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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

I'm hoping that all of you can write down your thoughts on how the story is moving.

Feedback always helps!

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Hey Hi!!

Wow a totally mindboggling update... Must say, that somewhere I had expected such an outcome ... yet hadn't seen it being shaped this way. I mean I felt Madhu will have to be forced & driven nuts to take such a decision...( all thanks to all the hindi soap dramas & bollywood ishtyle...😳😉) I didn't see through her accepting it with such calmness. It was as if she had already had it pre-decided...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Too often the storyline in the show is imprinted on the viewers minds. I was expecting him to force her too just like the show which is why this was unexpected

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

I don't know but I liked both Keerthi & Mairaji in this part... and off course Naanaji. They play their part so intricately... as if they are minuetly wound in this web - that is Madhu's life, They all have some purpose in the undoing & everything that leads to this so called love - hate relationship between this couple... Liked the way you give equal & justified importance to the growth of each character even if not the lead... & make them have some integral part in the whole flow of things.👏

Maira does sound quite an intersting lady to me. She is quite perceptive one here... I think her life experiences make her see through the hazziness & fog that these two - Rishabh & Madhu too are unable to get through from & also all that they are trying to mask under the so called revenge or indifference or to say sort of an obssesion that they themselves can't name. She can somewhat judge what drives these two towards each other... she does sub-conciously feel that the madness they hold for each other in themselves is justified in the context of these two souls... R-M.

Though Maira says - that she knows Rishabh is irrational when it comes to Madhu... yet she supports his concept of the whole scenario presented. She fells that deeply Madhu would not have to suffer like her mom Mridhula as Rishabh does understand Emotions related to her ... he will safeguard her as a part of himself... similar to what her mom had done for her unrequited love & also at the same time he will not leave her for the misconceptions or his own weakness as in the one that transpired between Dalip- Mridhula... She does know Rishabh is the one who can handle all of Madhu's madness as he too is the same like her in view of it... but at the same time love her unbounded and passionately.

Keerthi ... she has spunk ... I mean I like her approach. Judas Indeed...😆

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Loved this line...

... Lived an entire life in her thoughts...

Really beautiful ... with so much in it. Just a line but hitting bang on ... conveying her state of mind. It held so much of depth... also a part - resembling Madhu & her further journey that she's planned with Rishabh.

You always manage to add such single stand-out Lines.( I can say that for me...😳) Lovely... 😊

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749230

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

I believe there are some questions on why she is acting so out of her element. But, is she really as steadfast as she seems?

And I wanted to say the answer is in some of the exchanges between Maira and Keerthi. But, the important give away is in her letter.

As long as the update left you questioning her decisions, its still fine. But would love to hear your thoughts, if you think I have sabotaged everything at this point.

PS I still won't go back and change the story, for its set in my mind to take this route. However, I'm asking because I'm just curious.

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: 6th.Element
I believe there are some questions on why she is acting so out of her element. But, is she really as steadfast as she seems?

And I wanted to say the answer is in some of the exchanges between Maira and Keerthi. But, the important give away is in her letter.

As long as the update left you questioning her decisions, its still fine. But would love to hear your thoughts, if you think I have sabotaged everything at this point.

PS I still won't go back and change the story, for its set in my mind to take this route. However, I'm asking because I'm just curious.

I really haven't figured out Madhu quite here. She is somewhat unsettling. She is like that - still water runs deep type of a personna. She is multi-faceted ... similar to the way she has so many names she's addressed with.

I feel she has her own demons & unresolved conflicts that she's repressed within her... That she was trying to esacpe since earlier times even when she made Rishabh believe she was already some one else's. She is, so to say insecure & fearful of her self as she knows she is capable of destroying everything its wake... also she knows that if she by self unleashes / unbinds herself from this indifference she carries as a defence she will not be able to safeguard her self & even hurt Rishabh whom she loves...( but not wanting to acknowledge the same). But she will always, I guess will be an enigma to me ... unless you don't reval the whole story out here😳

And I really don't want you to make any changes in the way you've perceived the story ... as I feel the writer alone can do justice to each characterisation & the whole concept ... and that alone leads to a best read for the redaers. As that is what was the undiluted concept the way it took origin in itself.

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Saams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Part 19 was like someone jabbed right in the gut It was so filmy,getting their pics and shoving right on to Nanaji's face.
lemme get back to next part..

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Saams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Woah!!! that was an amazing twist.The letter was so simple and precise not that I expected any drama from Madhu.And his reaction was exactly what should have been under the circumstances.
Loved this part so much more for the letter.hehe

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siyana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#480

Hey! Hi dear
glad to find this ss
just read all parts nd
its very interesting
very well written
loved the last part most
now waiting for next
do con soon

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