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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

ya vo to hai

aur mujhe mera 83 rdheart attack bhi mil gaya

bo pehle k 82 humeshan raju aur harry dete the

Not only raj and harry dolly , even i am included in ur 82 heart attacks . Right na ?????

Itni emotinal update !!!!! Balti le ke baithna pada . But i trust u and raj , na to tu use itni aasani se maar sakti hai aur na vo khud itni asaani se marega . I believe in u and raj doll . . . luv u

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

thanku yar

mere ko bhi lagta hai zyada hi emotional ho gaya

vaise next i am planning sana's murder

assasination mein mera saath dogi na

😆😆😆accha to tum ab rani k saath milkar mera murder ka plan bana rahi ho😆😆😆i m sure woh tumhaara saath zarur degi b/c woh mujhse bahot naraaz jo hai.

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Posted: 17 years ago
😆

Originally posted by: sanabmw

😆😆😆accha to tum ab rani k saath milkar mera murder ka plan bana rahi ho😆😆😆i m sure woh tumhaara saath zarur degi b/c woh mujhse bahot naraaz jo hai.

i don't know about rani but i am surley with her to kill you sana 😆 so when do we assasanate her😆

btw a very emotional update, my brother who was in my room writing my cv was calling me an emotional fool, i was like if you read this you'll cry as well so don't call me an emotional fool, so you know what he did he came to me with a hankercheif and wiped my eyes and said i don't want to die early, by the stream of tears you'll surely cause a flood 😆 how rude was that but he was right if i cause a flood it'll be your fault..... and btw i know you can't let raj die and raj won't die because we all believe in you and him.....so pleaseeeee update asap waiting for your update

take care 😃

yasmin

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: simar456

Not only raj and harry dolly , even i am included in ur 82 heart attacks . Right na ?????

Itni emotinal update !!!!! Balti le ke baithna pada . But i trust u and raj , na to tu use itni aasani se maar sakti hai aur na vo khud itni asaani se marega . I believe in u and raj doll . . . luv u

haan vishwas rakho

vo bhalle hi dunger bankar vapas aaye par vo aayega zarur

luv u too

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

😆

i don't know about rani but i am surley with her to kill you sana 😆 so when do we assasanate her😆

btw a very emotional update, my brother who was in my room writing my cv was calling me an emotional fool, i was like if you read this you'll cry as well so don't call me an emotional fool, so you know what he did he came to me with a hankercheif and wiped my eyes and said i don't want to die early, by the stream of tears you'll surely cause a flood 😆 how rude was that but he was right if i cause a flood it'll be your fault..... and btw i know you can't let raj die and raj won't die because we all believe in you and him.....so pleaseeeee update asap waiting for your update

take care 😃

yasmin

hai mar jawan

aapne bhai se kehna k agar flood aa gaya to unko atleast swim karne ka chance to milega

vaise i'll try my level best k is week update kar dun bt i am very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy busy

lekin

vishwas rakhna

and sana ka assaisination abhi kar dete hain tention hi kya hai

thnks 4 liking it😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
hi friends ,i finally updated my fic
i just hope u like it
love u all...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Ff:izharre ishq, part24==

MEIN MARGAYA????

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Scene 1==

Pakistan ishq headquarters==

Aslam==kya hua haider bhai hum sabko yahan aise kyun bulaya hai ,,aur aap aise

Aap theek to hain

Koi takaluf,

Nasreen==kuch hua kya

Hum sab ko batayiye to sahi hua kya hai,,

Gazal bhabhi itna ro kyun rahi hain

Haider sheikh==(taking a deep sigh ,and drying his tears uptenth time with his towel)

Aap sab ko yeh batanna zaruri tha

Kal Hindustan se huda bhai ka phone aaya tha

Nasreen==kya hua sab kheriyat to hai vahan

Rajveer bhai jaan ko koi takleef to nahin

Haide sheikh=do din pehle rajveer sahib ki ki….

Salim==kya hua..aaap batayein to sahi, humko ghabrahat ho rahi hai

Haider== vo vo ,,rajvver sahib humare beech ab ab nahin rahe hain,,

This pronouncement followed a deep silence only broken by the barkings of the stray dog outside the room

Aslam===kya mazak hai yeh

Aap hosh mein to hain

Haider==hum hum ne internet par bhi check kiya hai,India ki media ka latest case rajveer sahib ka encounter hi hai,har akhbaar mein vahan yahi news hai,us lala ne rajveer sahib ki maut ko bahut publisize karwa diya hai

Salim==aap jhooth bolte hain ,,yeh kaise ho sakta hai

Hum nahin mante

Bahut ghatiya mazak kar rahe hain aap humare saath…..

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Scene 2

Ambala::::::::::::::

The fog was engulfing him again and he was n't able to see anything right now ,, and then the fog slowly cleared and there he was,,, standing face to face with naina,,

It was the day when thy were playing eyefight

Everyone was deafeated and the final match remained b/w him and naina,,,

They looked in each other's eyes and looked and looked ,,

They keep on staring,and the time flew by without their even slightest notice and then naina blinked

She said,"mein haar gayi"

And he said,"nahi tum nahin …"

Bt his sentence was drowned in claps and cheers of other students ,,,,

The mist ,and the fog appeared again blurring his vision and now when the fog cleared he found himself standing beside her on the pt 1857

She was kneeling b44 th wishing pillar and praying silentely with her eyes closed and hands joined,

She was looking ever so beautiful ,in her white dress and pearl hangings

The wind was blowing and he didn't knew when naina's dupatta came blown to his face

He removed it ,,bt he could now only see fog and and white smoke allaround…

then it cleared for the third time and he saw himself sitting with naina on the bench at pt 1857

Naina==kitna achacha lag raha hai na yahan ,,yahan se jane ka man hi nahin kar raha,,

And he said==to cadet tum apni chaap is jagah par chodna chahati ho,,,,

Naina looked towards him with her beautiful ,ever so gorgeous eyes,,

He again said,'to aao mere saath"

And he took her hand in hand to end of the hill and shouted,"NAINAAAAA"

Naina=="RAJVEERRR"

And then they both looked at each other

And looked on,, till the fog came clouding his way again..

This time the fog gave him shivers as if the next time it clears he will find himself somewhere miserable ,the smoke was different this time it wasn't white any more but black,,,it seemed to him that he would suffocate in the darkness,,bt then the smoke cleared again..and how true his thinking was as when the fog cleared he was standing in front of naina..who was looking quiet terrified..

Afierce fight was going on,, other cadets were firing and firing.. they were in front as they intended to give him cover so that he could manage a last meet with naina and have time to run 4 it….

Her eyes ,her beautiful eyes were filled with tears

As she looked towards him

He said,''naina unhone mujhse mera sab kuch cheen liya ,mera dost ,mera imman ,mei izat

,mera…"

Bt he stopped here and looked quietly towards her ,wondering whether she understood what he meant to say in last??

His doubts were cleared the next second..

As then both of them were embracing each other in a tight hug,,,

It was the most painful and beautiful moment ever

Bt it didn't last long ,,

A sharp ferocious pain over his right elbow made him withdrew quickly from his embrace,,

Naina==sir aap aap theek to hain

And he said="mein mein theek hun ,,bye guys"

And he walked towards the jeep and started it, he gestured his last bye to naina and other cadets,

And then took a u turn from the spot,,,

He was just thinking abt where would he go?? when he saw flames bursting all around him..

He screamed and woke from his sleep……………..

His face was full of sweat ,,and his eyes wer streaming …..

A knock on the window ,distracted him ,he climbed out of his truck and faced an orderly..

Orderly rustam,"kya hua sardarji ?? aap cheekhe kyun?

He said,''tane mari aawaz sun gayi,,itni loudly bhi na chilaya tha mein"

Orderly,=="kya baat karte ho sardar ji,, mere ko to aisa laga jaise aapke peeche koi sher pad gaya ho"

raj=="oye khoteya mare peeche sher hi to pada hai, kma mein yeh saaman pahunchana hai,,phir un paani ki pipon ko badlana hai aur phir mujhe amritsar jaana hai,, lekin thari meherbani se mara sarra kaam thap ho gaya hai ,,mane ek baat bata ,tu jaan buj k to mare ko pareshan to na kar reha hai??"

Orderly=="kya baat kar rahe ho sardarji,, mein kyun aisa karunga,, andar cadets ki pehli drill chal rahi hai,,naya batch start ho raha hai na aaj ,,aur brigadier sahib k orders hain k kisi ko andar na janne diya jaye,,

raj=="thare tau ki to!!! Teen ghante ho gaye hain ,cadets ki drill; khatam nahin huyi,, bechare bache drill kar rahe hain k India gate bana rahe hain"

Orderly,==are sardaar ji ,ab ismein hum kya kar sakte hain?? Yeh lijiye aap utni der mein aaj ka akhbaar pad li jiye ..

He groaned bt thankfully took the newspaper,,,

He hadn't read the newspaper ,,for the past two days, nor had he heard any news and most important he hadn't even once talked to any body ,neither naina nor jai nor anyone else ,,he was too buzy and moreover he was reluctant right now to listen to their endless lecture on how he was being stupid,, he knew they won't acknowledge his going away from them .he first wanted to finish his work here at kma ,which was most important and then he would contact them,,,,,,

He didn't open the newspaper bt sat on the chair kept besides a rickety table near the checkpost of entrance to KMA..he was thinking abt his dream..

This dream wasn't knew to him,,he had months and months lived through these dreams,, bt he hadn't seen them for the last few days ,,,,that is why he was surprised on having seen his old nightmare again…..

His dreams would always start with beautiful moments of his life and then all the happiness would fell apart as he would again saw the worst memories of his life.

Like when he had to kill naveen,, when naina came to know reality of naveen's death or when he was court martialled ……………………….

He shook his head, and wiped his sweat with a greasy towel …..

He opened the newspaper,,, the first half didn't provide anything interesting ,,he straightened the paper on the creaking table ….

And he scanned through the articles on the page,,

And found his name in one heading ,

"capt rajveer singh shikhawat encounter case".and stopped …he was thoroughly shocked ,,so shocked that he didn't even listen to the orderly telling him that he was allowed to enter ….

He read the article in great hurry ,,bt he couldn't understand any thing,,so he took a deep sigh and read the article again,,this time a little slowly.

The article informed him ,,that he was killed last to last night when he tried to force an entry at delhi army headquarters ,it also revieled that his postmortem report said ,, he received three bullets in the abdomen region which resulted in his death on the spot,

Thoroughly shocked,, he laughed and said,

"great!! mein margaya aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala,, splendent"

He read the article further,,

It said that his body was to be buried in sant jyoti graveyard,,that evening,,,

Raj stopped reading further,,his laughing thoughts had vanished and a cold panic had striked him,,,

He now completely understood the deepness of the scandal being presented b4 him,,, he wanted to bang his head in the academy gate,,why didn't he contact jai ,naina or someone else when he got a new mobile number,,bt no he thought that he would first finish his work at kma here ,,,bt now just because of his one little foolish mistake ,everything was copmpletely ruined…completely..

There at delhi everyone must have been thinking that he was dead,,now that he was caught forcing an entry in headquarters there would be no chance of him getting a clean chit in his cases from the military judiciary.. until and unless he shows himself ,that is until and unless he surrenders,,

Which was not possible…..

Lala would now easily target others,,the traitor within them would provide him with enough information and evidence abt how he was helped by jai and his team in hiding..if raj's case was reopened again ,all the others could also face court martial because of him,,,,,

The only solution again remains is to show himself and admit that he wasn't helped by any of his friends…..

All in all lala ji has left him with no option then to come back and show himself…..

Raj folded the newspaper ,and put it in his pocket and hurried towards his truck,,

Orderly==sardar ji kahan chale??

Raj did not answer.. he started the ruck and drove to a lonely location ,,,he stopped the truck near an old hand pump and an abundant farm,,,

There was an old worn out shack in the middest of the farm ,,he went inside it,,,,,the small house was very shabbily equipped ,,,raj moved a creaking sofa aside and cleaned the floor of its dust ,,,,,there was a glass beneth,,he pressed its palm against the glass,,,the glass scanned his hands 4 his fingerprints..then it glowed and a trapdoor opened to the right of it,,, raj ,quickly replaced the broken sofa to its old place,,and climbed down through the trapdoor,,,down he passed a narrowcorridor,,its walls were having a dozen small cameras each…he reached a door,, entered the password,"ishq" in the small computed lock,,,

The door slid out of view,, he went inside ,,,,

Two people were present inside ,,

One was lieing unconscious on a bed ..and the other was completing some paper work ,,,

Raj hurriedly started removing his disguise,,,,

He removed his turban and fake beard and mustache and placed then on the table which was already piled up with great no of files,,

He frantically searched for his mobile,,,

The person doing the paper work got up and came near him and said

=="oye khoteya,, tu itna pareshan kyun hai,kma ka kam pura nahi hua kya??

Raj answered=="suri ji mein mar gaya, do din pehle"

Suri ji=="oye khoteya tu kya bakwas maar raha hai??'

Raj didn't reply bt threw the newspaper cutting ontu suri ji's feet,,,,

Raj==suri ji mera mobile kahan par hai?"

Bt apparently suriji were thoroughly shocked on seeing the article,,,and he didn't reply,,,,

Raj found his mobile lieing beneth the bed,, and picked it up…

Suriji==by god di kasam ,us lala ko to mein chodunga nahin..raj tu hun ki karenga??

Raj==jai kophone phir mein delhi k liye niklunga..

Suri ji==mein bhi tere saathe chalata hun,,

Raj==nahin suri ji agar aap bhi mere saathchallenge to abhimanyu ka khayal kaun rakhega??

And raj looked towards the unconscious person lieing in the bed,,,

Raj ruffled his hair,,they were sticking to his temple due to sweat making him feel uncomfortable,,,

He sat on a chair and diled up jai's number….

9814984856

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i finally updated yaar

With lots of love,,

Dolly

i just raed the article abt the attack by those donkey kasayis on our masum raju...i was really shocked thank god he is safe thank god

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome too good very nice part loved it immensely waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesome too good very nice part loved it immensely waiting for next asap.

thanks 4 liking yaar

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Posted: 17 years ago
oo god what a update yaar.u have potrait the whole update soo beautiful that i m feeling numb.u r such a great writer yaar.love the whole update.miiiiiiiiiiiindblowing update dear.thanku soo much for this ouuuuutstanding update.excellent.

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