[FF] Love Book...[ Ch 6 - Pg 19 - 02/06] - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: carie

grt sameer's introduction.is it avni???what is she doing alone???plz continue.



@ carie

Thanks for the comment. Glad you lyked the intro 😊 Is it avni...hmm..ull have to wait for the next part to find out 😉 The 'girls'story will unfold as the story progresses. Will update soon!

- Nanthini

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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: happylite

it was just awesome.....please pm me if u can thanks!



@ happylite (lyke your name btw - it sets a jovial mood)

Thanks for the comment. Glad you lyked the intro. 😊 I will add you to the PM list.

- Nanthini

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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: rankanrock

hey nice introduction.. but i just wanna confirm is this a prida ff?



@ rankanrock

Thanks for the comment. Glad you lyked the intro. This is not a solo FF; i will write about Savni, Priday and Simmi (I forgot their jodi''s name sorri) I hope you will continue to read. 😛

- Nanthini

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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

Amazing, well it's obvious that the girl is Avni, whoelse would it be ... so what is she upto, will she be commiting suicide or somthing, which obviously will backfire beacause Sameer the Hero won't let that happen 😳

please PM me when you update 😊
tc
yasmin



@ yasmin ( btw i luv ur dp of iqbal 😍)

Thanks for the comment. 😊 Is it Avni 😉 hmmm...wait till the nxt part to find out. Your rite abt Sameer the Hero 😳😳 He can't let tat happen to the girl rte even if he think he is hallucinating. Wait n see to find out what the 'girl' is upto ..her story will unfold as the story progress.

- Nanthini

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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: kawaii hime

Arey my fav style of writing!! Descriptive! Loved the intro and can't wait for more. Sweets, add me to the PM list! I want to read more if it! The gun part was scary but the hallucination was amazing! Oh GOD! Can't wait!



@ kawaii.hime

Glad you lyked the type of writing n the intro. 😊 I will add you to the PM list. I put in the gun part to give a peek into Sameer's lyfe...let see what he does...i don't want him to be jobless lyke in the serial 😆😆😆
I enjoyed writing the hallucination part - glad u lyked it 😃

- Nanthini

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Excellent! Please continue soon! And please add me to your PM list. Looking forward to your updates :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: urvimjht

Excellent! Please continue soon! And please add me to your PM list. Looking forward to your updates :)



Thanks for the comment. I will update shortly n send out PMs.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was nearly 2 in the morning. There was a still silence as he came face to face with the girl again. She tightly held onto a shoulder bag and was looking everywhere except directly into his eyes. She looked so fragile, yet was so stubborn with her decision to not go with him. But, how could he blame her ' she barely knew him, other than for their 5 minute encounter back at the shed.


Nevertheless, he was beginning to get frustrated. He wanted to leave because he knew he was going to be in deep trouble with his brother but didn't have the heart to leave the girl alone at the railway station. "Fine! Get lost! See if I care!! Some men will come and mob you n then you will know!!" He spat out in a fake angry tone. She glanced up at him - she didn't forget the state she was in before he had appeared.


Sameer smirked and began to slowly walk away. He knew he had her attention now. "Wwaaitt" she said in a faint voice. This was the first time she spoke up. "Can I still come with you?" She asked in an uncertain mumble. Sameer turned out n nodded his head and motioned her to follow him.


Girl's POV


They walked a few blocks in silence before Sameer started off with a list of things she should know if she was going to stay at the house. She nodded her head in approval of everything he said. His determined voice came to a halt as soon as they reached the front door of a house. The mumbling voice of someone from inside the house brought a serious frown upon his smiling face. His panicked state was clearly visible. The sudden changes in his expression made me crack a smile; it had been months since I had consciously smiled.


I didn't know why I was following him. Somewhere down in my heart, there was a tingle of feeling that told me to trust him. "Trust" ' it was a feeling that lead to my downfall. "Ahem, Ahem" the sudden icy cough bought me out of my thoughts. I looked up into a pair of golden-brown eyes that spoke volume. He had his eyes narrowed, as he observed me - the look was intense, that unconsciously I lowered my sight.


"Bhaiyya..umm...Bhaiyya..ttthiis iss...tthiisss" Sameer motioned me to speak up as I had not told him my name yet. "Ddaamini" I said in a voice that was way below any human's acoustic level. "What's your name?" His brother asked sternly. "Damini" I said more determined hearing his voice. He looked at Sameer and then started to walk up the stairs, without giving a response taking his built up ego with him. He stopped halfway as if he forgot something and said "Sameer, first take her to the guest room n make sure she get something to eat."


To continue....😊

Edited by Nanthini9 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nanthini.....excellent ...excellent n excellent....I love it as its going!!!!plzzzzzz update soon n can u add me in ur pm list plz!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow, it is really good:)

PM me when you update.

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