RN ff kitana pyaar hai tumseNOTE 264 - Page 69

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz now only asap with long part.

Originally posted by: iqbal-pallavi

first of all i am really sorry i am again late in replying but what can i do i have alot of preperations to do for my exams and they're taking all my time anyways i logged on today and found your message and now i have read it and have one thing to say BRILLIANT but even that sounds like a little word anyways i just loved the part

sherry and raj's childish arguement was soooooo funny and shalini thinking that they were romancing i was laughing like mad at that part 😆 god knows how bad naina must be feeling now but i seriiously thought that sherry had it in for her now, she is a dead meat but i know that raj is too sweet he is not gonna do anything, and thank god he didn't otherwise how would naina and he get together 😳

i also loved alekh and huda's little arguement god huda is too full of himself, he always thought that he is the best looking out of all but yeh kya jaane humara kaidi bhi kuch kaam nahin i love alekh to bits, but hey where's neelu these day's bechara alekh akela par gaya hain inn nautanki ki beech main 😆 this is including naina and raj

and i could sense that naina is jealous hmmmm don't you think it's time that you leave that poor girl alone and give her what she wants which in her case is raj 😳 😉 i seriously feel sorry for her even though the person she loves sooooo much is in front of her he still seems to be far away, i just hope they get together soon 😳

and omg i just loved the part where naina and sherry were chatting about raj while he was watching cricket and everytime sherrry said something he reacts but then says it was the cricket match i was like typical boys but that part was soooooooooo funny 😆 and when he grabbed naina's hand under the blanket thinking that it was sherry's i was in stitches bechara ka haal bura hogaya tha and naina bless her again she probably hoped that he was meant to hold her hand but.............

anyways once again great update waiting for the next part eagerly so update soooooooon 😃

yasmin plzzz tum sorry mat kaha karo,i know k tum exam ki wajah se busy ho.tumhe ud acchi lagi thanx 4 this n yes u r right raj kabhi bhi kuch galat nahin kar sakata😳😳b/c he is so sweet😉😉aur bechaari naina ha use samajh hi nahin aaraha k use rahul ko dekhkar ho kya jata hai par ab kya kare pyaar hota hi aisa hai😉😉but u don worry sab thik ho jayega.thank u so much 4 long comment.😆😆😆

lots of love

sana.😛

😛part 26

sab bahar ground main apne goa jaane k plan ki baate kar rahe hai.

shalini:accha cadets main hum sab k tickets lekar aati hoo.
yudi:mem kya main aapke saath aa sakata hoo.
shalini:ofcourse cadet yeh koi puchne ki baat hai.

tabhi naina aati hai.

naina:mem stop..
shalini:naina kya hua tum bhi saath aa rahi ho.
naina:no mem woh main yeh bolane aayi thi ki main aap sab k saath goa nahin aarahi.
shalini:WHAT??/??😕😕
hooda:oye phoolan ab tu mana kyun kar rahi hai.😡
naina:woh ma baba k paas jane ka soch rahi thi.
pooja:par naina tu hamare saath chal na,ghar jakar kya karegi.
naina:nahin pooja mujhe ghar jaana hai.
ali:ha naina aap bhi chaliye na sab jarahe hai.
aalekh:thik hai naina tu jo chahe woh kar.
hooda:par qaidi tu bhi .
aalekh:nahin yaar woh nahin aayegi usne bola na.
naina:thanx aalekh.
shalini:ok cadet as u wish.

naina waha se chali jaati hai,aur aalekh uske paas jata hai.

aalekh:naina ruk.
naina:kuch kaam hai.
aalekh:apun janata hai tere bhejhe main kya chal raha hai ,aur sahi hai tu yeh sahi kar rahi hai.chal accha hai tere ko usse dur hi rahena chahiye.
naina:ha sayad tu thik bol raha tha,main hi galat thi.
aalekh:naina tu kal bhi galat nahin thi aur aaj bhi galat nahin hai,bas saala yeh time hi galat hai.
naina:accha sun tu sherry ko mat batana k main goa nahin aarahi warana woh...
aalekh:apun nahin bolega usko bas ab tu jayada soch mat.
naina:tum sab waha bahot enjoy karana aur neelu k saath zagada mat karana aur ha plzzz waha tu peena mat.
aalekh:ha baba teri sab baat maani par tu bhi ghar jakar khush rahena .
naina:thanx aalekh,tu hamesha mera saath deta hai.aur ha main bhi bahot khush rahugi.

naina ab yeh baat manne lagi hai ki woh rahul k baare main kuch jayada hi sochne lagi hai
jo sahi nahin hai na uske liye aur nahi sherry aur rahul k liye.isliye woh goa na jaaye to hi accha hai.

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shalini:helloo cadets accha hua aap sab yaha ek saath mil gaye.
yudi:koi problam mem.
shalini:ha bhi aur na bhi .
pooja:matalab
shalini:i mean hume tickets to mil gaye hai par ek problam hai.
hooda:kya .
shalini:hume ek ticket nahin mila hai.
aalekh:bole to apun k bhejhe main kuch aaya nahin mem.
shalini:woh kya hai na hum main se kisi ek ko yaha rukana padega b/c ek ticket next day ka hai.
ali:to ab hum kya kare.
sherry:aap bataiye mem ab kya kare.

CAN I SAY SOMETHING.

sherry:RK aao na dekho yaha ek bahot badi problam ho gayi hai.
raj:maine suna aur uska hal bhi soch liya.
hooda:to kab bataoge agale saal.😆😆
raj:jee nahin aaj hi batauga.
yudi:plzzz man bolo.
raj:main yaha ruk jata hoo b/c mujhe yaha kuch documents sign karane hai jo kal nahin hoge b/c kal sunday hai.
sherry:par RK.
raj:parwar kuch nahin waise bhi main waha nahin jaa sakata jab tak mere documents pure nahin aate.
hooda:to chalo ab koi problam nahin .
shalini:phir tum kaise aaoge rahul.
raj:dont worry DR.main aa jauga.
sherry:RK main bhi yahi ruk jati hoo,hum saath main goa jayege.
raj:no sweety tum jao meri wajah se tum kyun yaha rukogi,aur wese bhi main 2 din main aajauga tumhaare paas.
pooja:ha yaar ab maan bhi ja salman itana pyaar se bol raha hai.aur waisebhi woh aa jayega,kyun rahul.
raj:yes main zarur aauga.

saare goa jane k liye redy hote hai aur sherry raj k paas jati hai.

sherry:RK stop yeh sab kya tha jo tumne waha kaha.
raj: yahi baat to main tumhe subah se bolana chahata tha par tum mujhe akeli mili hi nahin.
sherry:tum sach main goa nahin aarahe.
raj:suno kma main ab koi nahin hoga i mean na abhimanyu aur nahi maj. nair aur mujhe nair k room ki talaashi leni hai jo main aasani se kar sakuga
sayad waha kuch saboot mil jaaye jo hamare kuch kaam aajaye isliye main goa nahin aaraha.
sherry:ohhh to yeh baat hai thik hai to tum apnaa kaam finish kar k jaladi goa aana ok.i hope tumhe kuch saboot mil jaaye.
raj: ok to tum ab jao packing karo waise tum sab ja kab rahe ho.
sherry:kal subah 6 baje.

next morning

shalini:come on cadets hum late ho jayege jaladi karo.
pooja:yes mem we r redy chale.
shalini:aur baki sab kaha hai.
sherry:woh saare all redy station ja chuke hai.
shalini:matalab hum late hai,,to hume jaladi jana chahiye.
sherry:mem ek miniut bas RK aa jaye mujhe usse baat karani hai.
pooja: lo woh aa gaya.
raj:ok to aap hume chod kar goa ja rahi hai.
sherry: aapne hi to kaha hai warana aapke bina hume waha accha nahin lagega.
shalini:how romantic rahul ...
raj: ok ab jao tum sab late ho rahe hai.
pooja:bye rahul.
raj:bye pooja.
shalini:ok rahul to hum chalate hai.
raj:aap sherry ka khayaal rakhna.
shalini:dont worry hum sherry ka acche se khayaal rakhege.

pooja aur shalini aage jaate hai aur sherry raj ko hug karati hai.

sherry:jaladi aana main tumhaara wait karugi.
raj: i will ,waise naina kaha hai nazar nahin aarahi.
sherry: jab main subah uthi to mujhe room main naina nahin dekhi, i think woh aalekh k saath station chali gayi hogi.kuch kahena hai usse.
raj: nahin.... kuch bhi to nahin bas good bye bolana tha.
sherry:woh main bol dugi ok bye take care.

raj wapas apne room main aata hai.aur use sureeji milate hai.

sureeji:are rahul tum yahi ho goa nahin gaye?
raj:ji woh kuch kaam tha main kal goa ja raha hoo.
sureeji:phir to tumhe aaj bhukha sona padega.
raj:kyun? aap aisa kyun bol rahe hai.
sureeji:woh kya hai na main ja raha hoo bahar to mess bandh hai.
raj:to kya hua hotel to hai na main waha jakar lunch kar sakata hoo.
sureeji: ha bhai yeh gal bhi sahi hai ,accha to main chalata hoo.

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station par saare aate hai.

sherry:hey naina kaha hai?
aalekh:woh nahin aayi.
sherry:WHAT?????
pooja:ha use to apne ghar jana tha .isliye usne goa ka plan delete kar diya.
sherry:par woh subah room main nahin thi aur kisine mujhe bataya bhi nahin.
hooda:woh kahin gayi hogi aur waise bhi woh kya karati hai ya kya sochti hai kisi ko nahin batati.
ali:aap jayada sochiye mat naina hai hi aisi ,agar woh nahin aana chahati to nahin aayegi.
sherry:par phir bhi ek dam usne mana kyun kar diya.
abhi:sherry naina ko apne ghar jana tha aur koi baat nahin hai.
shalini:yes cadet ab aap tenstion mat lo warana aap ka rahul mujhse naraz ho jayega.

next scene

raj subah apne room se bahar nikalata hai,aur kma se bahar jane lagata hai,tabhi use naina saamane nazar aati hai jo garden main akeli bethi hai.

raj:NAINA !!!!!!!!!!!!!! no lagata hai mera dimaag kharab ho gaya hai .woh yaha kaise ho sakati hai.😆😆

tabhi naina bhi raj ko dekhti hai.

naina:rahul yaha nahin lagata hai mera wahem hai na jaane main kya sochne lagi hoo.😆😆

dono yahi soch rahe hai k yeh unka wahem hai.aur jab dono paas aate hai to.

naina:rahul tum sach main ho ......i mean tum goa nahin gaye baaki sab k saath.😕
raj:AUR TUM....tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.😕
naina:woh main goa nahin gayi b/c mujhe ghar jana tha maa baba k paas.par tum yaha kaise?
raj:ha woh mujhe yaha kuch kaam hai woh finish kar k main kal subah jauga.
naina:par mujhe kisine bataya nahin k tum goa aaj nahin jaoge.
raj:tumne bhi to mujhe kaha bataya naina aur mujhe lagata hai sherry bhi yeh baat nahin janati thi right.
naina:ha sherry yeh baat nahin janati thi, woh maine hi sab ko mana kiya tha k use na bataye.
raj:waise kab ja rahi ho ghar.
naina:kal.
raj:ok bye mujhe kuch kaam hai main tumse baad main milata hoo.
naina:bye rahul.

aur dono ek dusare k opposite side jate hai.

naina:yeh kya ho raha hai jisse dur jane k liye main goa nahin gayi woh mere paas hi hai.meri kuch samajh main nahin aa raha kyun use yaha dekhkar mujhe accha laga.😳😳

raj:naina goa nahin gayi par kyun main jitana chahata hoo ki woh khush rahe utna hi woh akeli rahena chahati hai.par main use khush dekhna chahata hoo.😛😛

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in the train.

sherry train main window k paas chuchap bethi hai aur uske paas abhimanyu aata hai.

abhi:lagata hai aap rahul ko miss kar rahi ho?
sherry:ohhhh aap kab aaye sir ?
abhi:jab aap apne hi khayaalo main gum thi.
sherry:ha mera bilkul bhi dyaan nahin tha so sorry.
abhi: waise puchna nahin chahiye par aap aisa kya soch rahi thi.
sherry: bas aise hi kuch khaas nahin
abhi: hume lagata hai aap hum se ab bhi naraz ho
sherry: NO SIR aisa bilkul bhi nahin hai.
abhi:relex hum mazaq kar rahe hai.😉
sherry: main janati hoo papa galat hai aur main bhi yahi chahugi ki aap logo k saath jo kuch bhi galat hua hai woh sab phir se sahi ho jaye.
abhi: sherry hum sab ne i mean naina aur humne jo kuch bhi khoya hai woh ab hume kabhi bhi nahin mil sakata.😭😭
sherry: i know sir par phir bhi jiski wajah se khoya hai use agar saza mil jaaye to ek sukoon to milega hi.
abhi:hum nahin janate the ki aap aisi baate bhi kar leti hai.
sherry: yahi to problam hai log mujhe jane bina hi mere baare main apni rai bana lete hai.

PAR MUJHE TO TUM PEHALI MULAQAAT MAIN ACCHI LAGI THI.

pooja: sir main bhi aap dono ko join kar sakati hoo na.
sherry: aao na pooja waise bhi main bore hi ho rahi thi.
abhi:BOREEEEEEE.
sherry:no mera matalab aapse nahin tha sir .
abhi:hum janate hai sherry.
pooja: sherry rahul kab tak goa aayega.
sherry:rahul ne mujhe kaha tha ki woh kal aa jayega.
pooja:bas to kal sherry bahot khush ho jayegi kyun sir?
abhi:aur aap khush nahin hai aapka ali to aapke saath hai.
pooja:sir aap bhi kya baat kar rahe hai.aisa kuch nahin hai.
sherry:agar kuch nahin hai to tum aise saramaa kyun rahi ho.

abhi aur sherry dono pooja ko dekhkar hasate hai.

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raj kma se bahar aakar chobe ko phone karata hai.

raj:helloo chobe?
chobe:jai hind sir kahiye kya baat hai.
raj:suno mujhe tumse kuch kaam hai kya tum yaha i mean ambaala main aa sakate ho.
chobe:sorry sir meri duty yaha hai aur waha aana Possible nahin hai.
raj: ok to mujhe batao tum kaha ho?
chobe:delhi main sir.
raj: ok to main aisa karata hoo main kal delhi aata hoo.
chobe: thik hai aap aa jao sir main aapka wait karuga.
raj:ok to hum kal milege.
chobe:jai hind sir.
raj:jai hind.

raj kma main aata hai aur naina ko mess ki taraf jaate dekhta hai.

raj:naina kaha ja rahi ho?
naina:wo mess main ja rahi thi, tumne lunch kar liya.
raj:nahin maine socha hai ki aaj bahar se lunch karu .tum chalogi.
naina: nahin tum jao main yahi lunch karugi.
raj: r u sure dekho phir baad main palat mat jana.
naina:nahin tum jao.

naina mess main jati hai waha koi nahin hai .

naina: sureeji...koi hai ?

naina orderly ko dekhti hai .

naina:sureeji kaha hai.
ordely: woh aaj se mess bandh hai .sureeji bahar gaye hai.
naina: KYAAA ??? oh no ab main kya karugi.
raj:waise main abhi tak lunch k liye gaya nahin hoo tum chaho to mere saath aa sakati ho.

naina peeche mood kar dekhti hai .

naina:to tum janate the ki aaj mess close hai.
raj:yes mujhe pata tha.to kya ab tum yahi sureeji ka wait karogi ya mere saath chalogi.
naina:ab aur koi opstion to bacha nahin hai to tumhaare saath hi jana padega.
raj:matalab main tumhaari last choice hoo.
naina:maine aisa kab kaha .
raj:kyun matalab to yahi hai na.
naina:no aisa nahin hai ab main tumhe kaise samjaoo.

naina(to her self): main jitana khudh ko tumse dur rakhna chahti hoo tum utana mere saamane aakar khade ho jate ho.
raj:hey!!! kya hua chale.
naina:ha chalo.par mujhe change karana padega.
raj:naina tumhe change karane ki zarurat nahin hai.
naina: what ab main kya in kapado main bahar jaugi.
raj: jiha b/c hum lunch k liye jaha ja rahe hai waha kuch bhi chalega.
naina: aisi kaunsi jagah lekar ja rahe ho tum?
raj: tum chalo sab pata chal jayega.

next scene

shalini:hey pooja kaha gayi ali.
ali:mem woh sherry k paas hai woh dekhiye.
aalekh:yaha koi uska single pakad nahin raha isliye waha chali gayi.😆😆
neelu:aalekh tum bhi uski tarah baate karane lage.
hooda:ha to ab kya karega tum jo nahin thi bechaara teri yaad main.😳
neelu:accha sach aalekh.tumne mujhe itanaa miss kiya.😳
aalekh: nahin tere ko aur miss zara bhi nahin.😃
yudi:hey chif tum meri sis se juth nahin bol sakate ok.
aalekh:accha agar main yeh kahu k bahot miss kiya to tujhe hi bahot bura lagega.
neelu:accha to tum bro k darr se juth bol rahe ho.😆😆
hooda:hahahaha qaidi aur is yudi se darega.
yudi:hey hooda tujhe kya lagata hai mujhse koi darata nahin kya.😆😆
shalini: cadet yeh to acchi baat hai na k tumse koi darata nahin b/c tum itane sweet jo ho .
yudi: kya mem aapne mujhe sweet kaha ohh thanx.😳😳
ali:lo ab to yeh bhi gaye hume laga tha sayad yeh toda gussa karege par mem k aage to yeh kuch bol hi paate nahin.

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raj naina ko apne room k paas lekar aata hai.

raj:chale.
naina: hum yaha lunch karege.
raj: ha kyun accha nahin laga.
naina: nahin aisi koi baat nahin par khana kaha hai.
raj:andar aao woh bhi aa jayega.

naina raj k saath room main jati hai jaha pehale se khana table par laga hua hai.

naina:rahul yeh sab tumne kab order kiya.
raj: order nahin kiya main khudh jakar laya hoo.
naina:tum mere liye bhi khana laaye.
raj:ha subah sureeji mile the to unhone mujhe bataya tha ki woh bahar ja rahe hai,to ab main tumhe kaise bhul sakata tha.
naina:pata hai kabhi kabhi tum bilkul meri samajh main nahin aate.😕
raj:main to kabhi kabhi nahin aata par tum to aaj tak meri samajh main nahin aayi.😆😆
naina:kya matalab.😕
raj:matalab ko chodo lunch karate hai.

naina table par dishes dekhti hai.

naina:palakpaneer,dumaaloo aur malaikoramaa yeh sa..
raj:i hope yeh sab tumhaare fav ho.
naina: yes i love this food.
raj:to suru karo na.

raj aur naina dono lunch kar rahe hai.

naina: pata hai bhaiya ka fav food hai yeh woh jab bhi ghar aate the maa unke liye yeh sab banati thi.aur ek main thi jiske liye kabhi koi khaas cheez nahin banai jaati thi.
raj: to tumhe kya accha lagata hai.
naina:main sabkuch kha leti hoo but my fav chole bhature .
raj: accha .aur kya pasand hai tumhe.
naina:are woh to bahot lambi list hai.tum batao tumhe kya accha lagata hai.
raj: raajama chawal.
naina:hey woh to mera bhi fav hai,hum aisa karege aaj dinner main wahi khayege.
raj:dinner?😕
naina:ha lunch tum laaye na to dinner meri taraf se,ab plzzz mana mat karana .aur ha woh hum kma main nahin khayege.
raj: to phir kaha?
naina:dhaabe par 😆😆
raj: what???😕
naina:ha tumne to kabhi waha khana nahin khaya hoga ,ek baar try karana bahot maza aayega.
raj:par naina.
naina:no parwar waise bhi tumne mere liye aaj tak bahot kuch kiya hai now is my turn.
raj: to tum use mera ehsaan samajhti ho,jise tum aaj mujhe dinner par le k jakar utaarana chahti ho.
naina:nahin rahul aisi koi baat nahin hai,tum galat samajh rahe ho.
raj: naina tum itani jaladi serious kyun ho jaati ho main mazaq kar raha hoo.
naina:tum bhi na hamesha aisa hi karate ho kab kya bolate ho meri samajh main nahin aata.
raj:yahi to problm hai meri mujhe tumse baat karani nahin aati.
naina: main ek baat kahu,tum mana to nahin karoge.
raj: kya ?
naina:tum mere saath ambala dekhne chaloge . i mean tumne to dekha nahin hoga ,
to main tumhe yaha ki jagah bataugi.bolo chaloge mere saath waise meri company itani buri nahin hai.

raj naina ki baat sunkar muskurata hai.

raj(to him self): naina tum bhi na main yaha sabkuch dekh chuka hoo par phir bhi tumhaare saath zarur aauga b/c tum jo hogi saath
aaj main ambala tumhaari nazaro se dekhuga tumhaare saath har jagah mere liye special hogi.😳😳😳

naina:kya hua chaloge na mere saath.?
raj:tumhe kaise mana kar sakata hoo ,ok hum chalege.par kab.
naina:shaam ko thik 5 baje,redy rahena ok.ab main chalati hoo thanx 4 lunch.

naina raj k room se bahar nikalati hai

naina:yeh kya kiya maine jab maine socha tha ki main usse dur rahugi phir main aisa kaise kar sakati hoo,
par kyun main usko dekhkar apne us wada ko bhul gayi jo maine apne aap se kiya tha ,kya ho raha hai hai mujhe,main usse pyaar karane lagi hoo.ya woh sirf mere liye ek dost hai.

end of part 26😛😛

wow!!! loved it!!

I was so happy to see both by co-incidence RN remained back in KMA... 😃

Yaar next part plz add more or RN sceens...

Jaldi update karo!!

😉

Excelent sweety,1nce again u rocked sana, the part in which both RN cant believe their eyes tat itz them is realy superb 👏 ,(dono yahi soch rahe hai k yeh unka wahem hai.aur jab dono paas aate hai to.)this part of u'r dialogue is simply superb,

The part in which RN ka woh khana scenez splendid 👏

A complete hatz off 2 u Sana dear 👏 ,
waitn 4 the next,

All the best sweety 4 the next part 👏 😊

u hav realy written splendidly gr8 Sana,


Aarthi

it was very good part...

loved it......

a proper mix of both rn n others..

too..good......

Originally posted by: sweetcandle

wow!!! loved it!!

I was so happy to see both by co-incidence RN remained back in KMA... 😃

Yaar next part plz add more or RN sceens...

Jaldi update karo!!

😉

thanx so much 4 ur comment ,aur rahi baat RN ki to next ud ka wait karo.😳😳n i us soon.

awesome too good loved it very much 😳 waiting for the part when naina will know about raj and plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do update soon asap.

kya plan hai tumhara rn ko akela chodneka.wow you are superb. 👏 .this is for you.accha likhne ke liya to sabhi tumhari tarif karte hai.but ye tha accha suspense create karne ke liye.anyways carry on.bcoz jitna zyada suspense hoga utna hi ye ff lamba hoga.i luv it.so karte raho.