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Posted: 13 years ago
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RK Towers mein bhagawan sits plotting
in his mind lots of blood is clotting

Bhagwangiri mein he is an expert it seems
total pshycotic maniac the stuff of Madhu's bad dreams


Mukund ka band baaja baajyenga RK Bhagwan
ayya hai ban ke usske zindagi mein ek Haiwan ;))

Aayee's dreams are going to be flushed down the pan
when that chq bounces her face is surely going to look wan ;))

Trashy Trish looks like a clown
Damn Vampu looks cute with a frown ;))

Bittuji's job hangs on a thread
but then plotting and schemeing he has made his own bed

RK is thinking that he is the Greek God Zeus
Neechowanga and drinking all of Madhu's Juice!!
(what a freaking great ryhme ha ha ha!)

He plays with his clay dolls so neat
He is loving this Prashchya-shit

Madhu is being drawn deeper into his net
Looks like fireworks tomorrow that's a bet ;))

Thank you team MB we r now Rocking
Dump Mukund quickly that's defo not working ;))

Give us some RK and MB eye to eye contact with loads of sizzle
Otherwise your TRP's will surely Fizzle!

Jane ;))

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Was waiting for your next poem!
Its awesome!!👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mazaa aagaya,beautiful poem as always.
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Superb , Awesome.👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lol what a hilarious poem.
I was chuckling after every para😆
I loved this part
:RK is thinking that he is the Greek God Zeus
Neechowanga and drinking all of Madhu's Juice!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice specialy the last sizzle n Fizzle
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 nicely done yaar loved it !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, reading one of Jane's poems after so long. I was her ardent fan in GHSP days. Any plan to publish those poems - they were all gems.

This was is superb as well - you are a talented lady. God bless.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks to all who liked my poem ;))

Sonarmeye I might post them on my blog soon but most of my Geet stories are there already plus other stuff.

www.janememe.wordpress.com

Thanks
Jane ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful dear 👏

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