FF: The Thirst (thread re-opened Note on pg-18)

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THE THIRST

Hey buddies, I'm Tirtha. I'm starting a new FF on my favorite couple RishBala. Hope you'll like it. Comments, Suggestions, Criticism all are welcome.

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Prologue P.4
Updates - P. 8, 13


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"You'll regret this RK.." a strong male voice of Balraj warned the man before him.

The intensity of the rains increased violently. Madhu stood drenching behind that man with deep cyan blue eyes clutching his hand tightly for support. Her teary eyes were both scared and comforted at the same time. She knew RK would save her.

-RK looked at Madhu, "I won't" he said sternly.

-"Not the right thing Superstar" Ballu said offended, "You aren't doing the right thing… for her, you are brawling me? What does she mean to you, haan!" he yelled.

-"Enough!" RK raised his hand, "She means everything to me"

She was shocked at his words. He blinked her big baby browns at him. Something moved very deep in her heart.

"Madhubala is the sole aim of my life. She is the one for whom I'm alive. And any trouble should cross through me before reaching her" he said in a threatening voice. Balraj could see the menacing RK back but Madhu was besotted by him as his words rang continuously in her ears.

Edited by ...Tich... - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Not bad tich.I never knew u r this fab writer.I quite lked it.Hopefully in ur FF atleast RK will not b mere illusion.Oh I haven't read ur OS.Let me read tht too😳.Do Pm me😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept n start...

do start soon...

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start! The story seems very interesting. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one dear 😊 Do post the 1st chap soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow I really really really liked the prologue. Please continue and do PM me. 🥳 It's awesome. 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please pm n update asap *hugs*
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The plot reminds me of 50 shades... I am sure you will do great in this FF... I absolutely loved your last OS It happens in dreams and films too... It was awesome... and I have lost count of the number of times I have read it... it is just so relate-able but still dreamlike... Please continue this FF soon...
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nice start , & awesome song selection ,please pm me too

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