FF -- Lost In You! Chap-1 Pg:5 UPDATED! 29/10

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Holaa People! I'm Shama! :D

Its been quite long, since I entered this forum! But now back, with a FF! :D This is entirely different from the ongoing concept and plot! And somehow, I believe they rushed in making Madhu fall for RK! So, here..I'd also highlight Madhu's feelings! And this tale is also inspired by the song 'Phir wohi..raat hain..' by Kishore da! :')


And before you proceed further, lemme warn you I'm known for updating very late..! :P But I promise to try my best! :D

I was quite doubtful about the title..but yeah, here goes.. 'Lost in you..'

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Prologue!


'Aap mujhe koi kaam nahi karne dete' She hissed, trying to get out of his hold.

'Not when I'm around' He shrugged casually and concentrated on what he was doing.

'Tch..'

'Rishabhhh..' She shivered, as he buried his head deep in her neck and inhaled her scent.

'Just how many of these do you own?' He flicked her left earing with his index finger.

'You messed up my hair too much' She accused childishly.

He smiled.

'You need to get off this couch right now..and let me too'

'And why should I do that?'

'Oh! Lemme guess! May be because, we have OUR reception to attend?' She said stressing on the word OUR, making him chuckle.

'Not before you tell me why you agreed to marry me?'

'Ab aap mujhe chodenge?'

'My questions remains.'

Knock on the door.

He let go of her right hand, which was secured in his grip..and let her adjust her tee and hairs.

'I'll soon get a hold' He challenged.

'Oh! We'll see.' She smirked, trying to control her drumming heart.




A sudden jerk, a she was pulled out of her reverie.

'Tu yaha kya kar rahi hain?'

'Oh wait, lemme guess! WORK!' Suman replied herself, releasing a boring sound..making her friend smile.

'Aaj boss ke sister ki reception hain.'

'Ronit's Sister?' Suman Inquired.

'Yes.'

'But you never mentioned about her wedding.'

'I was home. And now, he wants to make sure I and my only friend atleast attend the reception.'

'And that friend is supposed to be me?'

'Oh yes.' She replied smiling.

'Tho chalna..kya problem hain?'

'Problem nahi hain..just not in mood.'

'Tho tu reh jaa..friend tho invited hain na..I'll go!' Suman stood up and started walking towards the kitchen.

'Sure..' Suman's friend was adamant.

'Get your butt off that chair, or you'll see what I'm going to do.'

'Really? You're gonna lift me now'

'Though tere 'unke' jitna strong body tho meri hain nahi..But I could try..just to get you along' She winked.

Suddenly, Suman realized what she just blurted out!

'I'm sorry' Suman said, guilty.

'No probs.' She smiled.

'Chalte hain na..pleaseee'!'

'Jeee..' Finally, her friend agreed.

'Great' Suman grinned. 'Now get that pasty oil off your hairs and we can leave' Suman grinned, and left for a bath.

She closed her eyes, and laid there for next 5 or so minutes. Memories would not fade, and things would never be same. Those days would never come back, nor He! Life would never be same for Madhubala.


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"Tears, idle tears, I know not what they mean,
Tears from the depths of some devine despair
Rise in the heart, and gather to the eyes,
In looking on the happy autumn fields,
And thinking of the days that are no more."

- Alfred Lord Tennyson

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I'm sorry if it was confusing..but I'm sure..it was all cleared in the end..or so, I think!😳

Do comment, and let me know your views! Thank you! :')


Here are the links to my other works on Madhu-RK!

Os - I Met you - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3027837

Os - Drenched in rain - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3118020

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Prologue - Pg: 1

Chap 1 - Pg: 5
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...Seema... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing start.really v nice one.add me to ur pm list nd do pm me.continue soon.
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OMG awesome start my lovely 1/3rd👏👏


It seems a Shammy-licioius FF😳⭐️ 👍🏼 First part is beautiful ☺️ and second one is more interesting Can't wait...jaldi likhna...m not gonna let you be a kaamchor after such dhansoo start😆


Thank you...Thank you for this surprise🤗 LOVED IT!!!!
You are the best ❤️...muahhh xoxo



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Nice prologue dear
plsss cont soon and dont frgt to pm me
bt who is the man and women on couch ??????
Is it suman and rk or rk and madhu or someone else ?????
Confusion hi confusion hai solution ka pata nahi ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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on new RishBala FF
Loved it ❤️
Cont soon 😊
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Awesome start...😊looks like it has lot of mysteries..Plzz continue soon & add me to pm list..😊
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Awesome start 1/3 rd👏

Hayyyeee m luving it already can't wait for next part so update soon no kaamchori this time😆

Luvd it so much..Thank u for d lovely surprise..luv ya..Muaahhh🤗❤️



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Will try ofcourse!😳 Thank you!😃
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Originally posted by: vmpy

Amazing start.really v nice one.add me to ur pm list nd do pm me.continue soon.



Thanks!🤗 Gald you liked it!😃
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Thank you!😃

Originally posted by: arunsunita_gm

Nice prologue dear
plsss cont soon and dont frgt to pm me
bt who is the man and women on couch ??????
Is it suman and rk or rk and madhu or someone else ?????
Confusion hi confusion hai solution ka pata nahi ...



Its RK-Madhu! I thot Its clear by the end!😳 And that was a flashback! :')
And its supposed to be kinda confusing, and the solutions would be found on the way!😉
Thank you!🤗


Originally posted by: Chanthini

nice jaan.. do continue..!!



Thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: unknowngirl

Awesome start...😊looks like it has lot of mysteries..Plzz continue soon & add me to pm list..😊



Yes! And It would be solved as the story proceed! :')
Thanks! Glad you liked it!🤗

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