Separation ss part 11 page 16 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: suk19

yes prittb is doing a excellent job on my ss 😳😆


😆!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
thanks everyone updating this one soon 😃😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
OMG plz pm me i had tears coming really gd
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Hi
Lovrd it
But cobfusion in part 6 &7
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: uteem

Hi
Lovrd it
But cobfusion in part 6 &7

part 6 is a dream sequence
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: suk19

deepak its a dream madhu had a dream on part 6 i had writers block on this one thats why i changed it . Remember madhu had a dream sleeping next to trishna n she was dancing with rk its the same concept

ok thnx for clearing my doubts.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
OMG, the delusion. I can't with such ignorance lol.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 8

Madhu wakes up n goes out of the house everyone was sleeping she walked just walked, some people recognised her Muskhan muskhan she would wave at them n smile. Before she knew it she was on marina drive walking by the ocean she needed the fresh sea breeze she watched the kids play the aunties n uncles walking then she watched the young couples walking holding hands, it was peaceful, then she hears Bhabhi ji she looks up n smiles, bittuji what are you doing here? i come here before chief wakes up so i can start my day with the sun rising its so relaxing, madhu smiles it is relaxing Bittuji, Bhabiji what are you doing here? i dont know i just started walking n i reached here. i needed to think. i know my family want me with rk but i dont think i could go there again, but bhabhi ji yes your family want you with rk but what do you want? i want this pain to stop i miss him, i dont know how when i fell in love with him, Bittu ji smiles bhabi ji you n chief both are sharing the same pain the same love you are both alike both stubborn both made for each other. it was kismat that brought you two together n you are fighting kismat, what were the odds that you both had the same blood, even when chief was not conscious cheif held your hand. Last night when he saw you in that state drunk he was angry at himself he tried drinking again but instead he threw the bottle he could not because of you it was hurting him, bittu ji i was not drunk i pretended to be but dont you tell anyone when i vomitted it was because i could not stand the taste n smell in my mouth. Bittuji laughs his phones rings its rk, yes producer sahib yes chief n i will be coming to do the promo one minute bhabiji there is a stall by the end of marina drive a bout 5 minutes walk let me treat you to the best tea in the world, bittuji that will be good madhu replies, Rk hears ji sir we will be there thanks for calling bittuji pretends to end the call, rk listens to convo bhabhi ji so how come you starting acting in doing videos for songs, well bittuji i had to pay your chief back i could not go back to the beauty salon the pay for acting was more than i expected. bhabhi ji but 40 lakh in that short period Bittuji i can do without material things that is not what is important, this was hanging over my head dipali taunted me about being a karathi biwi, to me it was a loan which had to be paid off. A little boy with a flower runs up to madhu n says muskhan this is for you madhu smiles n bends down n kisses him on the cheek. Bittuji smiles as they walk they get over to the stall the owner sees madhu n shouts to everyone look muskhan is here she smiles bittuji n her sit down they order tea. Bhabhiji talk to chief he really misses you madhu smiles n looks at him, bittuji how did you meet Rk , chief was a small actor he wanted to a big role i knew the producers directors n chief had been hurt he was on a drive to be number one. bittuji why was he hurt? i think chief should tell you that, he looks behind madhu, Rk standing there, Bittuji madhu can i join you? Madhu looks at him, she takes a deep breath, chief bhabhi ji is here Rk goes to leave, madhu says yes rk takes a deep breath n turns back round n goes to sit, chief bhabhi ji n i were talking about how we met, bittuji have you told madhu our love story rk laughs i was a out of work actor bittuji had the contacts i was hurt as you already know dipali were in love but what you dont know is that she was offered a lead role opposite sikki he was about to make a top hit so she chose with her head. Madhu stares at rk but does not talk, i was determined to become number one i became self destructive i became big number one i did not care who came in my way i would destroy them now that i am big dipali now again wants me back not for love she wants the riches the fame that come with it. she broke my trust she betrayed me, madhu speaks yet you believed her about me. Madhu i was shocked i have been betrayed so many times i thought i was being betrayed by you, as they talked bittuji left. Madhu n rk did not notice they were too busy talking. Rk told her everything (about his past his parents) They left the stall n walked on marina drive people stared at them n pointing their fingers at them some even asked to take photos with them madhu n rk both obliged.
They walked talked madhu was hungry rk wanted to go to the hotel marina for lunch but madhu told him the best food was at the stalls so they went to a stall where madhu asked for pau bhaji n badi pau. rk watched madhu eat the first time in a long time he was relaxed. Madhu also watched rk eatin taking small glances at him she was also relaxed.
Radhaji tried calling Rk but his phone was off, then bittuji comes, bittuji i have been trying to call Rishab his phone is off, aunty ji chief is with bhabi ji. Rishab with madhu yes aunty ji i met bhabi ji on my daily walk on Marina beach.
Malik n padmini both concerned about madhu they did not know where she went ,Roma n trishna looked for her everywhere the studio her favourite hiding place she was not there, malik tried calling Rk his phone switched off n then he calls rk mansion where radhaji picks up the phone he asks if he can speaks to rk, bhai sahib rishab is with Madhu she tells him everything she knows how bittuji met madhu n rk finally talking. Malik was happy to know madhu was with rk but also scared.
The sun was setting Rk and madhu watched this in silence as they sat on beach, Rk did not want this time to end with madhu. it got dark madhu looks at him Rk i have to go home malik n ma will be worried, Madhu i dont want you to leave i have missed you so much, Rk i miss you as well but i need some time, madhu please come back home. i need you he cups her face, madhu looks at him he releases her face she goes to walk but he grabs her wrist n stops madhu her heart beats fast she turns towards him he brings her closer to him n hugs her she has her hands to the side but slowly brings them n hugs him back.
Rk drives madhu back to the chawl, padmini n malik pacing up n down they were extremely worried about what was happening with rk n madhu then they see the car come in both look, n see madhu talking to rk malik holds padmini hands to reassure her that everything is ok. Madhu i know i wronged you n your family i regret it mujse shaadi karogi, madhu looks at him laughs that is so cheesy rk using salman khans filmly lines. Rk smiles as madhu goes to leave rk asks again will you marry me then she looks at him n points up to malik my father is there ask him but right now rk my answer is no i need time. rk smiles then time you will madhu as for malik that is easy but your the one i need to convince he smiles n leaves
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Very Nice Update Suk.
I am happy that Madhu didn't drink alcoholic beverage.
It is nice to see that she talked with Bittuji. Bittuji is very sweet person. He made Madhu meet RK.
Even in the serial Bittuji is helping his Bhabhiji.
Thankyou for the Update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
great update di. you update two ff's in one day. it is really promising, loved it.

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