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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Beautiful poem. Bt is Rk in lovd wid Mb? And these lines "I hope to see you look at me with as much, if not more, love in your eyes as you have for your father" r truly lovely.

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silent.desire

@silent.desire

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏very beautifully written

Edited by emptyworld - 12 years ago

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PreetD

@PreetD

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Beautiful job Sonu!!!!! I loved it.

You really do have a way with words :)

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Zoya Hamza

@Red_Opium

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: applenpeaches

Thank you... 😊 It is a little too romantic...😆

I don't think romance ever gets too much 😊. You have wrote something that brings a smile to the reader's face and opens the window of the fantasy world! It is a well known fact that in reality it might be a bit difficult to find a man with such a intense passion, but that is why we have books, movies, and TV shows to escape the reality and get lost in fantasy 😉

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PreetD

@PreetD

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Red_Opium
I don't think romance ever gets too much 😊. You have wrote something that brings a smile to the reader's face and opens the window of the fantasy world! It is a well known fact that in reality it might be a bit difficult to find a man with such a intense passion, but that is why we have books, movies, and TV shows to escape the reality and get lost in fantasy 😉

Beautifully put!!!

Edited by PreetD - 12 years ago