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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Kanchan.S

wow naina must say that u have gr8 writing skills
fab update.........⭐️ 👏
loved this line I have my husband to flirt with me, my dear devarji. Compliment your wife. 🤣
even the cooking scene was nice
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hi kanchan! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you enjoyed this story :) ahah yes the bhabhi devar relationship :) i dont know why but thats what i've always imagined sameer-damini's relationship to be like :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Vinnieangel

awhhh,it was an awesum part...

hope 2 see more of ur work in many more stories..😊



hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this story...i definitely had an awesome time writing it :) and yes i do have other stories running, so do check them out if you get a chance!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: karneetholic

very nice nd fun filled.......



hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you enjoyed the update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: sia88

<font color="#ff0000">un reserved my previous comment sweety do check</font>

So Madam. Where do you think you were going?" he questioned, nuzzling her neck, placing light kisses along her shoulder. Her soft moan only instigated him further, and he continued his teasing. As he slowly moved to her face, he brushed his lips against hers, before going to her eyelids and then trailing down to her nose and her cheeks, and returning back to her lips. This time though, he pressed his lips against hers, pulling her in for a passionate kiss, before she quickly got up and went to the bathroom. Standing by the bathroom door, she whispered "I love you too Prithvi" and blowing a flying kiss, she disappeared.
<font color="#ff0000">ahem ahem...that was sooo Romantic....had a trip to PRIDALAND</font>😍


"Daminiiiiiii." Prithvi groaned as he buried himself in the pillows, trying to get back to sleep.

However, he failed miserably, after seeing his wife sitting in front of the mirror, getting ready for her day. She was wearing a green sari with golden beadwork and a halter blouse. She looked a sight to behold, her hair wet and water dripping all over. Her mangalsutra softly nestled on her neck put a smile on his face. That black beaded necklace marked her as his and his alone, and nothing could make him happier...<font color="#ff0000">WHAT A SCENE ...WHAT A DIALOGUE YARR⭐️⭐️⭐️</font>
<font color="#ff0000">LOVED THE DISCRIPTION</font>

Prithvi stood behind Damini in front of the mirror, hugging her from the back, slowly rubbing his hand in circles on her stomach. "Just six more months Damini" whispered Prithvi into his wife's ear😲<font color="#ff0000">THIS took me by surprise.😆. </font>She smiled looking at his excited face as she said "before I'm going to be carrying your kids in my lap.<font color="#ff0000">"Awwww...so adorable</font> Placing a kiss on his cheek, she pulled away from him, and went downstairs to help Suman Ma and Avni in the kitchen.


She smiled at him, before pulling his ear and saying "I have my husband to flirt with me, my dear devarji. <font color="#ff0000">too good 😆...i wished to see this scene..👏👏.</font>Compliment your wife. I'm sure she's ready to dump the bowl of cereal on your head."

"Don't make fun of him. Poor guy. I don't know how you deal with her" laughed Damini. "My sister can be quite a handful.<font color="#ff0000">"quite qupy</font>😆



"Woah That's my wife there and she's pregnant" <font color="#ff0000">Protective pri...ah...lovely scene....</font>said Prithvi coming in between and pulling Damini away. "You guys solve your own problems, the two of us are out." Saying so, Prithvi and Damini left for work, along with Varun, and Balraj.

There, he saw Avni sitting down, lost in her thoughts as she stared into the sky, wearing a beautiful white and silver anarkali suit. He looked at her in awe, as he thought she looked as beautiful as an angel.<font color="#ff0000">ahh wat a discription</font>



Sameer was only doubly happy to hear the news. Quickly grabbing Avni by the hand, the two raced towards his car and rushed to the hospital, hoping to make it in time to see their little nieces or nephews.

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"Youuuuuu. Prithvi Saxena. I'm going to kill you for putting me in this state. You're never going to touch me again. ARGH. Do you realize what I'm going through? No more kids. I'm done" she screamed in pain, gripping Prithvi's hand tighter as he tried to leave. "NO. You're not going ANYWHERE. STAY HERE!"<font color="#ff0000">😆 too good
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The doctor looked at Prithvi sympathetically, urging him to stay with his wife and not trouble her more than she was already in. Soon enough though, Damini gave birth to two beautiful babies, a boy and a girl. Prithvi stared in awe as the nurses took them to clean them up before they came back to hand one of them to each of the new proud parents.

Taking his child into his own hands was the happiest thing in the world for Prithvi. He looked over to see Damini cradling his baby girl, until she looked up at him smiling. Prithvi sat down on the bad next to her and he leaned over to press a kiss to her forehead "Thanks Damini. You've made me the happiest person alive today. But you didn't mean everything you screamed before right?" he questioned, a little smirk playing on his face.

"Prithvii. I would never be able to live without you, and well I was just in pain before" she responded shyly, before she softly placed her lips on his cheek. The two then sat admiring their babies, the two new entries in their lives.

"Congratulations to the new parents!" everyone screamed as they entered the hospital room. <font color="#ff6633"><font color="#ff0000">However they were immediately shushed by Prithvi, who glared at them before saying "Shhh. My babies are sleeping. Let them sleep in peace</font>." t<font color="#ff0000">his was GOLD excellent...how i wish they showed us this scene atleast...........so awesome ...protective adday


excelelnt yar naina keep up the brilliant work👏⭐️
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hi sia di! wowow i love reading your comments :) haha the trip to pridaland...happens to all of us prida fanatics =D

thanks a lot for reading and commenting though! i'm so glad you enjoyed this story :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sofsunmannee

hey gunsi
nyc part dear
really love it



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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Dark_Star

Another great part! Enjoyed reading it!

Do come up with another FF! :)



hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! so glad you enjoyed reading this story :) haha and i'll definitely try and come up with something new!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: bfolnmdj

hey naina !!!


just loved ur story !!

plzz do write more !!


---Ifrah



hi ifrah! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked the story...and ahah i'll definitely try and come up with something new soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: njjoshi

luv it, happy endings r always good.excellent job..👏




hi! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you enjoyed this update! and ahah don't worry....i lovelove happy endings...so all my stories will end that way 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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