A Love Celebration:Anniversary Special-1,7,8,11 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Promo was too 👏good yarrrrrrrrrrrrr.......ur a swetheart yar
🤗 for u

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi naina
loved this part.
very well written
continue soon.

-baz
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Happy reading!

Chapter 2A:

Seaside Restaurant:[I know…very original name, na?]

Damini was looking around, wide eyed, at the scene in front of her. Prithvi had led her into the restaurant with a blindfold on, but when he had taken it off, the setting looked beautiful. In front of her was a small table, enough only for two people, with a single rose at the center. Covered in red tablecloth, the little table seemed perfect. The entire edge of the room was lined with candles, while the walls were filled with pictures of the two of them. Them at the stables, them at parties, and them during different dates. Tears filled Damini's eyes as she realized how much Prithvi had done to make this day really special for the both of them.

"Prithvi…" she whispered, still awestricken by her surroundings.

"Shh Damini. I don't want to hear anything…" he responded, slowly taking her by the waist and pulling her into a hug. They stayed like that, her head on his chest and his arms around her waist, feeling the closeness in their relationship, the love that they shared.

Prithvi bent down his head to her ear, as he slowly whispered, "So….May I have the honor of a dance with this beautiful lady?"

Soft music began to play as Prithvi held out his hand, which Damini then graciously accepted, a blush forming on her face because of the intense look in his eyes. The two slowly moved along with the music, gazing into each others eyes as they reminisced about their relationship, and all the memories they shared.

[Insert your favorite romantic song here: (I chose Mar Jawan….I'm sure you all know why)

Finally, as the song came to a close, Damini hugged Prithvi tightly, never wanting to let go as she felt so secure in his arms. "I love you, Prithvi" she whispered, standing on her toes to slowly graze her lips across his. A smile across his face as he bent down and pressed his lips against hers, "Mmm. I love you too Damini. I love you too."

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Later that night….

Prithvi slowly braked the car to a complete stop in front of the Gujral Mansion. Their wonderful evening had finally come to a close, as after dinner, they had taken a walk along the beach, just talking and loving the time they spent together.

Damini leaned towards him in the car. "Thank you so much Prithvi for such a wonderful night." She pecked him on the lips once more, before she stepped out of the car and waved goodbye to her boyfriend as he drove away into the night.

As she made her way up the stairs, she glanced over at the clock, only to realize it was past midnight. Uh-oh. Avni and Roshni are going to kill me tomorrow morning for not getting home earlier.

However, she was wrong. They weren't going to kill her the next morning. They were ready to kill her then. Her two sisters had been sitting in her bedroom, waiting for her to come home for the past two hours.

Damini stepped into her room, only to find her sisters sitting on the bed.

Roshni, the more eager and excited one of the two, started questioning her sister immediately. "So di! Where were you for so long? What did Prithvi do for your date?"

Damini just stood there for two minutes, before turning around to close the door, and asking her sisters, "So girls. A sister sleepover tonight? In my room?"

Avni and Roshni slowly smiled, as they realized that their sister was going to fill them in on all the hot, juicy details of her relationship. However, Damini was not one to easily relent.

After changing into her pajamas, she sat on her bed, turning to Avni as she asked her "So Avni. What is this chakkar with the park wale?"

Avni blushed profusely, before she responded. "Hmm diii. His name's not park wale. It's Sameer. He's such a sweetheart, you know di?"

"Looks like you are completely fida over him" giggled Roshni.

Avni just stared into space dreamily. "You know? The first time I met him, we both were actually arguing over who gets the park bench to paint."


Precap: Flashback Savni and Varni!

So Everyone....How was it? I hope you like this post, even though it is mainly Prida. I promise that the next part will include the other couples :) I'll update the second part in a few hours. I have some editing to do
Edited by naina.patel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: avnee

Very well written. Can't wait for the next part.

avnee



hi avnee! (im guessing thats your name =D)

thanks a lot for reading and commenting! hope you like the future parts too :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dark_Star

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Hey!

Great start! Wonderfully written!👏

Looking forward to what happens next.

Do update soon!😃

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Hi Nachiket!

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting :) I'm happy to know you enjoy my writing and haha yes. completely romantic story...no twists or seriousness =D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: alu5123

COULD U ADD ME TO THE PM LIST ,VERY INTERESTED IN KNOWING WHAT COMES NEXT



haha hi! (i dont know your name...sorry)

I'll surely pm you for the next parts...and im glad to know you enjoy this :) thanks for reading and commenting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi!

thanks a lot for reading and commenting! (sorry i dont know your name...)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutiepie_1987

hey dear... it was surely a treat 4 d anniversary.... PriDa dating...wow...

continue soon.... eager 2 kno wt happens nxt....


continue soon....n do pm me....



hello! (sorry....dont know the name :( )

haha im glad to know you liked reading this...kinda wrote it in a hurry...but yeah. PriDa dating...something different :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: marie1994

great,,,,,,,
cont. soon



hi! im glad you liked this :) thanks a ton for reading and commenting!

[sorry...i dont know your name :(]
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi di! thanks a lot for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed this :)

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