izhaareishq'THE LOCKET' and promo(pg-31) du c!!!!! - Page 21

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Posted: 17 years ago
hiii dolly.....plz update soon 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Doll,where r u dear..... please update karo na.......
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: litika

hiii dolly.....plz update soon 😭 😭

well i don't know how u'll react to this bt my pc has finally finaally crashed down,,what's more i just have tests and tests everywhere around me ,,it'll still take 1 week if my laptop assists me rest is on god,, i am so very sory 4 this inconvienence

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

hey Doll,where r u dear..... please update karo na.......

mein mein hun yahin bt mera pc mere paas nahin,,,,😭

isliye i am totally helpless ab to bas papa k laptop ka hi aasra hai yaar😕

i ''ll try my level best to updaate as soon as possible!!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmi06

plz plz cont. soooooooooooooooooooooon

i'll try to update it as soon as possible yaar ..pls bear with me😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Ff:izharre ishq,, part 27====

VIDYA

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GUNNY huffed and puffed ,,bt he ran along in his desperate attempt to catch up with naveen and raj,,,both of them were laughing and teasing him,,,,

Naveen==common abhi 5 miles baki hai,, jai,,

Raj==common fatso!!

Gunny,,(catching his breadth)==oh shutup ! I am not a fatso,,,

Raj==all the same u r behaving like one,,,

Naveen==yup!!gunny ek sipahi to apni aakhri saans tak ladta hai aur tum abhi se thak gaye!!

Gunny==bhad mein gaya tum logon ka sipahi,, ek baat batao mereko,,kaunsa stupid sipahi subha teen teen,,,,,….(violently caughs and then sneezes )

Raj==god bless u!!

Gunny==ask god to just save me!!vaise kaunse stupid sipahi subha teen baje 15 miles jogg karte hain??

Raj==hum hain na!! common now fatso ,,,bas 5 miles aur and then we'll reach kma ,,u know na 400 hrs par morning bell baj jati hai!!!!

Gunny stops and stands taking support of an electric pole,,,

Gunny==pls ab bahut ho gaya ,,, chalo taxi karte hain aur kma chalet hain,,,,,

Raj==fatso subha 300 hrs par tujhe kaunsi taxi milegi??

Naveen== be a sport aur ab yeh pagalpan chod,,

Gunny(clutching a stich in his chest and still huffing,,trying to catch his breadth,)==

pagalpan,, vo to 5th mile par hi chut gaya tha, ab to baat heart attack tak pahunch gayi hai,,,

at thise both naveen and raj laughed out loudly,,

gunny was planning to hit both of them on their head with his mobile phone so he advanced towards them,,,but something heavy bumped into his knees just in the midway…..

"gunnyyyyyyyyyyy", cried both raj and naveen in unison,,,and rushed towards jai who was currently lieing flat on bonnet of a dazzlingly white,, maruti,,

Gunny got up he wasn't actually hurt,, the driver seemed to be driving at a speed of 2 km per hours ,,,all the same he was too angry,,

"I would like to be introduced to this stupid person who want's to kill an already dying man" gunny positively shouted ,,a shivering figure emerged out of the car,,, and gunny found his mouth hanginmg open,, he couldn't believe his eyes ,, he couldn't believe what he was saying,,,his shock was clearly reflected in the girl's eyes too,,,

Then she said in her exeptionaly soft viose that gunny knew only too well…

Gunny thought of saying no and then yes ,, he wasn't too aware of his body at that moment,,,

He didn't even notice raj nudjing hgim continuously in his ribs,,,

Raj shook his head and then decided to take up the matter in his own hands,,

So he advanced towards the girl,,,

Raj==I think he is fine,, bt what r u doing at this time of night vidya??

Vidya==sorry bro I was just ,,actually I was ,,I was only,,

Naveen==calm down vidya,,raj don't scare her like tht,,

Vidya==I was just too nervous abt the driving test tomorrow for my liscence ,,I had a bd dream in which I knocked the instructer by banging into him,,,so I was just prctising,,

Raj==impossible u become sometimes just like gunny

Gunny==hey what have I got to do with this,,

Naveen==ok vidya ! will u give us a ride back to kma,,,

Gunny==hey hey wait its only 5 more miles na ,lets complete our jog,,

Raj and nveen both stared at gunny with complete disbelieving expressions on their faces

And then raj said firmly=="u'll drive gunny"

Raj and naveen both sat behind which meant both gunny and vidya had to sit in front,,

Gunny started the car bt he was finding it to difficult to drive ,his hand shaking,, so it was no surprise when gunny reversed instead of going forward and banged the car into the nearby tree,,

Raj==gunny I'll kill u!!!!!!

And with this gunny opened up his eyes and stared blankly at the icu room ceiling above,,,thinking only of that one girl which has resided continuously in his dreams 4 so long…

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i know friends its a short part bt 4give me 4 ir

i hope u enjoy it!!

love

dolly

Edited by dolly18 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh i will kill u Dolly for this too short update but u have survived because of this hilarious and interesting update...very well written dear....entry of Vidya was too good..convo were damn hilarious..faaaaabulous update dear....thankuuu sooooo much for this marvelous part..excellent... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was hillarious............but yaar too short....

plzzz make it big next time.......
dis part was very nice
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Posted: 17 years ago

hii dolu..

hey i read ur fic sach bahot maza aaya,tumne saare emo is main add kiye hai,i know maine bahot late comment kiya par yaar main bahot lazy hoo,aur padhane se bahot dur bhaagati hoo 😆 😆 but ab se har baar comment dene ki koshish karugi 😊 😊 awesome fic 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Hi,
Goodmornig to you !
i just catch your update it's really nice .Gunny is really very funny 😆 😆 😆 Raj is as always is cute 😳 but this part is very short yaar & also a memory of gunny we want more RN yaar Naina kaha hai ??????????
jara uske bare main bhi to socho!
anyways nice part but next time it must be BIG one!
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOON WAITING FOR IT!!!

KEEP SMILLING 😃 KEEP WRITTING 👏

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