FF: The Thirst (thread re-opened Note on pg-18) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved d prologue dear!!!!
Plzzz cont soon... nd Pm me...
W8ing..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GREAT START

HAVE SENT A BUDDY REQUEST
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue:

RK entered the rehearsal hall like a wounded lion, in a mood to almost kill Madhu, "MADHU!!" he called out, "How dare you? How dare you break the contract??"

Madhu slapped RK sturdily across his cheek as he approached her. He closed his eyes for a moment and turned his face to look at her. He saw her bearing angry and teary eyes at him.

-"you shouldn't have slapped me" he growled at her menacingly.

He caught her hand roughly and pinned to her back, breaking her bangles in the process.

"trust me Madhu, you'll be paying for this lifelong"

-"How could you do this to me?" she asked wincing in pain because of her broken bangles that were making her bleed at her wrists, "I thought you loved me"

-"you silly girl" he mocked at her, "I never loved you"

-"you never loved me?" she cross questioned him, "then why did you help me all this time? Why are you trying to me a star?" she held his collar with other hand, "that day, when Papa asked me to handover me to him, why did you save me?" she said her tears getting louder.

RK fell silent.

-his grip loosened as he looked at the other side, "I was just using you" he mumbled. "To quench my… thirst" he said, meaning something very deep.

-"liar" she threw it on his face. "How long will you facade the real RK"

"That day, why did you say that 'Madhubala is the sole aim of my life. She is the one for whom I'm alive' tell me" she reprimanded. "And the day before, why did you say that everything is fair in love and war?"

-"YES" he shouted, "I did say that.. I said that everything is everything is fair in love and war. But you are not that love" he bellowed in a firm confession.

Madhu froze at that moment.

-"what?" she asked subconsciously. "Who is she?" she asked.

RK felt, this is the moment for the revealing the truth. He put his hands into his pocket and took out a bracelet. He extended his hand and showed it to her.

Madhu became numb at that moment. She became nostalgic. Tears flew down like a waterfall from her eyes as she kissed it passionately. As she looked at RK, she could see the mirror image of her melancholy in his face too.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing tich dear...im loving this ff already hayee rk i love u mauh ...rocking
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow tich awesome excerpt & prologue.Oh its sounds passionate & the name which u choose is perfect 4 ur FF.The thirst.Deep very deep.Plz cont..LOL I m falling in luv wid ur writing skills😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome prologue Loved it...
Plzzz cont soon dear!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You already know the praise words I have for you na!
Passion is oozing out in the title itself
Knowing you it's not just passion though, it has roots deeper!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow tich awesome excerpt & prologue.Oh its sounds passionate & the name which u choose is perfect 4 ur FF.The thirst.Deep very deep.Plz cont..LOL I m falling in luv wid ur writing skills😳



thanks shrish for appreciating my skills.. i think i'm decent enough. all credit to my latest obsession RK-MB. OH yeah.. Thirst has a very very deep meaning but trust me it has got nothing to do with the passion..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eowyn

You already know the praise words I have for you na!
Passion is oozing out in the title itself
Knowing you it's not just passion though, it has roots deeper!



hey nidhs.. hugs...
finally you here...
well jaan.. the title is perfect for my story but it's not related to passion anywhere.. surprised?? yeah.. sorry i poured water on expectations but it has a very deep meaning which will unfold after a certain revelation.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maaneet4eve

The plot reminds me of 50 shades... I am sure you will do great in this FF... I absolutely loved your last OS It happens in dreams and films too... It was awesome... and I have lost count of the number of times I have read it... it is just so relate-able but still dreamlike... Please continue this FF soon...



thanks a lot dear... OS it happens in dreams and films too is very special to me as i have posted it before the show started and ended up with the a very huge response. I'll continue soon...

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