Give CVS FEEDBACK to IMPROVE SHOW & TRPS! - Page 5

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Only 2 simple points

End Mukund chapter

Focus on Film industry and its work settings which the promos initially promised..thats the MAIN PLOT

Trps will b back 😊

PS:Yes RK+Madhu r important .. their romance is important .. but romance minus the main plot (main plot is film world ) will never work in trp business ...all those who hv seen Geet and PKEK will know what I mean ..Maaneet and Abhiya too could not save their shows when story went down the drain ...😊

Originally posted by: muskaan23

Hey thts a gr8 idea...sorry i cudnt read all of ur posts... as far as i have, im liking ur ideas.. i hope CVs will understand tht n soon show sum results...

even i have sum suggestions/ideas..

1.) I think RK needs a backup story.. as i GUESS 🤔 he is the guy Madhu will fall in love with at the end.. i think there shud b an story behind RK, why he behaves like he does?!! ...i mean.. right now, he is just the bad guy (who btw has lots of time to spoil her life, than to live his own) ...but y is he like tht???? why is he so mean?? what sort of upbringing did he have?? I THInK WE NEED MORE SCENES N STORIES ABT RK!!!

2. Madhu... wasnt she supposed to b a girl with simple dreams n aims...but a self-confident mature girl??? WHERE IS THT???? ...we have 44 Episodes.. n i still dont know what this girl wants in life?? here life is just handling n crying abt the circumstances around her... what is she abt??? what does she want??? does she knows?? she was so brave when she fought against RK for the right thing...but she has NOOO choice abt the person she will marry? i mean her mom said yes n she just agreed, although she didnt love him...

3. Mukund... i dont understand this chrcter??? i mean where is this leading towards.?.. he is crazy abt this girl (at least the way he is always staring at her) ..but he can not stand up for her in front of his mom..he seems total lost when another guy (RK) is cuming near to his fiance n whispering in her ears... he seems like the only thing he wants in life is to sit in front of her n look at her... there is no passion, no reaction, no obsession, no life, no love, no nothing from his side... (even RK has more passion, by HATING her, than Mukund in loving her)

4. RK-Madhubala - seriously the need more scenes together!!! .. may it b the dream sequences which give madhubala a sign abt her future, which will b in RKs arms... may it b sum mirch-masala convos in challenging each other or hating each other... may it b sum casual meetings (with eyelock) while shooting between Trish n RK... BUT GIVE US SUM THING CVs plzzz... Im wathcing this show cuz it states "EK ISHQ EK JUNOON"!!!!!!

5. CHAUDRY!!! where is he???? Where is the guy who makes u get goosebumps when he appears on screen n u realize how dangerous he can becum for Madhu (n family) ... I mean just a shor appearance of his in Jail..n i was like "shittt shittt shittt he is back!!" ...i mean this thrill is deffo needed yaar..!!

hope tht wasnt too much... oh but i want to add sumthing i like too...

- I love the way RK plays his games!! ...u know a sharp minded enemy is always more fun than a mind less friend (Mukund)

Originally posted by: pippa

Great effort!

Hope the PH and Co pay attention.

What I'm about to say is constructive criticism. Hope others don't take it otherwise.

I personally have an issue with the presentation of the show. But, that's not vital for the betterment of the show as much as the story line is.

The problem is that there is no set story in the show. Apart from the first two weeks where the there was a proper theme and story, the following weeks somehow lost track of them which resulted in the fall of trps.

My suggestion to the Cvs is to show both the city and the village..in other words divide the episodes between Mumbai and the Mallicks/RK and Ballu and his life in Motihari...this way, the show could attract both the metro viewers as well as the those from smaller cities.

Also, flesh out the characters and establish their motivations.

RK needs a family background pronto...we need to know why he is the way he is...is he so by nature or by upbringing?

Other characters like Shammu and Padmini should have more to do other than hang around the kids solely. The chawl people should be focused once in a while.

Unlike channels like Star One, which was youth oriented, Colors viewers are older and need something other than mere passion and love to have a satisfying evening.
The non-internet viewers need to know that Mukund isn't the hero.

Lastly, the channel should promote the show well.

PS: How did I forget about the film industry!!! Where is the promised behind-the scenes view of the industry? Even the superstar barely goes to the sets.

Originally posted by: Lola13

Preet, you can tweet this link to RG, Raj Nayak and Gautam Hedge.. if you want 😊

Originally posted by: pippa

Great effort!

Hope the PH and Co pay attention.

What I'm about to say is constructive criticism. Hope others don't take it otherwise.

I personally have an issue with the presentation of the show. But, that's not vital for the betterment of the show as much as the story line is.

The problem is that there is no set story in the show. Apart from the first two weeks where the there was a proper theme and story, the following weeks somehow lost track of them which resulted in the fall of trps.

My suggestion to the Cvs is to show both the city and the village..in other words divide the episodes between Mumbai and the Mallicks/RK and Ballu and his life in Motihari...this way, the show could attract both the metro viewers as well as the those from smaller cities.

Also, flesh out the characters and establish their motivations.

RK needs a family background pronto...we need to know why he is the way he is...is he so by nature or by upbringing?

Other characters like Shammu and Padmini should have more to do other than hang around the kids solely. The chawl people should be focused once in a while.

Unlike channels like Star One, which was youth oriented, Colors viewers are older and need something other than mere passion and love to have a satisfying evening.
The non-internet viewers need to know that Mukund isn't the hero.

Lastly, the channel should promote the show well.

PS: How did I forget about the film industry!!! Where is the promised behind-the scenes view of the industry? Even the superstar barely goes to the sets.