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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: 456kv

Awesome update. Sorry I did not comment on your other parts of the story since I just read them today. Waiting for the next part. Thanks for the pm. 👍🏼 👏



no probs i dont have any problem for late comments , whenever you are free and relaxed you can comment at tht time
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Preeths609

wow...fantastic FF naqiya
rosh is abit annoyin...singin lullabies wit her teddieies OMG..poor poor pri

n de end was very sweet pri drinkin de bitter juice bcoz damz mqade it

n u really had me a nbit worried der abt raja..thnkfullly he ended up as her horse lol

keep de fantastic work up👍🏼👏



prethi hahah i got lullabies idea frm my niece , you love makes it all sweet , hahah raja thing i thought was lame , thnx alot prethi love ur comments
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

awesome part naqiya di,loved it
pri remembering childhood incident and then reading damini's diary was amazing.
dam making hm drink that juice and he drank it so easily was adorable



thnx sheetal dear , our pri is always adorable ! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fantabulous update. Loved Damini's diary. You are an awesome writer. Please continue with this story. 👏
Edited by 456kv - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part.. waiting for the next...
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Posted: 15 years ago
sry fr not commenting earlier ws bzy
nice part
pri drank dt bitter juice oooooooooooh so sweet
loved d chem btw dm
contnue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh yeah....pri reading damz diary...i hate boye..😆
fab huh!

and rosh...kuch samjha kar yaar...😆

and omg...pri lying...kya baat hai..😆

fab part naqu di...
update soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 12
Ela noticed their love , she was happy to see her kids happy , one day varun finally tired to come infront of them and asked for forgiveness too , and everybody accepted it , ela asks varun to join GE it would be a pleasure to have him around , days past love is more seen in the air , prida and varni , prithvi comes home before because he doesn't find much interest in work , damini does all pri's work by her self because she loves to do it , everybody is happy to see them like this , suman is also home now and shes out of coma , she was first very much disappointed at damini about what she did but prithvi made her understand that that was in destiny and we now more remember that , suman lives with varun at their flast , prithvi insisted her a lot to stay with them but she made her excuse that she cant live at her daughter's place , its Sunday prithvi makes varun ready to make roshni busy because damini mostly uses her against him, damini was in her room when she received a call and she was dam happy , wow ma I was missing her like nothing mujhey un ke bagir maza nahi ahta tha , then she asks multiple questions when ? time? OMG we would be togetter , thnx for the news ma , love you take care , prithvi was in study room with his files , as he finished his work and headed towards his room he heard damini getting happy for someone very much , he comes hurriedly and hugs her from behind and keeps hand on her eyes , damini knows its prithvi its time for prank , koun hai ? prithvi doesn't reply , arey baba koun hai ? mayank ? prithvi thinks whose this mayank now? , damini keeps on saying mayank choro prithvi ne dehk liya toh , prithvi gets dull what does she mean prithvi ne dehk liya toh ? ,he grabs her more tight , mayank toh itna strong nahi pakarta , kahi tum samrat toh nahi , haye I was missing your smile too much kahan the tum ? prithvi gets more furious ab yeh samrat koun hai ? damini mujhey nahi pechan sakti ? , samrat haath hatao warna me tumhari who dizziling smile kese dehku g , prithvi gets jealous that her wife is his arms and she talking about others whats this yr , he grabs her waist more tight and whispers in her ears pechan koun ? , damini tries to twist array arman tum ? hum ahbi toh miley the tum phir ah gaye tch , arman tumhare muscules bhuaat strong ho gaye hein , dehko arman please leave now aur tumhe pata hai na last time mene tumhe prithvi se kitni muskil se chupaya tha woh khadoos dehk le gat oh , prithvi eyes pops out and he lets go of her , damini turns to see his face , oh prithvi tum me samjhi … prithvi says in ager han han tum samjhi charming mayank ho ga ya dizziling smile wala samrat aur nahi toh arman ho ga , damini laughs to see prithvi fuming with abger , AB TUM MERI HALAT PER HAS RAHI HO ? says prithvi , damini encircles her hands in his neck arrey prithvi me toh tumhe jala rahi thi and I am successful and laughs more loudly, seeing her laughing so cutiely his anger disappears and smiles , damini stops looking at him, and holds her ears and says sorry making puppy dog face , prithvi kisses her suddenly damini replies it more passionly , prithvi pulls her more closer that their foreheads were rubbing , pri started to move to her jaw and gave her peck on her neck , made her sit on his lap and says now tell whose mayank , samrat and armaan ?? glaring at her and trying to give serious look , damini pulls prithvi head to her heart and places it their , mere dil se poch lo prithvi le elawa kuch nahi sunai de ga , prithvi grabs her in tight hug , I love you damini , and damini says I love hmmmm … ek min soch k batati hoon , prithvi grabs her tightly agar kisi aur ke barey me socha bhi na toh toofan aur sweety ke saath bhag jaun ga , damini gets shocked and gets up han bhag jao tumhe kya raho us sweety aur tooofan ke saath huh , and she turns away from him , prothvi grabs her wrist , and pulls her back , damini ahbi toh tumhare saath bhagney ka maan ker raha hai, prithvi tum bhi na…prithvi takes damini put of the city for some change … prithvi is driving one hand on steering other on the gear entwined with damini's hand , and both are enjoying song tere haath me mera haath ho sari jaantein tere saath ho … fully love in the air , you can say oxygen was less as compared to love , suddenly lighting started and it started to rain , prithvi please car roko! , damini barish me ? , han prithvi I love rains please , prithvi parks car near the dhaba , as he turns off the engine damini runs out of the rain and starts to enjoy it, prithvi hurriedly goes out behind her , damini damini ….. wait I am coming too , he stands down a tree to be safe from getting drenched on other damini damini jumps in the rain and some kids comes around her starts dancing , they all play ringa ringa roses she behaves like a kid , prithvi smiles seeing his wife like this , she looks amazingly beautiful , her naturally beauty which he was mesmerizing , damini saw prithvi staring at her , she told him to come why is he there ? he said hes fine , damini knew fun was not complete without him , prithvi saw damini isn't there , he looked here and there , kahi gayi yeh , as he came out from tree shelter he found damini at back , she pushed him , damini yeh kya ker rahi ho me wet ho raha hoon , yehi toh me chati hoon , kya? , acha ek dance karo gey mere saath ?, yahan ? , nahi moon pe dhakkan ofcourse yaahan ! , tum ne mujhey dhakkan kaha roko me tumhe batata hoon , she ran away both were running in the rain , prithvi catched her , ha nab bolo koun dhakkan hai ? , TUM !!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

awwwwwwww...............mayank, samrat, armaan..........yahan to poora star1 pri se pitne waala hai😉..............luved the 'dhakkan' part......aakhir pri ko pata chal hi gaya😆

Edited by davikrazzy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great job yatr but seriosly bhaut log o gay hai ff mein lol

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