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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing

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amazing part
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Lovely Update.⭐️.HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!🥳
A small request.
Would want more of what madhu feels for RK..

RK feelings are beautifully written. 😃
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It so beautiful!both succumbing to their desires!
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Beautiful update! It was really so good.
Continue soon..
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it was very nice dear...continue soon and HAPPY DIWALI!!! to all of u out there!

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40 Lakhs Later...
Part 4
"An Illuminating Seduction"

The lyrics in the middle of Part 4 are part of the song "Illuminated" by Hurts. It's a very enchanting song yet has the perfect tone for this part which is why I chose to go with it.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CvuyaKmLnw[/YOUTUBE]

"Just kiss me," her irrational request escaped her mouth.

He was too weak to resist. Without sparing another second, he took her lips in his. They needed this, they needed each other, and right now... everything else could go to hell.
He knew he'd regret doing this to her, but he knew he'd have more remorse if he didn't.
His kisses were as fierce as a hungry predator. He wasn't shocked either, with her thirsty kisses, her seductive charm.
Her fingers thread themselves in the forest of his hair as he pushed their wet, pulsing hot bodies to the elevator door, having an arm wrapped aroung her and the other constantly pushing for the elevator button like there was no tomorrow.
He took in her jasmine scent in as he adorned her neck with a trail of kisses leading up to her ear while the her first whimper of pleasure escaped her lips as her soft hands swam througout his broad back claiming their rights on his shoulders.
Ding.
The elevator door opened as the broke apart for a second, a devilish look on his face and a knowing expression on hers. She was ready to become his.
"Are you sure you want this?" He nevertheless brought himself to ask.
"More than anything else," she entwined their fingers, "Show me heaven, illuminate my world..."
"Your wish," he picked her up, "...is my command," he assured her as she cooperated with him by wrapping her legs around him, hooking the necklace of her arms around his neck.
He was ready to unleash the blinding light of his love, one that would leave her,
Illuminated.
The elevator door opened again as they were left a few steps short of their bedroom, "Mrs. Rishab Kundra, prepared to be left blinded. I don't know about heaven but even hell with you is endurable, I will..." he took a step out of the elevator, "...leave you illuminated.
Time waits for no one,
So do you want to waste some time,
Oh, oh... tonight?
He dropped her on the bed and climbed up her body, letting his hands graze over her every inch. She stroked her face against his 5 O'clock shadow, it burned, yet felt so good.
Their lips connected like two strong magnets. Indeed they were magnets, because only the opposite ends have an attraction so strong, and the two were as different as two beings could get. Yet when joined they prove to be one body, one soul.
His kisses trailed down to her adam's apple and followed to her shoulders.
He carefully tossed her hair back for blocking his access to her beautiful shoulders as she slid the jacket of his suit off.
He was untying the dori of her of blouse as he continued to nibble on her ears, occaisonally murmering a few compliments with his irresistable deep baritone voice. He felt her hesitation undoing the buttons of his shirt.
Don't be afraid of tomorrow,
Just take my hand, I'll make it feel so much better tonight...

He brought her hands back to the buttons of his shirt and assisted her.

"Are you scared?"

"Just a little,"

"Don't be," He assured her gently laying a kiss on her forehead, "I'll be there with you every step of the way," he promised helping her finish the very last button on his shirt.
This promise of his gave her all the courage she needed as she rose up from the bed and tore the shirt that had been troubling her for so long off of his perfectly chiseled body.
He undid the final dori of her blouse as she herself took his hands in hers to toss it off carelessly on the floor.
"Tumhe ijazat hai," she uttered as a scarlet shade donned her cheeks matching her lacy red bra.
God she was beautiful,
He pushed her back onto the bed not being able to retain anymore control, a part of him throbbing.
"I love you," she whispered in his ear as he kissed her tears away.

Swing me these sorrows,
And try delusion for a while,
It's such a beautiful night,
He knew what he should say but could he? The words had turned into sweet poison inside his body from being kept to long, killing him slowly.
He must, tonight.

You've got to lose inhibition,
Romance your ego for a while,
Come on, give it a try...
"I love you too,"
The forgotten blouse on the floor beckoned the sari.
"I know it's beautiful," he smirked, "but it must go," he tugged on it slowly as she cooperated.
Soon the sari joined with its mate on the floor whilst the two soulmates counted the minutes till their final consummation.
"You're beautiful," he kissed her eyes. Their pulsing bodies were so close, she couldn't take this torture anymore. He was teasing her, but she didn't have the capacity to hold it in any longer.
"RK... please..." she moaned as he responded with an inward growl of desire.
Ring Ring. Ring Ring. Ring Ri...

Suddenly my eyes are open,
Everything comes into focus, oh,
His eyes widened with shock as did hers. What were they about to do?
We are all illuminated,
Lights are shining on our faces, blinding...
He cursed himself for having the least bit of control in him whilst she tried to avoid his eyes.
They were in a true sense illuminated.
***
A/N: I hope you liked it! It does contain some sensual content but I believe the sexual tension built up between the characters and ultimately led to this outburst of emotions. I hate making anything sensuous unless it agrees with the character and plot development. This was love making not erotica, there is a difference and I tried to reflect their love with their every touch. As for the ending, muahaha! I am evil aren't I? But you guys love me so you can't stay mad either. And before you all hound me to update soon, I promise to update on Sunday.
PM crisis: I have a mix of readers for my IPKKND work and I've recently started writing for Madhubala and so PMing is made difficult for me. The way I pm now is basically going back and individually pm-ing everyone who commented on the last part. Hopefully I'll create a new account for Madhubala forum PMs soon enough.
It's been a pleasure writing for you.
Love,
Shweta <3

Edited by -ForeverYours- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res :D

I should really stop hogging your 1st comment spot😆 But still i must say that is something i dont regret :) ;)

Well..That was one illuminating seduction allright.I love the way you write..It is simple yet enchanting at the same time.I dunno y bt it reminds me of taylor swift :) The way you wrote this part was perfect.Sensual but not vulgar.The song helped ofcourse.

And now the best compliment i could ever give you: Reading this made me wish i hadn't stopped writing :)

Cheers nd waiting for the next part
Gayathri

Edited by -happilyunknown - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohmygod. This was so fantastic. I can't even...You're an amazing writer...no words can express how amazing you really are!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh...wow..what an update...it was really very nice...
U like leaving cliff hangers dont u...grr...

anyway..sunday is not so far away...we shall wait to see what happens...

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