revision==
pg20==part-24(mein margaya???)
pg21==videos by simmu and me
pg23==promo(musical raju)
friends here is an important note==
,,the scene written in pinkish shade is the scene of ambala that is of raju and scenes in green r that of delhi ,lilawati hospital … it'll help u visiulize it easily
ff :izzharre ishq==PART=25
THE CALLS
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Raj ruffled his hair,,they were sticking to his temple due to sweat making him feel uncomfortable,,,
He sat on a chair and diled up jai's number….
9814984856
Raj allighned the mobile with his ear…the bell was ringing and it ringed on ,,
Raj==common pls pick it up pls gunny pick it up!!!
There at lilawati hospital==
(remember everyone has brought their mobiles in silent mode b4 entering the corridor, due too hospital instructions)
Naina kneeled down she could feel all her faith crashing down ,,all her theories were made instant lies by this one mere sight,,,,
And then then as if by miracle ….she noticed something abt the body ,,,,something no one else has seen,,,something that was the greatest relief to her
Something that proved that raj afterall did not lie to them
something that said Raj would fulfil his promise whatsoever!
She laughed ,laughed through her tears ,,looking towards the body ,the so called body of raj
Jai was too shocked at naina's reaction ,he turned naina towards himself and shook her
Jai==naina naina ,,what r u doing naina
Bt naina continued to stare towards raj's body and continued her mad laughter,,
Then regaining her senses she said through her smiles and tears to jai and all the others,,pointing towards the body
Naina==look look ,,its not him ,,yeh vo nahin hai,,I knew mujhe pata tha vo apna vada kaise tod sakte hain!!look pls look clearly
Huda (coming towards naina)==naina,,apne aapko sambhal ,,yeh capt sir hi hain ,,
Naina==nahi huda dekh dhyan se dekh,,,
the person lieing there is alive ,,
Everyone thought that naina had lost her sainity ,,
Bt still they looked again towards the glass partition ,
No one noticed anything
No one
Except ali,,,,
All the confusion was so overwhelming that jai didn't even notice his mobile vibrating silently 4 the third time ,as the person they all thought to b lieing b4 them dead ,,desperately tried contacting them……
Raj,,bringing his mobile down 4 the third time ,,looked towards suri ji ..
Raj==mein kya karun suri ji ,,
Jai phone bhi nhin utha raha
mein abhi delhi k liye nikalta hun ,,
Suriji==par putar vahan pahunchanne mein tujhe kam se kam 6 ghante lagenge,
Raj==aur koi chara nahin hai mere paas ,,
Suri ji abhi ka khayal rakhiyega pls!!!
And he turns to go.
Suri ji==rajveer
Rajveer stops and turns round ,,
Suri ji puts his hand over his head,,
Suriji==Beta khayal rakhna apna,,
Raj touches his feet,, and says
Raj==ab bahut galat ho chukka ,aur galat kuch nahin hoga,, vishwas rakhiye na apne putar pe…
Saying so he departs hurriedly……
There ali comes forward ,,besides naina and he smiles too ,,
Ali..==haan haan humne kaha than a raj sir ko kuch nahin hoga ,,dekhiye vo job hi insaan hai iske chest par vo black belts kitni tightly bandhi hui hain..takin uska saans lena hum dikh na sakein,,dekhiye…
It was only then that everyone noticed what ali nd naina were trying to point to them,,
Indeed they could make out a black mass tied very tightly to the body over its chest,, beneth the linen sheet..
There happiness knew no bounds ,,,,
Jai rushed inside the partition,, but was stopped by one of the armed personnels
Armed personnel==aap andar nahin ja sakte
Jai ==really!!!! U think u can stop me,,
He looked behind towards the other personnel ,,ud and ali were standing just ahead of him ,he gestured them to do as he ws going to do,,
And in another couples of seconds both the personnels were overpowered and lay unconscious on the floor…
Then ali and puja and jai rushed inside the room,,the wardboy tried to sneak bt was caught and given a good one n two by huda,,
Wardboy==ismein meri koi galti nahin hai..,, yeh to bade sahib ka order tha,,
Huda==Acha cha ,to tu banega humara gawah,, agar yahan se hila to yaad rakhiyo ,thare ghar valon ko thari lash bhi na milegi,,,,,
Huda felt his pants viberating ,may b someone was calling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Huda took out his mobile and switched it off ,without even once seeing the number ,,then he realeased the wardboy and handed him to ud,,
Raj threw his mobile on the side seat of his truck ,,in frustration,,
Raj==damm!! Pata nahin in logon ko kya ho gaya hai,Why r they not picking up the phone?,,,,
Stupid people,,
he picked up his mobile again and decided to try naina's no this time….
Bt a sharp turn made him almost loose his balance
The brakes screeched as raj tried his best to stop the truck and fortunately the truck stopped just on the brim of the side hill,,a little dist ahead lied his death,,bt he was safe,,,
He thought that he was panicking,,loosing his concentration,,he buried his face in his hands,trying too calm!!
The he raised his head and searched 4 his water bottle beneth the seats of truck ,he took a sip of the coolwater and poured the rest over his face,,,,
And then he started the engine of the truck again reversed and carried on,,,,
Naina was now standing behind the body,,such a nearness made them realizes that the person was not their rajveer,,bt someone who had been made to look like him,,naina discovered that the person was currently unconscious,, and was wearing a mask that made him resemble rajveer sir so closely,,
Naina instantly took out her mobil ,she won't let lala go easily out of this,, he'll pay back 4 it..
On seeing the display screen of her mobile she saw that some one was calling ,,,,it was a private no ,,,she picked up the phone,,,
Hellow!!!!
Raj was abt to answer when suddenly a motorcyclisit came in front of him from nowhere ,,raj rotated the steering wheel in left dirction quiete severely , to save himself from a collision,, in this happening his mobile phone fell to the floor and got disconnected,,,,……………..
Naina was quite surprised at getting no reply ,bt there were more important matters at stake,the mystery of this caller can ofcourse wait,,
She dialed up the no of her delhi headquarters and talked to one of there team members,,capt aamir bashir,,she informed him abt the incident of the hospital ,and asked him to reach the hospital with back up,,then she called up her journalist friend roma ,,and askd her to reach the spot as soon as possible,,,
Raj dialed up naina's no again after regaining control of the truck ,bt the line was coming engaged ,,,,,,
Raj==damm,,god pls help ,aap yeh kya kar rahe hain?? Aisa kyun kar rahe hain??
Naina finished her calls then went to dr shalini
Naina==mam is insan ka mask humne utar diya hai ,yeh rajveer sir nahin hai ,,mam iska check up kijiye ,pls make sure that this person is fine ,he is very impportent,,
Shalini==haan I'll take care of him,,
They heard footsteps coming towards there direction
All of them were too sure that this was definitely not something good,,
Gunny stepped forward,,
There were three more armed personnel,ud ,naina ,allekh ,huda and gunny were enough 4 them ,,
they easily overpowered them
Bt the situation was unlikely to remain in there control for longer,,
There 15 minutes were over,,they wished with there every breath that there team backup soon arrives……
Hudaa was currently buzy in giving instructions to aamir,,,,
So amidst all this it was very genuine 4 them not to notice there mobiles viberating ,,
Raj was clearly frustrated now,well much more then frustrated ,bt he still persisted 4 one last try,,,
And he dialed up jai's no
9814984856
Jai felt his mobile viberating 4 the uptenth time,
He was clearly frustrated at this caller,,,
Bt he picked up the phone
Jai==hello kaun hai??
Raj ==gunny mein raj gunny I am alive!!
Jai froze in his tracks bt perhaps he froze too long ,,the next moment the corrider ringed with his shriek ,he was hit by a bullet that grazed past right over his shoulder,,,
His mobile phone fell from is hands onto the floor and divided into two parts,,,,
Raj==(who had quiete clearly heard jai's scream)
gunny gunny ,,r u alright ,,gunny ,,hellow !!!!
But the line was disconnected
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>well I know this one is not a longer part bt I am really really busy right now
And sory 4 delay in updating….
I hope u guys like it
Lots of love
dolly😳
Edited by dolly18 - 17 years ago