Prida...Don't Say alvida-- Part 3 updated on Pg 6 - Page 5

amazing payal....totally and absolutely amazing!!! thank you and please continue more!!!!



oh and what name have you decided on prida daughter.....could I suggest one if you don't mind...???😳

ummm how about sohini ??? i love that name!
Sohini Saxena....hmmmmm😆

but it's just my thought.......

can't wait for more!!!😃

Great update.

paaal this story is awesome from the word go👏!!!...brilliantly captured emotions..love every bit of it!!!!..i do hope there are more happy parts to come😃

Awesome update Payal!!!! Loved it!!!

Originally posted by: paaal

Part-3


Prithvi's love n respect for her had been more n more.....and before long Prithvi couldn't resist himself from giving her a tight and passionate hug.....n dat Damini too reciprocated it......and had said that she felt the most secured when hez with her......

Prithvi's eyes moistered.....his excitement of seeing his child was suppressed by his wish to see his wife happy and healthy...he just wanted to talk to her and clear all her misunderstandings.....

Prithvi just snapped out of his thought when the doctor came out of the O.T.

Pri: Doctor....
Doc: Mr. Saxena.....Congrats.....It's a baby girl.....But....I am sorry..Damini...
Pri: (his eyes bursting out......almost breathless) kya.....Kya...what has happened to Damini....DOCTOR...GOD DAMN IT...PLZZ TELL ME WHAT HAS HAPPENED TO HER.....AGAR KUCHH HUA NA MERE DAMINI KO....

Doc: Relax Mr. Saxena....n plzz be quite....dis is a hospital...
Pri: DOCTOR...............JUST TELL ME......
Doc: Mr. Saxena...u r being insulting....

Varun and Roshni....just come to handle the situation.....
Varun: Doctor....woh actually...bhaiyya is too tensed.....aap...waise bhabhi theek to hain na??
Doc: Haan...Mrs. Saxena is perfectly fine...but ....woh actually wo dobara Maa nahi ban sakti...kyunki as v had said...unka case kafi complicated tha....n v had no other option than to operate her uterus out.....I hope u Guys r understanding...

Pri: ( a lott relaxed) Ohhh...Ohkk...woh theek to hain na....koicomplication to nahi hain na??
Doc: No...shez absolutely fine.....bas abhi anesthesia ka effect hain....she will b fine by another two hours......lekin haan....kuchh dino tak unko dawaiyyan lena hain...

Varun n Roshni....goes with the doctor....n take further guidelines from her...n also ask sorry from her....their Bhaiyya had been .a bit too loud to her

Ila: (standing near Prithvi) Congrats.....beta..(her faint smile...made him regain his strength)
Prithvi: Aap ko bhi mubarak....Maa
Ila just coudn't control her eyes....hearing dis word from Prithvi.....she had always taken her to b responsible for Balraj's death....n so could never met Prithvi's gaze.....but todays....his 'Maa' just made her feel so much relieved.....tears flowed through her eyes....she felt that her family has been complete now.....n that happy days r now to come...soon...


The night had crawled in....Damini was better now as per the doctor...but was completely under drowsiness......Prithvi was dere inside her cabin...to look after her....Ila along with Varun n Roshni had returned back home...Sameer was still beside Avni....but Avni looked a bit peaceful...she was in deep sleep in Sam's arms....

That night......apparently peaceful was in fact that initial signs of the great turmoil coming in their lives.....Prithvi ...sitting beside Damini....with her hands in his....prayed dat she gets well soon...so that he can tell her everything...make her realise his love.....his pains

awww....tat was emotional...........a very good one infact...........very well written.......too good........chalo both damz n there little bunch of happiness are fine.........😊.

Originally posted by: krupur1103

amazing payal....totally and absolutely amazing!!! thank you and please continue more!!!!<br><br><br><br>oh and what name have you decided on prida daughter.....could I suggest one if you don't mind...???😳<br><br>ummm how about sohini ??? i love that name!<br>Sohini Saxena....hmmmmm😆<br><br>but it's just my thought.......<br><br>can't wait for more!!!😃<br><br><br><br>

Thankzzz...krupsie...well..n why not...Sohini axena is a great name....actually as of now...I had not thought about dis name part...hehe...neway...I am glad dat u liked it...

Originally posted by: sistu

Great update.

For some reason I liked Varni part alot. The way Varun says that he will bring that gal back sounds exactly what varun would do. It was the most pure feeling.

sistu....even I don't noewhy today I felt like writing about Varni...usually am nt much interested as it involved mr.spooky....but today...thought of giving it a try....haaahhh...I was tensed about my varni part....but thank God u loved it....u made me happy...

Originally posted by: pridafan

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awwww..... 🤗 ..N look....u said n I updated*winks*

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

<font color="#0000ff">paal !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗.. dat was absolutely magnificient !!!! luvd it !! all emotions..o god !! hw do u write so beautifully gal ??!! too gud !! <br><br><br>n yaa.. dat veggie mom died - part !! o god.. i as readn it so intensely n suddenly this cropped up n i burst out laughn !! 😆 😆 😆.. o i hv bcm mean !! 😆<br></font><br><br><font color="#ff0099">luv niki..😃</font><br>

Nikzzz.....u noe dat....dat veggie mummy was creating a lott of problem....so made her dead....hehahahha....nahhh....its not only u dats mean....even am dere*grins* (secretly..even am happy)...

Originally posted by: maziya.ibrahim

paaal this story is awesome from the word go👏!!!...brilliantly captured emotions..love every bit of it!!!!..i do hope there are more happy parts to come😃<br>

Thanz a lottt maziya.....I loved ur compliments...soo sweet of u....I am soo glad that u liked it 🤗

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

Awesome update Payal!!!! Loved it!!!

Am scared of the turmoil part...I sooo wish hapiness comes bak in all their lives...plz update soon!!

even am scared abt what to write in the turmoil part....neway....thankxxxx ...n happiness will definately cum back...coz....it takes time to think about saddy saddy dialogues.....n I am lacking time dese days cozmy tests....soo happiness gonna cum soon*grins*

thankue paal u r sweetheart it is the best ff i have ever written on prida

Omgggg.......Pridafan...I am soo elated.....thanxxx a lottt...I will definately try n update quickly....but dese semester xams...from December....I hope u understand

Btwn.....thanxx thanxx alotttt...u r such a cutie...🤗
btwn whats ur name....n call me Payal