Pyaar Mein Twist- Part 6 pg.14 --NEW - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG..i read thw whole thing in ONE sitting..loved it..keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
#42

great job Khushi👏👏👏

amazing😛

I'm loving Mahi-Shabd's love-story😳

too gud😳

keep it up😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you shoo much everyone.. will continue soon!!
Comments are always welcome!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4: Shabd is pi***tttt

After Shabd, leaves the house for fresh air, Mahi goes upstairs to her room and locks the door. She tries to re-think over and over.. that Shabd thinks she still loves Jeet. Meanwhile, Shabd comes back from his cool fresh air and goes to her and apologizes to Mahi.

(Conversation starts btween Shabd-Mahi)

Shabd- Mahi mujhe iss thara salwal nahin poochne chaaye...Mujhe Phaaf(forgive me) kaar do..?
Mahi- Aap kyun phaafy maang riyo... yeh mera kaasur(fault) hai.. toh mujhe phaafy maang ni chaaye..
Shabd- Chalo hum dono ne phaafy maangli....! aur haan.. sorry ke maine angry se phone phe baat kiya tha ghub tumne phone kiya tha lunch keliye..
Mahi- Its ok Shabd.... doh pyaare loog phaafy aur sorry nahin kehte...
Shabd- Lekin mujhe woh Jeet jaisa larka tumhare paas nahin dekna chaaye... yahani mein kuch kaaroga...
Mahi-lekin woh mera dost hai bacchpaan(childhood) se... Kya mujhe aapko poochne paardega, ke kyon aur kyun mere saath lunch pe ya phone pe baat kariyo..?
Shabd- Lekin tum jaanti ho, ke Jeet ne hum dono se split up koshish kkoya tha..? Mujhe asisa lakta hai.. ke tum abhi bhi uuhse se pyaar kaar thi ho... KYUN...?
Mahi- ahhhhh...... grrrrrr.... leaves the room.....

(Conversations end)

Mahi goes down and phone rings.... ring ring ring....... Mahi picks up the phone same time as Shabd ..... and its Jeet.. saying Dekho Mahi mein tumse succha pyar kaartha ho.. Tum mujhe pyaar karo ya na karo.. mein intezaar karoga..

Shabd listens and Mahi is afraid to reply...She slams the phone down and Shabd speaks.. Oye Chaam chye... Meri biwi ko line maar tha hai..😆😆😆? Dekhna mein uub kya kaartha ho.... Jeet says, aap kya kyaaringe...? Aap kya kyarigne..? Mera aur Mahi kya love film dekhege..😆😆😆? Shabd gets reallly really p**tttt and screams MAHIIIIIIII......😡😡😡

Mahi is standing there and Shabd says... Mujhe yeh bandaar ka phone nahin chaiye ise ghar mein... saamjhi..?

Mahi says... theek hai...

Ring Ring Ring......... (phone rings) Shabd says... its him again.... phone maat laayna......

Shabd picks it up and its Mahi's mom... Shabd says, Hello Maa-ji...... Maa-ji says.. yeh mein kya dekiyo...? yeh kya horaiye..? Shabd asks, kyun..? kya hua..? Maa-ji says Maine aaj sobah Mahi aur Jeet ka love story dekhi hai newspaper mein..! Shabd is stunned 😳..... and realizes Mahi really loves Jeet....

Shabd puts down the phone and looks at Mahi.. and Mahi starts asking him.. Kya hua..? Mommy ne kya kaha....? bhoolo nah......

Shabd phir kehta hai.. tumhe deklo newspaper... aur kehna KYA HUA.....?

Mahi picks up the newspaper and reads... says in her mind.. HAILAAAA, HIYE RABBBAAAAA.........

Mahi says, yeh suuch nahin hai... yeh sub jhootha hai.. mein uusko pyaar nahin kaarti..... Mera yakeen karo Shabd....

(Will continue soon)
Edited by Khushiyana - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi dear please dont eptrate mahi shabd bec of stupid jeet please make shabd possisive ab mahi woh mahi kopagalo ki tarah pyar kare aur mahi bhi aur shabad mahi ko jeet se bacahye please 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: monikaseth

hi dear please dont eptrate mahi shabd bec of stupid jeet please make shabd possisive ab mahi woh mahi kopagalo ki tarah pyar kare aur mahi bhi aur shabad mahi ko jeet se bacahye please 👏 👏 👏



thanx jaan.. btw.. wht do u mean by dont eptrate mahi-shabd..?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushiyana



thanx jaan.. btw.. wht do u mean by dont eptrate mahi-shabd..?

i mean mahi shabd ko alag na karna woh jo bhi kare sath mein kare👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh god yeh jet pagal ho gaya 😡 😡 kya ab kya hoga 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

oh god yeh jet pagal ho gaya 😡 😡 kya ab kya hoga 😉



Wait and Watch😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏👏*yey* ~ U wrote another part!😛👏 Didn't have to wait till Sunday!😳😃😃

~ But that Jeet!!!!!😡😡 ~ Why is he after a married women..! Where is Soni??~ Maybe Shabd and Mahi can get Jeet and Soni together..o he can leave Mahi to Shabd!!!😛😳

Great Part!!👏

Luv ya..

Ouma

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