thought. RK saw her and he sat up himself.

RK: Biwi?

Madhu didn't respond.

RK: BIWI?

Madhu looked towards RK.

Madhu: Huh, sorry, that…I…

Madhu got out of bed and walked towards the window. RK didn't know what was on her mind but he knew there was something. He followed behind her. Madhu stopped in front of the window and just looked out. RK stood behind her.

RK: What's wrong Madhu?

Madhu closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She reopened her eyes and slowly turned to face RK.

Madhu: Everything.

RK: What…Like?

Madhu stared into RK's eyes. Then she looked away, as if fighting with herself on the inside. "Should I? No I shouldn't. Yes I should." Madhu kept thinking to herself.

RK: I asked what's wrong biwi.

Madhu: I love you.

Madhu sucked in a deep breath and opened her eyes. She suddenly sat up; she realized she was still in bed. Was she dreaming? She couldn't tell. RK looked at her from the other side of their pillow wall.

RK: What happened biwi?

Madhu looked towards RK. Her heart was beating fast and she was breathing heavily. RK sat up.

RK: Is everything okay? Did you see a bad dream?

Madhu realized she was dreaming and she sighed. She managed to control her breathing and she answered.

Madhu: Yes, I saw a dream. A good dream.

She smiled.

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_Divya_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Very Nice! 😃 👏
hope dis dream come true! ☯️ 😉
plzz do write more 😛 👍🏼
Edited by divi4u - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Pritt. Awesome OS. luvd it. U r such a talented writer.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You know what was the part which was my favourite - the part where he gets up and asks her if everything is fine after she wakes up
Funny shouldn't it have been the I love you part., Hmmm😕... I think I'm overthinkng things, I better go and have my head checked
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS yaar...btw thnks 4d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweet one..but it was too short
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i was waiting for ur writing.. literally waiting... nice one...:) :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Lovely update. You have a great future as a writer and pl update my own rishabals story ff. it has been so long
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Posted: 12 years ago
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V nice.wat a lovely update.loved it.u r an amazing writer.plz do write more.thanx a lot for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS.. U write such amazing work and try to be modest saying ur writing isn't great uh?
I loved it Pritt!! U r a good writer.. One of the simplest and sweetest OS.. Its touching.. U r a fantastic writer Pritt.. I loved the way u finished it with a short convo between RishBala were RK asks if Madhu saw a bad dream, and Madhu replying that it was a good dream..! :) How endearing..

Enjoyed this OS a lot, thanks for the PM and this OS Pritt!!
Expecting more nice stories from u!! :)
Edited by --Udhay-- - 12 years ago

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