PRIDA FF, tu janey na....part 16 pg37 last part - Page 19

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update. Sorry I did not comment on your other parts of the story since I just read them today. Waiting for the next part. Thanks for the pm. 👍🏼 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow.. i liked the Toofan waali part very much - Pri saying I love u to the horse.. and Damini's thoughts around it... 👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
hii Naqiya...i just read all the ten part of this FF........i must say you are a very good writter👏👏👏...all the parts were amazingggg...and extrememly touching⭐️⭐️⭐️...the way you described prithvi's situation after damini left him was too good...reading them really made me sad..wonderfully written👏👏👏....as if this was happening in real..it seemed that way👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...and now that he has accepted her and forgived her...but yet wants to take badla of all the masti she did😳😳😳...hmmm...waiting to see what will happen next😍😍😍...continue soon plzzz...will be waiting for next update😊.
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Posted: 15 years ago
luved it! gr888888888888 ff...do continue
thnks for da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 11


Today was new start of a new life , they both were in each others arms , damini's head was rested on pirthvi's chest , both were dreaming same , in dream both were recalling last night and were loving more … both smiled and blushed in their dreams , none wanted to come out from this dream , this dream couldn't be broken because It was reality , mr and mrs gujral were lost in their dreamland , which came true , damini woke first , she found her self trapped in prithvi , she smiled and blushed wen she recalled last nights moments , she kissed his chest and lifted up her hand , she saw angel's face on prithvi , she moved further and kissed his forehand , his eyes and cheeks and completing the trend his nose as well , prithvi was awake all this time , when he felt damini moving away from his arms , he clutched her back , damini smiled because she knew what he wanted , damini tum ne ek kam ahdura ( incomplete ) chor dia ,prithvi mujehy chor do please she said that turning back to him , no way I am leaving you , aur wese bhi itni shuba shuba ko uth gayi ho lets go to sleep again said her and winked , badmash bhuaat shuba ho gai hai come on now wake up office nahi jana , prithvi remembered something from office , and he sat up hurriedly han woh sweety mere intezar kar rahi ho gi baki kam us se karwa lun ga , damini got angry and this time volcano really erupted, she stood up and said han han jao apni sweety ke pass mat ahna mere pass ab I hate you , I hate you ! prithvi hold her wrist and pulled her back , damini I love you said it with most innocent way , damini said awww in her heart but turned her face from him , hmm lagta hai mujhe yeh kam pura karna parega ga , brushed his lips softly first to hers then started doing it passionately , his hand moving around her back and her hands vertically from his neck to his hairs, …. After their morning kiss prithvi kept his head In her lap and damini was lingering her fingers around his face , they had each others hold very strong , none wanted to move away from each other , they spent lots of time cuddling each other ,
Roshni was curious to know why bhaiya , his bhaiya who wakes up early everytime isn't out yet ? ela knows that they are celebrationg their love and should be granted time , she said roshni to leave them as they are , they had their breakfast in their room by each other's hands , it was noon when roshbi couldn't stand more know she wanted to know whats happening in there , she knocked on other when prithvi and damini were under their balanket and damini was giggling , when they heard a knock both got alert , damini suddenly wore her over coat and prithvi went inside the blanket jus head was out , damini straightened herself and asked to come in , roshni came hurriedly in she saw both were on bed , bhaiya itni dair se so rahey ho you don't want to go office today ? , both looked each other and turned there eyes towards roshni , damini starts to say ahh woh roshni baat yeh he k …. She says hesitating prithvi intreputs and says I am not feeling well na princess so cant go office today , roshni gets concerned when she hears prithvi saying hes sick , and sits beside pri , checking his temperature from his forehead bhaiya kya huwa , ur temperature is normal , prithvi damini stands up in shock to see prithvi lying for first time , prithvi says it making face who damini has given me medicine I am feeling better now and looks towards damini who was looking at him in a shocking manner , prithvi raises up his eyebrows and says hai na damini ? , damini turns on other side and says hmmm roshni let me him rest , me bahar chalti hoon tumhare sath fresh hoke , prithvi thinks k toh me bahaney bana raha hoon aur yeh attitude dehka rahi hai huh , roshni non stop asks prithvi questions that how did he fell ill , and hows he feeling after every minute until damini went to dress up , when she came out from bathroom she wore red suit his favourite amd wet hairs adding more beauty on her appearance , he wanted her beside him , tried many tricks but none worked , damini threatened him to stop it once or she will call doctor for his check up to make especially roshni clear that you are making her fool , damini wanted to rubbed her hands hmm ab maza ahye ga prithvi and smirked and said roshni to lets go and closed lights and asked him to sleep as according to him hes ill , he tried to stop them and convince that hes feeling fine now and wanted to go out too but roshni gave him atleast 20 mins lecture to care about his health and go back to sleep . damini wanted to wrap prithvi in his own trap , ab dehko me aur kya kya karwati hoon k ab tumhe toofan aur wo SWEETY khabi yaad nahi ahye ge ha ha ha ha .
Prithvi on other side trying to catch some sleep but in noon who sleeps? , he curses himself for making such stupid excuse, I am always worst in these , he takes tries to sneak out of the room but roshni is like guard sitting out she screams bhaiya sleep at once or I will come in with teddies to sing you lullaby , that was worst horror for him , he was already missing damini he tried to call her from his cell but damini left her mobile in their room , oh crap yeah damini bhi na , he thinks he should get fresh now , he goes into bathroom and has long shower , comes out in a towel , hmmm feeling fresh he goes thru his clothes in cupboard hmm wht to wear , he is looking for some clothes suddenly he finds book in his cupboard , he picks it up whose it could be? He opened it remembered that day … mr gujral that is really bad manner to open someones dairy and another stick on his hand … he was punished for first and last time when his new class mates pranked on him and made him open their maths teacher diary and read it out loud when he was 9 , hmm miss rosy told me not to open but its of wife I can open it , I have rights do I ? I am eager to know what she has inside may be her previous crushes ? hes takes his clothes on starts her diary , I HATE BOYS was written on first page , prithvi gets shock to see this in a girl's diary , there are many points written in them that why she hates them , prithvi goes thru them all hmmm I am not lik these boys I am safe lol , he turns few pages them he notices something written and highlighted name raja , whose this raja , damini wrote that she met raja in manali , she fell in love for him day one , how she used to have fun with him , he was totally special for her , ohh special prithvi raises his eye brow , shes writes further jab me raja ke sath hoti hoon tab mujhey kahi aur janey ka maan nahi karta I hate to go back to Mumbai leaving raja in manali , hes feels so sad when I leave him he finds many pages on that RAJA , akhir yeh he koun ? agli dafa gun leke jaun ga manali especially for this RAJA huh , then she writes that how much she is missing raja in Mumbai , she wants to go back he nearly reads 30 to 40 pages regarding raja , isey raja ke elawa koi nahi dehkai deta tha kya ? then he laughs out loud when he find raja is a horse hahaha , me bhi kya samjh raha tha , then she describes how she met someone in avni's marriage and then he find mostly pages blank nothing regarding them , today I will make prithvi happy hes returning from delhi I know I did worst with him by hurting him so much but I know that how to make up , today I will make him up and tomorrow I will tell him the truth he has to know it as soon as possible , then he finds page decorated with red pen and gliters , when he reads it he has lonely tear that falls down , she writes
<font size="4">This is my love for him
When I see him crying first thing in my head comes to hide him inside me .
When I see him smiling I want to kiss his smile .
When I pray for him tears roll down on my cheeks
When I am tired I want him to make me sleep in his arms
When he falls asleep I kiss his eyes
When I think of him I smile
When I wake up in the morning I want him around me
</font>
That much you love me damini , I am so lucky to have you , hears someone coming he goes in bed and rolls down , those words are still moving in his head ,he had never read something so beautiful and these words were meant for him , they touched his heart from deep core , damini comes inside with neem and lemon juice for prithvi with roshni , bhaiya says roshni when prithvi is busy adoring those words , hmm roshni ,bhaiya see ap ko thek karney ke liye hum neem and lemon juice laye hein bhabi especially made it for you , prithvi sits up and smiles towards damini lovingly , damini wonders isey kya hogya itni aram se tayar ho gaye pene ke liye ? prithvi takes his hand out for the glass , he asks damini tum ne banaya hai ? , damini answers han sirf tumharey liye , prithvi gives his all round smile to her , she gets more confused whats he upto now , prithvi drinks whole bitter juice like its orange or mango juice without even any excuse , damini aur bana do na ? roshni says bhaiya is se acha feel ho raha hai ? , haaan bhuaat acha feel ho raha hai , chalo bhabi dosra banatey hein , damini still confusedshe stops roshni no roshni yeh din me ek dafa pene ka hota hai can you bring kheer which I made please and sits beside pri , as roshni leaves she says worriedly prithvi tum thek toh ho na ? everything fine na ? yes says prithvi lovingly , I am alright never felt this better , damini thinks hes angry from her , prithvi sorry woh me sirf masti kar rahi thi please maf kar do , kesi masti damini mene kisi baat ka bura nahi mana and really juice was too good and sweet , damini gets shocked that bitter juice is sweet for him definitely theres something wrong with him , prithvi utho jaldi utho , kya huwa damini ? he tucks her hairs back , tumhari tabiyat sach me thek nahi lets go to doctor once , damini relax I said you na I am fine , prithvi then why are you behaving like this then ? , damini i use to love you but today I respect you more than anything in my life , damini doesn't understand yet whats happening , prithvi … sssh damini , and roshni enters with kheer and damini makes prithvi eat kheer to make his taste back to normal , damini thinks they both had enough , she grabs prithvi and takes him out in garden for walk , the cold breeze was enjoyed by both them , hands in hands lost in their world of love they kept on walking…..
Edited by PRIDA_LOVER - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow...fantastic FF naqiya
rosh is abit annoyin...singin lullabies wit her teddieies OMG..poor poor pri

n de end was very sweet pri drinkin de bitter juice bcoz damz mqade it

n u really had me a nbit worried der abt raja..thnkfullly he ended up as her horse lol

keep de fantastic work up👍🏼👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part naqiya di,loved it
pri remembering childhood incident and then reading damini's diary was amazing.
dam making hm drink that juice and he drank it so easily was adorable
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: beauty_niki

<font color="#333366">hii Naqiya...i just read all the ten part of this FF........i must say you are a very good writter👏👏👏...all the parts were amazingggg...and extrememly touching⭐️⭐️⭐️...the way you described prithvi's situation after damini left him was too good...reading them really made me sad..wonderfully written👏👏👏....as if this was happening in real..it seemed that way👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼...and now that he has accepted her and forgived her...but yet wants to take badla of all the masti she did😳😳😳...hmmm...waiting to see what will happen next😍😍😍...continue soon plzzz...will be waiting for next update😊.</font>



hey thnks alot , hope i have satisfied you with next part !
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samratrocks

luved it! gr888888888888 ff...do continue

thnks for da pm



thnx alot , sorry dun knw ur name but thnx n thnx alot ur for ur precious comments they really encourage me
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: loveness

wow.. i liked the Toofan waali part very much -Pri saying I love u to the horse.. and Damini's thoughts around it... 👏👏👏



hope you like another parts too

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