RishBala FF~A Heart's Obsession~ - Page 69

Alicia, Alicia, Alicia! I'm actually picturing you making notes on this story =S Or how on earth do you analyse this so well? Yes, I can safely use the word 'love' with Madhu. I know right? Even I loved the part where RK was sleeping on her lap, when I pictured it in my head.

Omg... This is why I asked if you take notes coz looks like you analyse in depth or you think about it too much =/ Anyway you're right! That was spot on! I don't want to lie to you.

The Trishna in my story is different to the one in serial. She's kind of like how she is now in the current track. I hate it when sisters go against each other. That's so ugly. So in this story she would be on Madhu's side.

Hahah I'm afraid with Tanya around they'll have any sexy time, but we'll see. But when Kendra, I'm sorry SANDRA comes into the picture they'll have some oozing s*x! =O Did I just say that? Surely there'll be some sweet moments =) Be patient for your dark, sexy, jealous, possessive RK! You never know when he'd turn up! =D

Thank you so much for taking time to read and review! I really enjoy what you have to say =)

Aw, you making me blush! Its your fault lol. You write so well that your story captivated and I keep trying to figure why things are happening and whats going to happen next hehe. I have my own hectic conspiracy theories going on. I was one of those that believed Daisa and RK were in cahoots lmao. Btw, Eng Lit was one of my majors, so over-analysing is kinda standard for me now hehe. I kinda knew when RK was thinking about Tanya that kuch toh hua. I mean she was begging him not to leave her and he remembered her fondly - so I kinda hypothesized what happned to her. Yay, no evil sister throwing a spanner in the works. I'm tired of the balaji standard formula lol. Do you have a picture for Kendra, like how you did for Tanya? So we have an idea of who the sexy vamp is:). You're right, its much more exciting when dark, sexy and possessive RK makes an unexpected appearance:). Its his sheer unpredictability that makes him the awsome bad boy that he is;). Patiently (ok maybe not lol) waiting for your next chapter update...

Is RK starting to feel a slight remorse for whatever he is planning against Madhu?

Who is the mystery person that Trisna is shocked about?

THE PLOT THICKENS 👏

Loved it 😃

Thank you so much! =D I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, Madhu's caring side is going to play havoc in RK's life. Yes. You are absolutely right. RK's child won't go unwanted =P His child would be the most wanted! Oh don't worry yet... because there's so much to come before the revenge thing comes. You'll actually get surprised when that happens =D You'll see the matured more dangerous Madhu from the middle of the story I guess.

Awww that's very sweet of you. If I had other work I would have surely and gladly referred you, but this is my first and only story I have written. I don't even have any One shots. This is my first piece of writing. =) I ended up writing this because the dark, mysterious RK fascinated me to oblivion.

Them you deserve this 👏⭐️..for such beautiful attempt!!

Am so looking forward to see the dangerous Madhu..the idea itself is so intriguing ..

Please UPDATE SOON

I have almost written 4000, but there's more to go 😕 But I'm going out of town for a few days with my parents. I can't be writing that with them being around. That's awkward. So I'll probably finish the rest of the chapter on Tuesday and get back at you guys asap. Please wait for me!!!!!!!! I'll give you guys a lil teaser to keep your mind busy during my absence 😉

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I check your character sketch and seem to be a good FF.

I'll read it for sure and leave comments 😃😃