Pyaar Mein Twist- Part 6 pg.14 --NEW - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok ok.. everyone chill out... my gosh.. when i stopped you all pmed me why why why.. well im continuing, so stop crying😃

Part 3: I Love You, Mahi

After Mahi reaches there at French Resturant.... Jeet sees her and says," Come Mahi.. i've booked a special table for two of us." Mahi is surprised and says is there something you want to tell me...? They sit down and orders food and drinks. Jeet says to her, " I am so so so happy to see you." Shabd walks into the resturant with his clients (workers, he has a meeting with them there) and sits down. He doesn't realize that Mahi and Jeet are also in the same resturant as he is.

So, Mahi asks Jeet again... You were going to tell me something now..? Tell me...! Jeet says something that shocks Shabd ..... Shahd hears every little conversation.

(read the conversation btween Mahi and Jeet)

Mahi: Kaho na.. kya kariyo..?
Jeet: Lekin tum bardhaas nahin karogi...
Mahi: Aasia kya baat hai, ke tum mujhe nahin ke sakte..? Tum mujhe abhi kaho, ya mein jaariyo!!!
Jeet: Ok, I LOVE YOU... MAHI......Mein tumse pyaar karne laaga tha... after tumne Shabd se shaadi ki.. Mujhe aaisa lagta hai.. tumne gaalut kiya.. uusko shaadi kaar ke... Lekin kya karo tumhara ma baap mujhe pasand nahin kiya.. aur phir tumhari shaadi woh Shabd rich family se kiya.... Kya paisa shub kuch hota hai...?
Mahi: 😲
😲😲 gets shocked and gets up and sees Shabd standing behind her listening and 😲😲😲😲😲😲......

(Ending Conversation)

Mahi sees Shabd and runs.... but Shabd catches her hand and gets very angry... but not at Mahi... he gets angry at Jeet.......

Jeet tumne aaisa kyun kiya meri Mahi ko..? Next time, maine tumse Mahi ke saath kahi bhi dekha, mein tumse police se report karoga aur kahege.. Koi meri biwi se peeche hai.. aur woh hai TUM........

Jeet just stands there and angry........

Mahi is shocked by hearing Shabd's words at him.... she tells herself, kiya Shabd such mooch mujhe itna pyaar kaar te hai..? Shabd leaves with Mahi.... Mahi kept on looking at Jeet when they were walking away.

Shabd and Mahi go home and Shabd starts asking her questions.....

Kya tum uuse pyaar kaarti ho..? Kyaa yeh tumhara baachpun se pyaar hai..?

Mahi is shocked again when Shabd asks her these questions, and screams STOP IT SHABD!!!! Haah woh mera pyaar tha..... lekin uub mein tumse pyaar hai.. aur tumse hei kaarogi....

(elaan ki juung starts from here)

Shabd leaves the house for some fresh air.......

Will continue 2moro!!
Edited by Khushiyana - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
thnx a lot for continuin kushi!! Luvya 😳
Shabd is gonna strt thinkin she liks Jeet 😭 😭
Oh noooooooooooooo 😭
Jeeeeeeeeeeeeettttt!!! Got 2 Soni 😡 😡
thnx a ton 4 continuin 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
👏👏👏wow..wow..wow...One more part for today please!!!!!!! I beg! I'm hooked to this story! Uss Jeet ki himat!!😡
Thanks for the 2 new parts! Please one more!
I'm in Love with Shabd.😳
He loves Mahi choo much!
Keep it up hun!👏

Luv ya..

Ouma
Edited by ~Ouma*n*Eijaz~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nsheena

thnx a lot for continuin kushi!! Luvya 😳
Shabd is gonna strt thinkin she liks Jeet 😭 😭
Oh noooooooooooooo 😭
Jeeeeeeeeeeeeettttt!!! Got 2 Soni 😡 😡
thnx a ton 4 continuin 😳



welcome
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Eijaz~

👏👏👏wow..wow..wow...One more part for today please!!!!!!! I beg! I'm hooked to this story! Uss Jeet ki himat!!😡
Thanks for the 2 new parts! Please one more!
I'm in Love with Shabd.😳
He loves Mahi choo much!
Keep it up hun!👏

Luv ya..

Ouma



thnxx hun.. sorry but i have to go to work.. I will continue soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg omg omg!

I love it!☺️☺️

Shabd so sweet didn't even get angry on her Jeet hun stay away from Mahi or else!😡

Continueee soon!☺️

Shabd don't do something stupid! Mahi love Shabd even more now Jeet go to the other corner of the world😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
awsome part di but you are making lots of twists😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
omg..amazing..ur sucha good writer...juss love itt....continue soon..cant wait for the next part..i hope mahi and shabd stay 2gether forever
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
juss read the whOle FF!
YOUR SO TALENTED!
cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Just caught up! omg so much has happened - jeet gonna ruin the relationship between MS contrast from the first part

Awesome work - cant wait 2 read more. Looking 4ward 2 ur next part!

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