FF: THE Prida Chronicles (last prt reposted pg6) - Page 4

thatz amazing

toooo good👏👏👏

It is beautiful how the apology happens and neither of them has to make the first move and it kinda spontaneously happens because in reel life I doubt if any of them would make the first move.

I love the way you write and it is so much in synch with their characters. What I love how you managed to do away with the marriage thingy with both having a sense of loss about it..hahaha

They definitely need to sort out thier differences and be at peace with one another before getting into marriage...

I Absolutely love your FF and do continue sooon..

Sara: Thanks sara. thanks 4 ur concern.mujhe lagta hai ke iss forum me hum sab ek family ki tarah hai. jo ek dusre ki help karte hai. thanks again

@coolfire....I wish there was a love button too because I would press it on ALL your posts.....your detailed feedback means soo soo much....I always know exactly what part u liked....please continue doing so. And I don't know I am still pro the marriage track...lol we'll see how it goes tomorrow.....and if the team hired me....we would see Prida ALL day everyday......😆....also I totally agree about the Prithvi lash out.....I think Damini needs it too now.....yeah sorry about the beauty part...I just figured Damini would REALLY get hurt if t came from Pri and somehow in anger I think Pri won't mind hurting her.........even if he HATES himself after....LOL about the cliffhangers....yeah I am evil like that.😉

@lnmdj_greatfan : omg thanks....I am so glad u didn't fall asleep during reading it...lol

@Tapoor : aww.........you always comments....and your eagerness ALWAYS makes me smile.......and no problem about the parts....I was touched u even liked them much.😃 And I hope ur heart is okay....hurting it was NOT my intention😆

@pridafan : thanks for commenting...love ur icon btw.....a vulnerable Damini....just hat makes Prithvi melt.

@umarajag : lol Uma I don't make moments romantic.....it's the Prida Magic.........and yeah the cat and mouse game is not over....but definitely needed a rest....

@diya86 : OMG I am totally with u on the marriage track..want it really badly....I am a sucker for stories with arrange marriage turn into romance track.......and Prida has exactly the chemistry that can make this work. And yeah had to make Prithvi lash out.......I think it's HIS turn now on the show.......one of the best FFs?.........woman u make me blush with ur complemts....😳........and u think I captured the PriDa intensity.....oh thankYOU...just what I wanted to do........also I try to do longer parts bec I know everyone wants Prida but sometimes real world calls...😉.and when are u making another poem?'What do you do when the only one who can ease your pain is the one who gave it to you in the first place?' ......totally agree with this......I heard this somwhere too and Prithvi will have some MAJOR guilt issues when he finds out damini crying bec of him.....he doesn't do well with guilt specially when it come to people he loves and damini?..........well he already loves her....just doesn't know it yet...

@Dawn Idol :....I know the week was sloooooooow.........I am glad I could help out....thanks for commenting.

@priya73 : thanks for liking it........sorry got distracted by your icon half way during the response....lol....so hot.

@paaal : looks like ur weekends without Prida are a drag too........I am glad I could help out....thanks for always commenting ...means alot......and when u say ur dil maange more....it makes me soo soo happy....not angry at all to hear that my work is appreciated.

@krupur1103 : I know the low dose sucks.....and I don't mind your requests at all.......I am in awe u like it so much,

@hapinezz13 :...I am so glad u agree about the marriage track too..........there are a world of posibilites with Prida....and once the truth comes out about the revenge plan.......well they would be stuck with each other...hehehe..........and yeah I made him look BACK for u.......He wasn't gonna look back originally.....but then thought of another way....lol

@fibrinogen9 :....thanks for liking it. AND commenting..I am so glad u could picture the scene...that's what i wanted

@zainab:......U r so sweet........u Pmed me bec u liked it THAT much.....sending hugs ur way sister! lol......I am glad u think it's realistic.......that's my main aim. and more happening than the real thing???? NAWW!..u r too sweet. and true about the ego and pride thing.....they are too too stubborn to admit it to each other.. neither would initiate and that's why marriage is perfect bec then they are stuck and have to find a way out together. and the more Prida face to to face...was for u....😛....thanks for agreeing about the apology part.....I couldn't imagine one saying it without the other........so it just happened spontaneously....and they will def have regrets about the marriage thing if they say no now....(which I hope they won't😳)........bec they are attracted and they know it.

@sarah:....always wait for ur comments just like I wait for your posts EACH day......lol....and yeah I wanted to make Prithvi take charge...he has not been doing that lately on the show. and I am really glad u think no parts suck....i find that weird to beleive....but thanks for being kind anyway😉...Also right about the angst...LOVE it.......lol that's why I was a MiSA fan...the hurt and sweet bitterness is great...as long as they have a Heart thumping make up after that...........and u r sooo ethical...I wouldn't have minded if U had done it bec I know u won't copy my work........but thanks for being so considerate..😊......My best work till date????.........well this was my FAV complement till date...

@achumen : omg if these scenes make it to the show I woudl prob do cartwheels...thanks for commenting.

@sia88:.aww thanks.....I really appreciate u taking the time out to comment.

@cutipie.niki :....thanks so much...hugs right back at ya sister.

@kamna : aww thanks for commenting......but that was my last update for the weekend....hope u liked it.

THanks for liking it...........That was it for the weekend......If anyone else wants to continue...I won't midn AT ALL.........Infact I would LOVE it......so I can read someone's scenes too....please?????

Gotta go before mom calls me the third time😆

Adios amigos