My Subtitute Better Half - SHAHI - CH 2 - 5-11-08

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello everyone,
I'm going to start a new Shahi FF: My Subtitute Better Half. It's a comedy love story, of course. I think the last one was too much for you guys to handle. I can understand. 😆
Hilarious, I must say. It's not my original idea. It's from a novel I read couple of years ago. I came across to it a while back and thought this story is perfect for our Shahi.
Shabd and Mahi. I will say you guys will love Mahi. Her character is colorful like her. Shabd will be a jerk, of course but he'll be possessive of her. 😉😳 That's all I can say. I want you guys to be surprised or I hope so. 😆
I'll be introducing characters as the story moves on. I just wanted to know if anyone is interested?
If yes, let me know.
Ciao,
Jake
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Chapter 1:
Hillridge, California
"Let me get this straight: You are eloping to New York city with an old lover and you are asking me to break the news to your Fiancee that you are leaving him?" Mahi stared at her sister in disbelief.
"Uh. That's right. Don't make it sound so ... so ... so unclean.", said Suhani. She pouted. "You are the one who liked reading those lame romance novels.", she snapped. "I thought you would understand me wanting to marry for love. I love Bobby."
"Oh, I understand that, alright." Mahi said. "What I don't understand is how could you do this to Shabd? At least, explain it to him. You owe him. You can't just write it on a note and ask me to hand it to him. That's absurd!"
"I can't mail it. What if he doesn't get it or something?" She looked worried. "And I can't just leave a message on his answering machine. That would be totally uncool." she said with a self rightoeus air as if inviting Mahi to congratulate her on her sensivity.
What Mahi really wanted to do was cut open her head and see if anyone was home in there.
Suhani continued her packing. She folded a blue silk nightie and tucked it along the side of the suitcase she was packing, then reached for her panties, bras and began tucking them too.
Watching her, Mahi tried to think of something to convince her. Oh, she wouldn't care if she breaks up with Shabd. Hell, no. He deserved better. But breaking a man's heart like this wasn't right. She hated the idea that whenever he thought of her it would be as the person who had given him the news that his Fiancee had run off with an other man. Oh, lovely!
Even if he did think of her, it was clear that his taste wouldn't include someone like her. Short, blue eyes, Armani glasses, with big, black curly hair. Hell, she was barely 5'7 inches.
"You know, he might be angry, upset. He might say something mean too.", Suhani said like it explained goddamn everything.
Mahi leaned one shoulder against the doorjamb and watched in silence as Suhani zipped the suitecase closed and set it on the floor. Suhani was beautiful. She was almost every man's dream. Nothing like her though. She was tall with light brown eyes. Shabd would miss her, she thought.
"I really think you should do it face-to-face.", she said giving it one last try.
"Uh-uh. No way. He has one nasty temper. I don't want him to spoil this for me. Besides, it's not like he is in love with me or anything."
Mahi looked shocked. Suhani must have seen her total lack of understanding, because she drew in a deep breath and said: "Shabd and I had a ... um ... a sort of buisness arrangement."
" Buisness ... What? I thought you were getting married?"
" We were. It's part of it, actually." She said. Mahi stared at her blankly. " It's not hard to get it. You are smart. What do they call it in those books you read? Uh ... yes ... Marriage of convenience. That's what we were going to have. Only with ... um ... sex. I mean, c'mon! Without it? Hell, no!" Suhani chuckled.
A marriage of convenience? Shabd Sareen and Suhani? The thought made Mahi's head spin. That didn't happen in real life. Real people ... wait ... do they?
Mahi didn't know what to say. "Why?"
"Shabd's Tayaji wants him to get married before his 36th birthday. He didn't tell me why ... which is in a couple of months."
"Okay." Mahi gulped. "What about you? What are -- supposed to -- get in return?"
"You have to ask? Money. A lot of them."
Of course, thought Mahi.
"Money?" Mahi tried to make sense. "Money?"
"Yes, Money. C'mon Mahi! That man is richer than Bil ... whatever his name is ... His family owns a lot of property. Half in India and half here, in States. Every time that man breaths, he's making more money."
"And he was going to ... what? Give you money to marry him?", asked Mahi.
"Mmmm-Hmmm"
"Now ... you are giving that up to go live on a dairy farm?" The idea of Suhani living on a dairy farm was insane ... and a bit scary. Mahi chuckled to herself.
"What? Money can't buy happiness, Mahi." Suhani said dramatically. "Besides, I have the engagement ring. Shabd gave it to me and it's worth a fortune." She picked it up from the nightstand and smiled at it.
"You can't keep that! That ring!", Mahi protested.
"Why not?", Suhani gasped. She closed her hand around it as if afraid Mahi might snatch it from her. "He gave it to me. It's mine!"
"He gave it to you so you will marry him."
"I was going to marry him."
"Now, you are not!"
Suhani sighed. "What's the difference, really? It's not like I lied to him. I'm sure he gives a damn. He will understand."
"Traditionally, you are supposed to give him back.", Mahi reminded her.
Ignoring her, Suhani said: "You will take the letter to him, won't you?"
Mahi hesitated, but she knew Suhani better enough to know she'll be in trouble if she won't.
"Are you --"
"Positive. I appreciate it, you know." Suhani frowned. "I'm sure Shabd will remember you. I mean who wouldn't remember those glasses and that hair!"
Mahi slid the envelope into the back pocket of her jeans. Thirty minutes later, Mahi stood on the front porch and watched Suhani and soon-to-be-husband drive off. She wished them luck. Bobby going to need it. Mahi laughed at that thought.
Sighing, she pulled the letter out of her back pocket and tapped it absently on her right thigh. She will go and see Shabd, give him the letter, say how sorry she was that things couldn't work out, and leave. It was right thing to do, after all. Right?
And wasn't she glad that doing the right thing gave her an excuse to see her sister's ex-Fiancee?
To be continued ...
Edited by Mahi-lover - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!
first of all shabd's 36 years old, that's new
can't believe what suhani is doing not that i mind
so now what, is shabd going to end up marrying mahi?
plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh I absolutely love it, love it, love it!!. your a really good writer. It was a really nice beginning...please continue with the story soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rkath

wow!

first of all shabd's 36 years old, that's new
can't believe what suhani is doing not that i mind
so now what, is shabd going to end up marrying mahi?
plz update soon

Thank you guys. Then u have no idea about Mahi's age. 😆😉 Thats the cutest twist. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I only got 2 comments. I was wondering ... should I continue it or not?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG! This is so good! WOW! YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! WOOT! Love it! Keep rocking and yes! Continue!👍🏼👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oooye sorry for late comment pl conti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awsome start, please keep going!😉
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Chapter 2:

There's nothing like falling in love at first sight. Mahi was not even sure if people still believed in love at first sight. She did. She moved to States at the age of ten and three years later, after her father's death, she and her mom moved to California. Mahi loved the feeling of falling in love, that throat-tightening, heart-pounding feeling. She loved the knowledge of that everthing will be different, you will be different. Your life will never be the same ... nor you.
Actually, the first time she fell in love was when she was thirteen years old. Joshua was 16. He was her neighbour. He was tall, dark and very ... masculine. When she saw him first she knew she was in love. She never talked to him though. Everytime she wanted to go introduce herself, her chest started pounding. Then one day, he moved away and her heart broke into million tiny pieces. Hell, life goes on ... Joshua become a sweet memory.
Then Albert Khanna came into their lives. Actually, in her mother's life. After her father's death her mother became some kind of a gypsy. She was always moving to one city to an other --- to search for --- what? Art? She was a big fan of art. Peace? Though, she never wanted to go back to India. She told me she didn't have any family in India, so what's the point? Albert and her mother, Moni, never got married, but she did leave her with him when she decided to leave for Mexico. Her mother said it was just across the border, she will be back for her.
Suhani is Albert's daughter. She was eight years older than her. Mahi'd half forgotten those feelings when Suhani brought Shabd Sareen home to meet her father, and Mahi was suddenly thirteen years old again. Her heart pounded so fast that she knew it will come out of her chest any second. Those feelings --- that quick rush of excitement and fear. She knew this one was the one. But the joy had lasted only for a minute. Who was she kidding? He was Suhani's Fiancee. She told herself a lot of times, she couldn't mourn for something --- or someone --- which wasn't hers. Mahi hadn't been able to shake the feeling of loss.
Now, here she was, on her way to tell Shabd that he was a free man again whether he liked it or not. Once, again he was a bachelor.
Today, there was a lot of traffic, Mahi thought. Her VW, Sam, was giving her enough trouble. ''Don't worry, Sam. Ignore those idiots. They don't know what real class is.'', said Mahi. Mahi spotted Shabd's house. Mansion, she corrected mentally.
Shabd was probably there, waiting for Suhani so they could go to somewhere romantic or maybe have a romantic dinner? Later, he was probably looking foward for Suhani to spend the night. Mahi decided she didn't like that idea for one single bit. It added the acid bite of jelousy. If she knew Suhani well enough, she knew they were probably sleeping together. Muttering under her breath, she turned into the driveway.
Sighing, Mahi got out and spotted the doorbell. After ringing it, she shifted nervously to one foot to the other, fighting the urge to shove Shabd's letter under the door and run like a madwoman. Before she could decide, the door opened and she was surprised to find herself looking into Shabd's gorgeous blue eyes.
''Mahi?'' Shabd sounded surprised. At least, he knew who she was, Mahi thought with a relief. It could have been embarassing to know that she was mad in love with a man who didn't even know she existed.
''Shabd ... I-I didn't expect you.''
He arched one brow in surprised: ''I live here.''
Mahi flushed. ''No, I meant ... I was expecting your housekeeper.''
''Oh. It's her day off. Suhani isn't here, is she?'' She shook her head.
''Why don't you come in?'', he asked. Mahi hesitated before accepting his invitation. She wanted to tell him she was fine standing here, but God she was freezing out here.
''Thanks.'' His home was simply beautiful. He certainly had a good taste. His furniture looked both elegant and comfortable. There was a small fire in the fireplace which added a warm intimicy to the atmosphere.
Shabd: ''Would you like something to drink?''
Mahi: ''No, thank you.''
He stood there, arching his brow in question.This is the time, thought Mahi. She should say something smooth ... something gentle ... for the bad news yet to come.
''Suhani isn't coming.'' she blurted out. Oh yeah, that was great Mahi! Good going. Real sensitive.
''I kind of figured that.'', he said. Mahi couldn't read his expression. ''So tell me ...I take it ... her absense is permanent? She decided to become a nun? Having a sex change operation?''
''A ... dairy farm.'' Mahi said to Shabd's astonishement. ''She's ... uh ... marrying one.'', she continued. ''Bobby was her High school sweet-heart ... he came back ... and well ...''
''Hit a home run with my Fiancee?'', he finished for her. Mahi nodded.
''That's a relief. I would hate to think that she dumped me for a jerk. Any reason she couldn't do her own dirty work?'', he asked a bit irritated.
''She thought you might be upset.'', she stated.
''Upset? She runs away with some psyco a month before the wedding and she thinks I might be upset?'', he asked in disbelief.
Mahi pulled the letter out of her back pocket and handed it to him. ''She ... left you this.''
He stared at it for a long moment before taking it from her. He opened it and Mahi thought maybe it was her clue to leave.
''Have a seat, Mahi.'', he said. Mahi obliged.
Shabd laughed out loud. ''She says she's sorry to leave me in the lurch like this, know I'll understand that true love is more important than money. Hopes I won't have much too problem canceling wedding arrangement.'' He crumpled the letter and tossed it into the fireplace.
''I did suggest she should return her engagement ring.''
Shabd stared at her and said: ''I give a damn about it. Your sister can have it.''
''She's not really my sister ... she ... uh ..not even my stepsister. My mother and her father never got married. Then my mother left me with them.'', she explained.
''Abandoned you?''
''No. Not exactlty.'' No one understood Moni better than she did.
They both felt silent. ''Are you hungry?'' Shabd asked a moment later.
''No.'' Mahi smiled. She cleared her throat and said: ''Suhani told me the thing with your Tayaji. Not everything though. She said you had to get married before your .. 36th birthday?'', she made it sound like a question.
''She did, didn't she?''
Mahi waited for him to tell her it wasn't any of her business or go straight for ''Get out!''.
But he shrugged and said: ''He is after me ... He wants me to have kids .. couple of little Sareens ... get settle. I wasn't interested ... so, he came up with this scheme. He won't give me a penny until I do.''
Mahi grinned, ''Well, it does sound a little ... odd.''
''Odd, yes. You can call it that.''
''So ... you still have this ... deadline ... hanging over you?'', Mahi asked.
''I guess. Hard to say. Tell you the truth, he wasn't really impressed by your ... not-so-quite stepsister. So, he may cut me some slack. Then again, maybe not.''
''When is you birthday?'' An idea hit her.
''Two months.'', Shabd replied.
''That's not very much time, I must say.'' Mahi leaned foward and clasped her hands together and pressed them between her knees to hide their nervous shaking.
''Not much time.'', Shabd agreed.
''You could ... I mean ... it might sound a little odd ... but not really odder than the whole idea of ... Not that there's anything wrong with it ...'' She realized she was babbling and shut her mouth with a snap. Shabd was looking at her, his expression midly curious.
''What could I do that isn't any odder than marrying your not-so-quite stepsister?'', he asked.
Mahi stared at him. Paralyzed, helpless. She knew there was no way of stopping her.
''You could marry me instead.''
To be continued ...
Edited by Mahi-lover - 16 years ago

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