OS : Save Da Last Dance For Me 030411

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Posted: 14 years ago
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After sharing da VM Jus one last dance... on 26 Feb 2011
I saw many comments abt da word *Last Dance*...
which got me started on dis OS n da mention of Last Dance.
SO dis OS is for all those who wanna feel da music in der veins
as u hear da word... Last Dance.
which Ironically is NOT da last one !!

Dis is an One Shot (OS) on a fictional sketch.
Hope its easy to envision it as u read ...
yet another dose of Imagination winning over Reality
To Prithvi as HIM and Damini as HER
It was a weekend... and de had all decided to go out
sum Friends sum Family and den Sum...


da music was loud. she was celebrating life.
she was also teasing him by dancing wid her friends
was she a tad too close to them den needed??
she lifted her hand in da air n swayed her hips seductively.

He was sitting on da high stool at da bar.
Holding a glass of bright golden whiskey he took a sip
and raised da glass at her in silent toast
A burning feeling started at her mouth n travelled south
His eyes wer like 2 fire branded coals.
and de wer watching her tease da life outta his jealous streak

Da friend she was dancing wid slipped his hand at her waist in a dance move
His watched it throwing imaginary daggers at da friend.
She closed her eyes da moment she saw HIM widen his eyes slightly.
She knew she had hit HOME. She turned her back to da bar area dancing to da beat.

He knew he shud have told her to stop.
but his ego hadna allowed dat. and wen one of da friends had asked her for a dance...
He had sat der mutely n allowed her to go on da dance floor.
He knew she was teasing him. He had felt da vibe. She liked him.
Now it was upto him to act. To remind her... whom she belonged to...

So he called n whispered sumfink to da Bartender.
He kept da glass on da bar table wid a slight bang.
da golden liquid slosshed on da table... mirroring his turbulent thots
He stood. and slowly slid his jacket from his shoulders. It fell bk on da stool.
Den he unbuttoned his sleeves n rolled dem up to his elbows.
da loosened tie had no bussiness today so he removed it in one clean sweep
threw it bak to join da discarded jacket.
Flicking open da top 3 buttons of his sky blue office shirt, he bared his wide chest
Knowing he had atleast turned sum 7 odd chick-eyes his way...
but his hawk like eyes wer watching only her
He tilted his neck left n den to da right... jus like a vampire.
He was ready to brand her...HIS.

He started walking towards da dance floor.
On cue...da music stopped and da live singer for da night
started belting out da popular Michael Bubble's song
Couples slowed down n started swaying romantically.

She had her eyes closed wid her back to da bar...
wen da singer started singing...

*well you can dance, every dance with the guy
Who gives you the eye, let him hold you tight*


She stopped midway n smiled.
she felt HIM behind her back even b4 he touched her
A callused hand touched her bare shoulder n slid down her right arm
n across her belly and grasped her left hand
almost being plastered to her back
and den in one smooth move He turned her to face him

*And you can smile, every smile for the man
Who held your hand, beneath the pale moonlight*


De stood mere inches away from each other
hands entwined between der bodies.
She smelled da warm whiskey on his breath
and da intoxication was putting her in a trance of her own.
and den he smiled... like a panther watching his prey
and his eyes mirrored da singers lyrics
dats when she knew she had lost a LOOSING battle wid her destiny.

*But don't forget who's taking you home
And in whose arms you're gonna be
So darling, save the last dance for me...*


Outside he was an epitome of calmness.
Inside he was a big puddle of molten lava.
He had so much to offer her, his heart was on his sleeve.
He took 2 steps away from her his left hand pointing at her
and he circled around her as she stood still on her feet
mesmeried by his eyes. feeling da energy dat was flowing outta him to her.
Suddenly her throat felt parched

She smiled n haughtily flicked her hair off her shoulder
n started walking off da dance floor towards da bar.
She saw his glass of whiskey n wanted a sip...like real badly.

*Oh I know, That the music's fine, Like sparkling wine
Go and have your fun
Laugh and sing, But while we're apart
Don't give your heart To anyone*


She had taken jus 4 steps away and da word APART made her stop.
NO she didna want to be apart.
However He had never indicated as dem being together
n now he was dancing on being apart??
wot was happening.. jus how many drinks he had really gulped down??
She turned bak towards him... as he danced his way towards her.
No he was not faltering... den how was he expressing so much tonite...

*And don't forget who's taking you home
And in whose arms you're gonna be
So darling, save the last dance for me*


He knew it was time... He knew da lyrics to da song.
He had paid da singer to sing dis particular song
He slid down on one knee jus on cue...
as da singer crooned da BEST part of da song

*Baby, don't you know I love you so
Can't you feel it when we touch
I will never, never let you go
I love you, oh so much*


As she felt his warm big strong hand on her ankle...
da burning sensation started again...
dis time from her ankle up north...
n dis time its was not travelling far...
She had an urge to stop his hand...
she wished da crowd suddenly dissappeared...
as he stood up in fronto her...
his right hand now travelling up her arm to her shoulder...
he moved into her space almost touching her shoulder to hip...
his right hand now travelled over her shoulder n down her spine
she cud barely breath such was da closeness

The song got bolder... mirrorring his actions
as da crowd hollered whistles at his move.
He closed in on her... as she closed her eyes once again
His warm lips almost touched her ear
and he whispered... NOW try dancing wid anyone u want.

*You can dance Go and carry on
Till the night is gone And it's time to go
If he asks If you're all alone
Can he walk you home You must tell him no*


He hugged her tightly...almost smouldering her wid his heat...
her hands prisoner to his strong ones around her tiny frame
and den he tilted her back slightly...as his right hand came to slide down her hip n calf...
on cue she straightened her left leg out high up in da air
his left hand supporting her weight easily.
She slid her right arm around his neck and her left hand reached inside his open shirt
The touch was Scorching. Her smooth hand slid over his hair sprinkled chest
De sure wer in each others arms dat moment
The heat was killing him majorly...
He wished der was an dark alcove he cud carry dis further into...

*Cause don't forget who's taking you home
And in whose arms you're gonna be
Save the last dance for me*


He pulled in his thots before de travelled dat path...
and pulled her up straight before he embarrased dem both.
and started walking off da dance floor, her hand still held tight in his

Oh I know That the music's fine Like sparkling wine
Go and have your fun
Laugh and sing But while we're apart
Don't give your heart To anyone
And don't forget who's taking you home
And in whose arms you're gonna be
So darling, save the last dance for me


As da crowd cheered happily... from da corner of his eye HE saw HER blushing
knowing tonite, HE and SHE were becoming DEM.

So don't forget who's taking you home
Or in who's arms you're gonna be
So darling save the last dance for me
Oh baby, won't you save the last dance for me
Ooh, you make a promise
That you'll save the last dance for me
Save the last dance, The very last dance... For me
!!

Da cosy lit Max Brennan restaurant dat night had a order
to deliver der BEST chocolate creation to Suite 1402.



Writers Note:Audio Link for da song
Hope u all can envision it da way i have written it
Have a wonderful weekend yall'
*skorpion*

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Maz. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hot :P

Of course I can envision it so well ;)..when every movement and emotion is described..not hard at all..hehe..

Tinge of jealously + Passion + Dance = Winner :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Panna !!!!!!!!!!!!! That was purely classic!!!!!

someone dedicating an apt song!!! upar se the HAWT attitude............ OH the rolling of the sleeves, the flanking of the tie................ Totally visualised it!! and TRUST I feel GOOD !!😳

Baat sab se karo...... Pyaar humse karo attitude of Prithvi.. Killer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hahaha HOT indeed... Jealousy.. always love that.. I know someone who's going to be very happy with you Panna.. 😆 Hot stares... shucks.. im sucha sucker for that one.. and the touch.. who doesnt like that.. anddd.... seduction and passion... Like Mazzy said.. winner indeed.. I liked the bit when she responded to it all :P Liked that alot.. *grins like an idiot*

Loved the last line.. 😆

Ahhhhh.. last dance... This one was the beginning of many others..

Good Job Panna.. Its always great reading something by you.. 😊

Take care,
Maham
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fainted* coz of de HEAT b?w him n her

dat was jus so sizzling H.O.T.

awesum job...luved it .. awesum...fabulous...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Panna...

beautifullyyyyy envisioned imagination .. absolutelyyyy beautiful 😍☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏while reading i jus imagined dat realy hapenin b/w dem a hot burning chemistry.....great job ya..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maz.


Hot :P
Tinge of jealously + Passion + Dance = Winner :))


@Maz: word to ur equation. as far as PriDa is concerned...
anyfink n everyfink leads to HEAT !!


Originally posted by: Viduu


Wow Panna !!!!!!!!!!!!! That was purely classic!!!!!
and TRUST ME I feel GOOD !!😳


@Viduu: A song + Imagination + PriDa as topic = Sheer Entertainment
for da senses... now i am experimenting wid ARSH... so beware :p


Originally posted by: ...Maham...


Hahaha HOT indeed... Jealousy.. always love that.. I know someone who's going to be very happy with you Panna.. 😆
Like Mazzy said.. winner indeed.. I liked the bit when she responded to it all :P Liked that alot.. *grins like an idiot* Loved the last line.. 😆
Ahhhhh.. last dance... This one was the beginning of many others..
Good Job Panna.. Its always great reading something by you.. 😊
Take care,
Maham


@Maham, i am so waiting for dat SUMONE to browse dis zone today
n abt great reading... da feeling is MUTUAL Maham.
Aaj thoda ANGST dept ko side pe daal dia... socha ye try kar lu.
am glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: Preeths609

fainted* coz of de HEAT b?w him n her
dat was jus so sizzling H.O.T.
awesum job...luved it .. awesum...fabulous...


@Preeths609: Hahaha... aint dat da ACTUAL reaction u might have if Prithvi comes n stands in fronto yaa... Hmmm.

Originally posted by: Nan08


Panna...beautifullyyyyy envisioned imagination .. absolutelyyyy beautiful 😍☺️



@Nan: tenu aur kinna blush karna hai !!
n i am so glad u cud imagine da whole scene.
Prithvi's jealous streak was shown in da Post-Grasshopper dance parking lot scene... If only dis was wot followed...Hmmmm


Originally posted by: akansha_lnmdj

👏while reading i jus imagined dat realy hapenin b/w dem a hot burning chemistry.....

great job ya..


@Akansha_lnmdj: whoa... glad i cud make u drool over PriDa.
thanxxX for commenting.


skorpion.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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As someone aptly said such things are called "GOLD"
Wooh FullOn Attitude, Love,Jealous streak,HEAT,Passion uff *Swoon*
Could Envisage this a NEW PRIDA altogether ❤️ oo...oozing attitude ....Hawtness personified
Lovely Song
After a long time read such FINE Write-up
Its a Masterpiece 😛

Like Vidu said: The attitude
Baat sab se karo...... Pyaar humse karo attitude of Prithvi.. Killer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
was just so Befitting
Edited by sia88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pannaaaa !!
Gosh........... is this Hawtttt.......... or what ?? 😛 😃
The Mercury was shooting up soo fast that it threatened to shatter the Glass !! 😆😆
Our Damzie set on Teasing him .............. and then his Jealousy and that AHTTITUDE ........... Throwing back his Jacket and then the Tie ........... Aaaahhhh............... soo Good to see them Totally SIZZLE like that !! ( could see them in my mind's eye , you see ) 😛😃
and then they Burn the Dance Floor !! Haiyeeee......... if the ending of our " Grasshopper Dance " had been something like this , all of us would have been Dead and in PRIDA HEAVEN !! 😳
Looooved it !!
Amiya
P.S : Looved the Song .......... had not heard it earlier .............
Soo Charmingly Old World !! 😊😊
Edited by petunia121 - 14 years ago

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