FF: The Thirst (thread re-opened Note on pg-18)

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Renu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome Tich. This is so different and good to see Madhubala's brilliant interaction with her papa. 😉 Next time when you update, PM me.

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Noor Fatima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

thanx for the pm..

i have got to say that the story seems quite intriguing.. cant wait for more 😃

Noor

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Balraj actually sees Madhu as his son,
What went wrong in this relation that made the tigress Madhubala to hover behind RK.
Waiting as eager as ever jaan!
You are fabulous

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NidhaA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

About the prologue!
Ah here is another mysterious hero!
And a much in love in heroine.
And to add spice, the famous 'WOH'

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Eowyn
About the prologue!
Ah here is another mysterious hero!
And a much in love in heroine.
And to add spice, the famous 'WOH'

whoa!!! finally.. someone recognized the presence of 'woh'

Nidhs, chalo i know you can easily guess that 'woh'

and typical bollywoordishtyle hero, heroine aur woh na ho toh mazaa nahi hai na.

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: bluefantasy78
Hey! Just read the excerpt, prologue and the update! And wow they were mindblowing! 👏
Wow I can't imagine Ballu being a father to Madhu's. So he adores her bcz she's lucky for him. Interesting twist dear! Pls continue :)

a psycho like ballu can never love anyone.. be it madhu.. she is just a key of sadistic luck for him. If she is happy and then he'll prosper according to the soothsayer..

Thanks for appreciating dear.. will continue soon..

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Tich

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: renu4u
Awesome Tich. This is so different and good to see Madhubala's brilliant interaction with her papa. 😉 Next time when you update, PM me.

sorry renu if you havent received pm this time.. i'l surely take care to send next time.

Thanks for liking it. Well madhu didnt really interact with ballu, she just replied in one-liners.. need to read more for the detailing and i'll update soon for that.