A VS ff 'dreams come true'the end, pg14 - Page 8

Originally posted by: smile41

moving very fast on this story. This is truly going great. Can we expect to see another one and soon...outstanding 👏

another one will take some time......do comment on the above parts😳

Originally posted by: nyc001

Great work Pooja. When finished create more. 👏

will surely do.....but, till then keep liking this one😃

Originally posted by: mkaur89

too cute 👏 ! loved the where soni thought veer was gonna kiss her and when soni was describing her and veer's supposable wedding night 😳 😃 😃 . Looovvvveeed it. gr8 job.

love ur responses😉.........keep commenting like this.....hehe.....soni is wierd, isnt she??😉

Originally posted by: mkaur89

i totally forgot to mention, YOU NAMED THE PUPPY VEENI 🤣 🤣 🤣. cute though

lolzz.....yup....i was thinking what to name it....then it suddenly struck me😆

Originally posted by: sharmak

This is soo great. 👏 👏 👏 Continue soon. I agree it was very funny naming the puppy veeni 😆 😆 😆

😆.....glad u liked the name😉

Originally posted by: HOUSTON2007

This is so funny and so well written. Nice Job Pooja. Let's see what the next chapters hold.

thanks sonia......keep reading😳

Wow. great job. This is really going well 👏 👏 👏

Pooja is on a serious Veeni high. Wow 👏 👏 👏

This is great bahen. I love when you have Soni half in dreamland and the other half in reality. Felt bad for Soni concerning the dog. More and soon

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tanks for the 3 new parts 😊 . they were wonderfully as always. love it when soni says, "I am seriously considering making a sign that says, 'I am married, don't come after me' for Veer to wear around his neck 🤣 ." and i am SO glad that soni finally told veer that she has no one to talk to 👏 .

loved how those k-soaps are having an effect on soni's imagination.

"Wait a minute, on second thought, WHERE AM I? Suddenly panic strikes and I start to wonder if maybe Veer hadn't picked me up in his arms after I fell unconscious but instead had let me fall, and I had then hit my head on a random rock placed in the middle of the corridor, and lost my memory." 😆 😆 😆 "This is awesome, now I am not only married to someone who loves someone else, but also in love with him too."

Can't wait for the next part